Jian Mo is a home girl who is lazy and rotten.
Xiaomi is a system that is dull and blunt.
As a senior otaku, Jian Mo said that it was easy to win the mission target, and she could also travel for free. She was so happy! ! !
Regarding the above, the system Xiaomi is scratching the wall, you take away the simple ones and leave all the complex ones to me. Host, can you be more shameless and more despicable?
Jian Mo took out her ears, spread her hands and said, they are all on the same boat, why do you care so much, besides, this is all for you! Holy Mother's Halo N+1…
Xiaomi,…
This is a time-travel journey where a lazy host meets a joyful system, and together they move towards beauty (ken), full (die), happiness (ku) and happiness (bi).
O(╯□╰)oEveryone is welcome to step in!
Come and collect it!
Although the author is slow to update, he guarantees that there will be no mistakes. Your click-through rate is my motivation!
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Reader comments
[Shiran Writing Forum] After reading your article, I can tell that it must be your first time writing, otherwise you would not have made some common sense mistakes.
For example, typesetting, use of punctuation marks, plot design, etc.
Generally speaking, when the number of typesetting words reaches three lines, a new paragraph must be added. This is done so as not to cause visual fatigue to the readers.
In terms of punctuation, I saw that some places have quotation marks opening but not closing, and there are also some places where symbols overlap or are used incorrectly.
In terms of plot, the first chapter is the most important part of a book, but the first chapter of this article does not develop conflicts or anything like that. What is even more confusing is that the first few lines of dialogue directly throw the reader into the fog, and have no idea what it is doing. The story in the opening chapter must be concise and clear, so that people have a clear feeling after reading it. If you want to deepen the connotation, you can do it in the middle and late stages of the article, after the characters have formed a sufficient sense of involvement.
Generally speaking, the author should be able to correct the typography and punctuation easily, but the plot setting needs to be studied more!
Note: The above comments are for reference only, please correct me for any deficiencies!
This position is so good. . .
Damn, when will it be updated?
Please update. What are you doing?
Dad, you are finally back
I like it so much~^O^ Please write more~
Darling, you must do what you say. We will always be like our first love to you.
Darling, you must do what you say. We will always be like our first love to you.
Damn, please don't stop updating, please●●
Can I add more updates today? Please take good care of your health.
Can I add more updates today? Please take good care of your health.
Can I add more updates today? Please take good care of your health.
Please let me go (crying) Today is not the sofa, I'm not happy
When I saw Jian Mu talking about missing home, I vaguely felt something, big, □□. It feels like Jian Mu's mentality is a little tired, fed up, and feels so distressed.
Isn't this article finished? Favorability is declining...
Looking at the comments about Chapter 59 from two years ago and two days ago... Sigh
Finally updated
I almost couldn't follow the plot, so I went back and started masturbating again.
Damn, I mentioned the wrong chapter before. I didn't understand this chapter.
You must not stop updating, keep up the good work, it must be long-lasting! ! !
[Shiran Writing Forum] After reading your article, I can tell that it must be your first time writing, otherwise you would not have made some common sense mistakes. For example, typesetting, use of punctuation marks, plot design, etc. Generally speaking, when the number of typesetting words reaches three lines, a new paragraph must be added. This is done so as not to cause visual fatigue to the readers. In terms of punctuation, I saw that some places have quotation marks opening but not closing, and there are also some places where symbols overlap or are used incorrectly. In terms of plot, the first chapter is the most important part of a book, but the first chapter of this article does not develop conflicts or anything like that. What is even more confusing is that the first few lines of dialogue directly throw the reader into the fog, and have no idea what it is doing. The story in the opening chapter must be concise and clear, so that people have a clear feeling after reading it. If you want to deepen the connotation, you can do it in the middle and late stages of the article, after the characters have formed a sufficient sense of involvement. Generally speaking, the author should be able to correct the typography and punctuation easily, but the plot setting needs to be studied more! Note: The above comments are for reference only, please correct me for any deficiencies!
This position is so good. . .
Damn, when will it be updated?
Please update. What are you doing?
Dad, you are finally back
I like it so much~^O^ Please write more~
Darling, you must do what you say. We will always be like our first love to you.
Darling, you must do what you say. We will always be like our first love to you.
Damn, please don't stop updating, please●●
Can I add more updates today? Please take good care of your health.
Can I add more updates today? Please take good care of your health.
Can I add more updates today? Please take good care of your health.
Please let me go (crying) Today is not the sofa, I'm not happy
When I saw Jian Mu talking about missing home, I vaguely felt something, big, □□. It feels like Jian Mu's mentality is a little tired, fed up, and feels so distressed.
Isn't this article finished? Favorability is declining...
Looking at the comments about Chapter 59 from two years ago and two days ago... Sigh
Finally updated I almost couldn't follow the plot, so I went back and started masturbating again.
Damn, I mentioned the wrong chapter before. I didn't understand this chapter.
You must not stop updating, keep up the good work, it must be long-lasting! ! !