She is a person.
But because of Yama's mistake in writing, he died and wandered in the world.
He went to the temple for the tenderness of the handkerchief, but...
He is a demon, and he is supposed to dominate the demon world.
But just because of those autumn eyes, he actually has a human heart,
When everything is destroyed, what is gained is...
He is a god who is supposed to have no compassion, no love, no desire,
But just because of that startling glance, I could see through the autumn water and travel across mountains and rivers.
I just want to go through hundreds of calamities for the one I love, but...
Intention:
Reader comments
Jiongjian once wrote that Lu Xiuwen was puzzled that when the leader died and his head was cut off, the left guardian Wei Wuyou's internal strength had not recovered. When he contacted Lu Xiuwen again, he was asked whether Guardian Zuo would die. He was not sure in his heart, and at the end of the article, the corpse of the leader was rotting and his original appearance could no longer be seen. Thinking about the above, it seemed that he had deliberately left it blank. The leader might not really die, and Guardian Zuo might not be hopeless. The two of them might be able to start over.
Besides, if the leader was really ruthless at the beginning, how come Wei Wuyou's first accident happened and he lost his internal strength but was not eradicated and even became the left protector. As for the second surprise - Lu Xiuwen, it would not be difficult for the leader to kill him, and he might not have to test the medicine. Moreover, the people who tested the medicine all died tragically, so why was Lu Xiuwen the only one to survive? In the beginning, I only really accepted Lu Xiuwen as my disciple because I was afraid that he would follow his own path, but I didn't expect that things in the world are unpredictable. Now, when he was really faced with Lu Xiuwen shouldering everything for another person, the leader's heart was not without fluctuations, so he deliberately spared his life. As for the future, it all depends on God's will.
When he was about to die, all of Wei Wuyou's hatred dissipated, and he only thought in his heart that if he had fallen from the cliff, they would still be in love with each other, and they would not have to end up with the lie exposed and the sword drawn at each other.
After fighting for so many years in life, they were finally reunited before death. It was not too late. Wei Wuyou still loved him, even though the man was so heartless and indifferent.
Therefore, the author's ending is too good... Too good to be true. According to the trap's formula, the two of them are bound to be entangled for many more years, and it will be another story about him loving him, not loving him, and being heartbroken, but falling in love with him.
The content is monotonous and a bit cluttered. But originality needs support
Author's reply:
Whether it is monotonous or messy cannot be understood at a glance!
- Love at first sight.
- So yearning.
Isn't it Jun Yanmo who is sick? There was no explanation, how come it was Jun Yumo who died. This family is miserable enough.
I think the twist in this chapter is not ideal. Author's reply:
First of all, thank you to this reader for your comment. Secondly, I also like to read ten lines at a glance, but this is a short story. I have already written it at the beginning. The negligent judge remembered the wrong name. Although the sick person is my sister, the name in the book of life and death is my sister's. Please read the foreshadowing!
In addition, this short story is not messy, and the plot is mysterious and mysterious, which is my pursuit. Surprisingly, I did not expect to be shortlisted for the short story. What is even more surprising is that I did not have any expectations. This is the second work after the first work. I want to improve. Whether it is the setting of the plot, the setting of human nature, and the modification of diction, how to best integrate the three in one article is my pursuit!
- Goodbye Qingxin.
- No matter how you say it, it looks beautiful.
- Puppet.
- Being manipulated by others has no freedom, no love and no heart.
- Pitian is so pitiful.
Send flowers~ Great cheers and update~
杨戬帅帅哒，舔杨戬脸摸狗崽子屁股
In order to celebrate that this article can finally be displayed and updated on JJ's homepage, score yourself^_^
Khan~~~~~~~~You may ask - don't updates usually show up?
I have experienced website freezes several times. When I updated several times, I did not see the homepage displayed. The administrator even said that it would be displayed after an hour, but today it was displayed in one minute. Haha, I am very happy. It is finally displayed once^_^
I finally finished reading it. I felt that the beginning was very good, but towards the end it became a bit weak and not very interesting. If I could stick to it, it would be better. Then how to get extras? ~ Go to Weibo to send a private message to your ID?
