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Are you going to allocate Sister Lin to Zhen Baoyu? I don't know why I feel so conflicted? The ending of the Zhen family in the original work is also not good, and Zhen Baoyu's temperament is similar to Jia Baoyu's. I feel that she is not a good match for my sister. Can we change it to an original one? If that doesn't work, I'd rather train Jia Baoyu in a big way than marry Baoyu.
It's true that it's not that bloody, but it's still bad for Daiyu⊙⊙It's really bad to be remembered. The trees are beautiful in the forest, but the wind will destroy them (no). By the way, who does Xueyan look like? It's a taboo? The secrets of the previous generation, Mrs. What? (Enough)
No, is it possible that Daiyu's CP is really that Zhen Baoyu? That's too much. That's the Zhen family, not much better than the Jia family.
Who is my sister's Xipi? Are they characters from the original novel or original creations? So looking forward to it (⊙o⊙)
What's the meaning? Could it be that the royal family is also going to get involved? Is this a precursor to marriage? If the emperor really regarded the Lin family, Zhen family, etc. As confidants, it would be impossible to arrange a marriage between them. That would be a waste of resources. It should be more reasonable to marry other important ministers and families that the emperor wants to win over.
Xue Yan is from the Song family!
Is Daiyu getting married, okay~~~
Thank God, Daiyu finally doesn't have to marry a bad guy, whether it's true or not
(￣.￣) I just found an error and will correct it later. I am sorry and I hope the little angels don't mind.
If Yingchun hadn't fundamentally changed her character, she wouldn't have been able to marry anyone.
Character determines destiny. It is really difficult to change Miss Jia Er's fate in welcoming the spring.
Click to support the author, okay?
I want to know how many little angels like Baochai
Xueyan wants to get married, not wow π_π
Wow, the slave was sold like this, and Daiyu didn't move at all. . I've read a lot of heart-wrenching articles recently.
Zhen Rui, could you please make a side story @(一-一)@? Good!
TwinsT_TT_T
It really just ends. 0 0 I haven't watched it yet. . . Wasn't it said at that time that there were still 50,000 words left? The 50,000 words were here? ?
Xue Baochai is actually really good, everyone has his own frustrations.
Gently I leave, just as gently I came. Byebye.
Xue Yan is from the Lin Mansion and calls his young lady "girl". How come he is Miss Lin?
The author's pace is a bit slow. Let's unfold it quickly. Let's unfold it quickly.
Plus it's better, plus it's even better~ Do you want to come tomorrow~ By the way, didn't Baoyu change his temper? How can I return it? I despise it.
Xueyan, I have been watching Red Mansions for a long time. My feeling for Xue Yan is that she is small, childish, and innocent. The most profound thing is the time Aunt Zhao borrowed clothes. It can be seen that the little girl is quite smart.
According to the 120 chapters of the book, she was naive and ignorant in the early stage, but how could the Lin family let a young and ignorant girl serve their noble lady? But it is obvious that Xueyan did not exist after entering Jia's house. She only borrowed clothes once, competed in embroidery once, and the rest was when Baoyu got married. The so-called girl didn't care much, so she left in despair?
Everyone knows that Mr. Cao likes to use homophones or meanings to identify names. He uses a lot of words and ink on the maid, but he never focuses on describing the person Lin Daiyu serves personally. Why? Is there some secret that cannot be said, or a hidden story? Or maybe like Huan Bi in The Legend of Zhen Huan? Putting these aside, let's take a look at the author's description.
First of all, the title is well chosen, simple and straightforward, and anyone who is interested in Snow Goose will click on it.
Then let's talk about the beginning. I don't know why the author used such an opening. I don't usually write wedges when writing articles. Anyway, I usually don't dare to write small things, for fear of affecting my writing. The author's writing is not good. The title is clearly about the ancient saying Red Mansions, but when you click on the short-sighted Arabic numerals, and then a series of events, people can't help but want to skip or cross out. In fact, I think this wedge can be completely removed, but it's up to you whether to change it or not! I won't talk about the writing style that follows. It can be seen that the author is imitating the writing method of the original work. People say that deleting a word will make the number less, and adding a word will make more. If the imitation is not good, it will be like a fisherman, and people will not be able to integrate into it. It is better to be like ordinary ancient proverbs. It is comfortable for people to read, and it is also comfortable for you to write.
As for the content, the author has added a lot of stories and reduced a lot. I don't know how you connect these tasks together. Anyway, the pace seems slow. I have finished reading the last chapter, which is the 29th chapter that I have followed until now. Anyway, I have almost forgotten the previous ones. It felt like abuse at the beginning, but now it seems a little relaxed. I just eat wine and enjoy flowers every day and do nothing. Although the author keeps explaining it, I still want to ask, Lin Ruhai made people feel so weak at first. Why did he feel so dark and powerful when he was promoted to an official position and took Lin Daiyu back? I think the author's background is fictitious. It would be better to write about the Qing Dynasty. Otherwise, how can I write about the emperor? As for the aunt's poisoning mentioned above, I always feel that the author just mentioned it in one stroke, without any further details. Both Lin Ruhai and Jia Min behaved a bit strangely. One of them tolerated the other, but they still tolerated it. Although I didn't know it at the time, adultery was a serious crime. If you violated the rule of seven, your aunt died? That's it? The aunt's family didn't suspect that their daughter died in vain? There is also the Zhen family. I don't know if the author wants to whitewash it or something. Jia Baoyu and Zhen Baoyu look like that. How are you going to write it? Who is the male protagonist? Has it been released yet? Or maybe a female protagonist? This Xueyan sometimes behaves too stupidly. He doesn't have any sense of freedom and mental outlook of modern people. After passing through, he willingly accepts his fate? Or have you lost your ambition? I saw that the copywriting introduction said that the maid was promoted. Where is the promotion? ? ? Isn't it a pity that Xue Yan is so easily satisfied and just becomes a maid like this? Also, she obviously thinks that Jia Baoyu has changed for the better, but why is she like that again? It's simply intolerable! ! ! The most important thing is, why does our Qingwen have such a bad temper when she appears on the stage? ! !
Well, today is Saturday. It's my first time to write a long review. It's just a small complaint. Actually, I quite like this article. If the author writes bad things about our Qingwen, I'll beat you up.
Xueyan, I have been watching Red Mansions for a long time. My feeling for Xue Yan is that she is small, childish, and innocent. The most profound thing is the time Aunt Zhao borrowed clothes. It can be seen that the little girl is quite smart.
According to the 120 chapters of the book, she was naive and ignorant in the early stage, but how could the Lin family let a young and ignorant girl serve their noble lady? But it is obvious that Xueyan did not exist after entering Jia's house. She only borrowed clothes once, competed in embroidery once, and the rest was when Baoyu got married. The so-called girl didn't care much, so she left in despair?
Everyone knows that Mr. Cao likes to use homophones or meanings to identify names. He uses a lot of words and ink on the maid, but he never focuses on describing the person Lin Daiyu serves personally. Why? Is there some secret that cannot be said, or a hidden story? Or maybe like Huan Bi in The Legend of Zhen Huan? Putting these aside, let's take a look at the author's description.
First of all, the title is well chosen, simple and straightforward, and anyone who is interested in Snow Goose will click on it.
Then let's talk about the beginning. I don't know why the author used such an opening. I don't usually write wedges when writing articles. Anyway, I usually don't dare to write small things, for fear of affecting my writing. The author's writing is not good. The title is clearly about the ancient saying Red Mansions, but when you click on the short-sighted Arabic numerals, and then a series of events, people can't help but want to skip or cross out. In fact, I think this wedge can be completely removed, but it's up to you whether to change it or not! I won't talk about the writing style that follows. It can be seen that the author is imitating the writing method of the original work. People say that deleting a word will make the number less, and adding a word will make more. If the imitation is not good, it will be like a fisherman, and people will not be able to integrate into it. It is better to be like ordinary ancient proverbs. It is comfortable for people to read, and it is also comfortable for you to write.