Jiongjian once wrote that Lu Xiuwen was puzzled that when the leader died and his head was cut off, the left guardian Wei Wuyou's internal strength had not recovered. When he contacted Lu Xiuwen again, he was asked whether Guardian Zuo would die. He was not sure in his heart, and at the end of the article, the corpse of the leader was rotting and his original appearance could no longer be seen. Thinking about the above, it seemed that he had deliberately left it blank. The leader might not really die, and Guardian Zuo might not be hopeless. The two of them might be able to start over. Besides, if the leader was really ruthless at the beginning, how come Wei Wuyou's first accident happened and he lost his internal strength but was not eradicated and even became the left protector. As for the second surprise - Lu Xiuwen, it would not be difficult for the leader to kill him, and he might not have to test the medicine. Moreover, the people who tested the medicine all died tragically, so why was Lu Xiuwen the only one to survive? In the beginning, I only really accepted Lu Xiuwen as my disciple because I was afraid that he would follow his own path, but I didn't expect that things in the world are unpredictable. Now, when he was really faced with Lu Xiuwen shouldering everything for another person, the leader's heart was not without fluctuations, so he deliberately spared his life. As for the future, it all depends on God's will. When he was about to die, all of Wei Wuyou's hatred dissipated, and he only thought in his heart that if he had fallen from the cliff, they would still be in love with each other, and they would not have to end up with the lie exposed and the sword drawn at each other. After fighting for so many years in life, they were finally reunited before death. It was not too late. Wei Wuyou still loved him, even though the man was so heartless and indifferent. Therefore, the author's ending is too good... Too good to be true. According to the trap's formula, the two of them are bound to be entangled for many more years, and it will be another story about him loving him, not loving him, and being heartbroken, but falling in love with him.
作为强迫症患者，在看文之前一定要先搞明白一个问题，不然无心看文啊！ 那就是——为什么第二部竟然比第一部先发文啊啊啊啊！ 我看到第一部是13年的，第二部反倒是08年就有了，顿时觉得脑海里一阵纠结TAT
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The content is monotonous and a bit cluttered. But originality needs support Author's reply: Whether it is monotonous or messy cannot be understood at a glance!
- Love at first sight. - So yearning.
Isn't it Jun Yanmo who is sick? There was no explanation, how come it was Jun Yumo who died. This family is miserable enough. I think the twist in this chapter is not ideal. Author's reply: First of all, thank you to this reader for your comment. Secondly, I also like to read ten lines at a glance, but this is a short story. I have already written it at the beginning. The negligent judge remembered the wrong name. Although the sick person is my sister, the name in the book of life and death is my sister's. Please read the foreshadowing! In addition, this short story is not messy, and the plot is mysterious and mysterious, which is my pursuit. Surprisingly, I did not expect to be shortlisted for the short story. What is even more surprising is that I did not have any expectations. This is the second work after the first work. I want to improve. Whether it is the setting of the plot, the setting of human nature, and the modification of diction, how to best integrate the three in one article is my pursuit!
- Goodbye Qingxin. - No matter how you say it, it looks beautiful.
- Puppet. - Being manipulated by others has no freedom, no love and no heart. - Pitian is so pitiful.
Send flowers~ Great cheers and update~
杨戬帅帅哒，舔杨戬脸摸狗崽子屁股
In order to celebrate that this article can finally be displayed and updated on JJ's homepage, score yourself^_^ Khan~~~~~~~~You may ask - don't updates usually show up? I have experienced website freezes several times. When I updated several times, I did not see the homepage displayed. The administrator even said that it would be displayed after an hour, but today it was displayed in one minute. Haha, I am very happy. It is finally displayed once^_^
I finally finished reading it. I felt that the beginning was very good, but towards the end it became a bit weak and not very interesting. If I could stick to it, it would be better. Then how to get extras? ~ Go to Weibo to send a private message to your ID?