As for the content, the author has added a lot of stories and reduced a lot. I don't know how you connect these tasks together. Anyway, the pace seems slow. I have finished reading the last chapter, which is the 29th chapter that I have followed until now. Anyway, I have almost forgotten the previous ones. It felt like abuse at the beginning, but now it seems a little relaxed. I just eat wine and enjoy flowers every day and do nothing. Although the author keeps explaining it, I still want to ask, Lin Ruhai made people feel so weak at first. Why did he feel so dark and powerful when he was promoted to an official position and took Lin Daiyu back? I think the author's background is fictitious. It would be better to write about the Qing Dynasty. Otherwise, how can I write about the emperor? As for the aunt's poisoning mentioned above, I always feel that the author just mentioned it in one stroke, without any further details. Both Lin Ruhai and Jia Min behaved a bit strangely. One of them tolerated the other, but they still tolerated it. Although I didn't know it at the time, adultery was a serious crime. If you violated the rule of seven, your aunt died? That's it? The aunt's family didn't suspect that their daughter died in vain? There is also the Zhen family. I don't know if the author wants to whitewash it or something. Jia Baoyu and Zhen Baoyu look like that. How are you going to write it? Who is the male protagonist? Has it been released yet? Or maybe a female protagonist? This Xueyan sometimes behaves too stupidly. He doesn't have any sense of freedom and mental outlook of modern people. After passing through, he willingly accepts his fate? Or have you lost your ambition? I saw that the copywriting introduction said that the maid was promoted. Where is the promotion? ? ? Isn't it a pity that Xue Yan is so easily satisfied and just becomes a maid like this? Also, she obviously thinks that Jia Baoyu has changed for the better, but why is she like that again? It's simply intolerable! ! ! The most important thing is, why does our Qingwen have such a bad temper when she appears on the stage? ! !
Well, today is Saturday. It's my first time to write a long review. It's just a small complaint. Actually, I quite like this article. If the author writes bad things about our Qingwen, I'll beat you up.
Is there something wrong with Xue Yan's life experience?
Qingwen was not born at home. . . . In the original work, Qingwen scolded Xiren because Xiren didn't even get a girl, but he called himself and Baoyu "us", "If I'm not there for a while, something will happen." Now that Xiren has become an aunt here. What does the author want to portray Qingwen like?
Unknown. What is CP that can be eaten?
Sister Lin, is she going to be assigned to someone she has never met? _?
It would be great to sleep together >_< By the way, how old is Daiyu now? Baochai is only 14 years old? Baochai is two or three years older than Baoyu (just two years old), and Baoyu is one year older than Daiyu. This is still certain. In fact, the age difference between Baochai and Daiyu is really big. The comparison between these two people is really wrong. Daiyu is 1 year old, Baochai is 4 years old, Daiyu is 10 years old, Baochai is 13 years old, Daiyu is 12 years old, Baochai is 15 years old, Daiyu is 16 years old, and Baochai is 19 years old. . . The difference between children and adults, everyone has no opinion on whether Baochai is still precocious. It really feels so fake, that is, Baochai just came to the Jia family and everyone loved Baochai. Can children and adults fight?
Are you going to allocate Sister Lin to Zhen Baoyu? I don't know why I feel so conflicted? The ending of the Zhen family in the original work is also not good, and Zhen Baoyu's temperament is similar to Jia Baoyu's. I feel that she is not a good match for my sister. Can we change it to an original one? If that doesn't work, I'd rather train Jia Baoyu in a big way than marry Baoyu.
It's true that it's not that bloody, but it's still bad for Daiyu⊙⊙It's really bad to be remembered. The trees are beautiful in the forest, but the wind will destroy them (no). By the way, who does Xueyan look like? It's a taboo? The secrets of the previous generation, Mrs. What? (Enough)
No, is it possible that Daiyu's CP is really that Zhen Baoyu? That's too much. That's the Zhen family, not much better than the Jia family.
Who is my sister's Xipi? Are they characters from the original novel or original creations? So looking forward to it (⊙o⊙)
What's the meaning? Could it be that the royal family is also going to get involved? Is this a precursor to marriage? If the emperor really regarded the Lin family, Zhen family, etc. As confidants, it would be impossible to arrange a marriage between them. That would be a waste of resources. It should be more reasonable to marry other important ministers and families that the emperor wants to win over.
Xue Yan is from the Song family!
Is Daiyu getting married, okay~~~
Thank God, Daiyu finally doesn't have to marry a bad guy, whether it's true or not
(￣.￣) I just found an error and will correct it later. I am sorry and I hope the little angels don't mind.
If Yingchun hadn't fundamentally changed her character, she wouldn't have been able to marry anyone.
Character determines destiny. It is really difficult to change Miss Jia Er's fate in welcoming the spring.
Click to support the author, okay?
I want to know how many little angels like Baochai
Xueyan wants to get married, not wow π_π
Wow, the slave was sold like this, and Daiyu didn't move at all. . I've read a lot of heart-wrenching articles recently.
Zhen Rui, could you please make a side story @(一-一)@? Good!
TwinsT_TT_T
It really just ends. 0 0 I haven't watched it yet. . . Wasn't it said at that time that there were still 50,000 words left? The 50,000 words were here? ?
Xue Baochai is actually really good, everyone has his own frustrations.
Gently I leave, just as gently I came. Byebye.
Xue Yan is from the Lin Mansion and calls his young lady "girl". How come he is Miss Lin?
The author's pace is a bit slow. Let's unfold it quickly. Let's unfold it quickly.
Plus it's better, plus it's even better~ Do you want to come tomorrow~ By the way, didn't Baoyu change his temper? How can I return it? I despise it.
Xueyan, I have been watching Red Mansions for a long time. My feeling for Xue Yan is that she is small, childish, and innocent. The most profound thing is the time Aunt Zhao borrowed clothes. It can be seen that the little girl is quite smart. According to the 120 chapters of the book, she was naive and ignorant in the early stage, but how could the Lin family let a young and ignorant girl serve their noble lady? But it is obvious that Xueyan did not exist after entering Jia's house. She only borrowed clothes once, competed in embroidery once, and the rest was when Baoyu got married. The so-called girl didn't care much, so she left in despair? Everyone knows that Mr. Cao likes to use homophones or meanings to identify names. He uses a lot of words and ink on the maid, but he never focuses on describing the person Lin Daiyu serves personally. Why? Is there some secret that cannot be said, or a hidden story? Or maybe like Huan Bi in The Legend of Zhen Huan? Putting these aside, let's take a look at the author's description. First of all, the title is well chosen, simple and straightforward, and anyone who is interested in Snow Goose will click on it. Then let's talk about the beginning. I don't know why the author used such an opening. I don't usually write wedges when writing articles. Anyway, I usually don't dare to write small things, for fear of affecting my writing. The author's writing is not good. The title is clearly about the ancient saying Red Mansions, but when you click on the short-sighted Arabic numerals, and then a series of events, people can't help but want to skip or cross out. In fact, I think this wedge can be completely removed, but it's up to you whether to change it or not! I won't talk about the writing style that follows. It can be seen that the author is imitating the writing method of the original work. People say that deleting a word will make the number less, and adding a word will make more. If the imitation is not good, it will be like a fisherman, and people will not be able to integrate into it. It is better to be like ordinary ancient proverbs. It is comfortable for people to read, and it is also comfortable for you to write. As for the content, the author has added a lot of stories and reduced a lot. I don't know how you connect these tasks together. Anyway, the pace seems slow. I have finished reading the last chapter, which is the 29th chapter that I have followed until now. Anyway, I have almost forgotten the previous ones. It felt like abuse at the beginning, but now it seems a little relaxed. I just eat wine and enjoy flowers every day and do nothing. Although the author keeps explaining it, I still want to ask, Lin Ruhai made people feel so weak at first. Why did he feel so dark and powerful when he was promoted to an official position and took Lin Daiyu back? I think the author's background is fictitious. It would be better to write about the Qing Dynasty. Otherwise, how can I write about the emperor? As for the aunt's poisoning mentioned above, I always feel that the author just mentioned it in one stroke, without any further details. Both Lin Ruhai and Jia Min behaved a bit strangely. One of them tolerated the other, but they still tolerated it. Although I didn't know it at the time, adultery was a serious crime. If you violated the rule of seven, your aunt died? That's it? The aunt's family didn't suspect that their daughter died in vain? There is also the Zhen family. I don't know if the author wants to whitewash it or something. Jia Baoyu and Zhen Baoyu look like that. How are you going to write it? Who is the male protagonist? Has it been released yet? Or maybe a female protagonist? This Xueyan sometimes behaves too stupidly. He doesn't have any sense of freedom and mental outlook of modern people. After passing through, he willingly accepts his fate? Or have you lost your ambition? I saw that the copywriting introduction said that the maid was promoted. Where is the promotion? ? ? Isn't it a pity that Xue Yan is so easily satisfied and just becomes a maid like this? Also, she obviously thinks that Jia Baoyu has changed for the better, but why is she like that again? It's simply intolerable! ! ! The most important thing is, why does our Qingwen have such a bad temper when she appears on the stage? ! ! Well, today is Saturday. It's my first time to write a long review. It's just a small complaint. Actually, I quite like this article. If the author writes bad things about our Qingwen, I'll beat you up.
Xueyan, I have been watching Red Mansions for a long time. My feeling for Xue Yan is that she is small, childish, and innocent. The most profound thing is the time Aunt Zhao borrowed clothes. It can be seen that the little girl is quite smart. According to the 120 chapters of the book, she was naive and ignorant in the early stage, but how could the Lin family let a young and ignorant girl serve their noble lady? But it is obvious that Xueyan did not exist after entering Jia's house. She only borrowed clothes once, competed in embroidery once, and the rest was when Baoyu got married. The so-called girl didn't care much, so she left in despair? Everyone knows that Mr. Cao likes to use homophones or meanings to identify names. He uses a lot of words and ink on the maid, but he never focuses on describing the person Lin Daiyu serves personally. Why? Is there some secret that cannot be said, or a hidden story? Or maybe like Huan Bi in The Legend of Zhen Huan? Putting these aside, let's take a look at the author's description. First of all, the title is well chosen, simple and straightforward, and anyone who is interested in Snow Goose will click on it. Then let's talk about the beginning. I don't know why the author used such an opening. I don't usually write wedges when writing articles. Anyway, I usually don't dare to write small things, for fear of affecting my writing. The author's writing is not good. The title is clearly about the ancient saying Red Mansions, but when you click on the short-sighted Arabic numerals, and then a series of events, people can't help but want to skip or cross out. In fact, I think this wedge can be completely removed, but it's up to you whether to change it or not! I won't talk about the writing style that follows. It can be seen that the author is imitating the writing method of the original work. People say that deleting a word will make the number less, and adding a word will make more. If the imitation is not good, it will be like a fisherman, and people will not be able to integrate into it. It is better to be like ordinary ancient proverbs. It is comfortable for people to read, and it is also comfortable for you to write. As for the content, the author has added a lot of stories and reduced a lot. I don't know how you connect these tasks together. Anyway, the pace seems slow. I have finished reading the last chapter, which is the 29th chapter that I have followed until now. Anyway, I have almost forgotten the previous ones. It felt like abuse at the beginning, but now it seems a little relaxed. I just eat wine and enjoy flowers every day and do nothing. Although the author keeps explaining it, I still want to ask, Lin Ruhai made people feel so weak at first. Why did he feel so dark and powerful when he was promoted to an official position and took Lin Daiyu back? I think the author's background is fictitious. It would be better to write about the Qing Dynasty. Otherwise, how can I write about the emperor? As for the aunt's poisoning mentioned above, I always feel that the author just mentioned it in one stroke, without any further details. Both Lin Ruhai and Jia Min behaved a bit strangely. One of them tolerated the other, but they still tolerated it. Although I didn't know it at the time, adultery was a serious crime. If you violated the rule of seven, your aunt died? That's it? The aunt's family didn't suspect that their daughter died in vain? There is also the Zhen family. I don't know if the author wants to whitewash it or something. Jia Baoyu and Zhen Baoyu look like that. How are you going to write it? Who is the male protagonist? Has it been released yet? Or maybe a female protagonist? This Xueyan sometimes behaves too stupidly. He doesn't have any sense of freedom and mental outlook of modern people. After passing through, he willingly accepts his fate? Or have you lost your ambition? I saw that the copywriting introduction said that the maid was promoted. Where is the promotion? ? ? Isn't it a pity that Xue Yan is so easily satisfied and just becomes a maid like this? Also, she obviously thinks that Jia Baoyu has changed for the better, but why is she like that again? It's simply intolerable! ! ! The most important thing is, why does our Qingwen have such a bad temper when she appears on the stage? ! ! Well, today is Saturday. It's my first time to write a long review. It's just a small complaint. Actually, I quite like this article. If the author writes bad things about our Qingwen, I'll beat you up.
Is there something wrong with Xue Yan's life experience?
Qingwen was not born at home. . . . In the original work, Qingwen scolded Xiren because Xiren didn't even get a girl, but he called himself and Baoyu "us", "If I'm not there for a while, something will happen." Now that Xiren has become an aunt here. What does the author want to portray Qingwen like?
Unknown. What is CP that can be eaten?
Sister Lin, is she going to be assigned to someone she has never met? _?
It would be great to sleep together >_< By the way, how old is Daiyu now? Baochai is only 14 years old? Baochai is two or three years older than Baoyu (just two years old), and Baoyu is one year older than Daiyu. This is still certain. In fact, the age difference between Baochai and Daiyu is really big. The comparison between these two people is really wrong. Daiyu is 1 year old, Baochai is 4 years old, Daiyu is 10 years old, Baochai is 13 years old, Daiyu is 12 years old, Baochai is 15 years old, Daiyu is 16 years old, and Baochai is 19 years old. . . The difference between children and adults, everyone has no opinion on whether Baochai is still precocious. It really feels so fake, that is, Baochai just came to the Jia family and everyone loved Baochai. Can children and adults fight?