You Are Inside the Book, I Am Outside the Book
你在书内,我在书外
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- 1
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- Danmei (BL)
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- 11y ago
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Conquer the Whole World! [Wearing Books]
How should I put it? I read it three times and I don't think it's abusive, because Gong doesn't like Shou at all. His attitude is that of an outsider experiencing life, and Shou even believes the rubbish of his junior sister, which makes Gong abused. How could such a person be with him? He will never be seen in the book or outside the book. It's good. After all, for Gong, this is just a dream, and he will gradually forget it as time goes by.
. . . A mouthful of glass shards
Ahhhhhhhh! Why is it 15 years old? I really want to continue watching it! Author!
It's been a long time since I finished the main article, and it's been a long time since I wanted to comment seriously. Let's talk about it. Mr. Jiu Yao is not familiar with me, but I am indeed an old reader of "Shenhuan". When I first started following it, there were only a few chapters, and then I joined V. At that time, I was young, didn't know much about it, and wasn't financially independent, so I read pirated articles. Later, the study tasks were heavy, and Jiu Yaojun's update date was unstable, so I didn't read it again for a long time. I finally registered a Jinjiang account and wanted to buy back the good articles I read back then. The first thing I thought of was that after searching, I found that it was not finished yet. I was very surprised. However, he just dives quietly, with such a personality. This is also the first comment I made in Jinjiang. In the field of online literature, "Shenhuan" is one of the rare novels that I can read over and over again, and it makes me feel really good every time I read it. When I was growing up, the broad world view, the twists and turns of the plot, the vivid contradictions and the rich characters left a deep impression on me, making me think and be moved. I love it and thank you for creating this world. So as a reader, please allow me to talk about my understanding of it: In terms of language, I am generally fluent, natural and increasingly sophisticated. Although there are sometimes some strange and empty wordings, the abruptness of the characters' language, and the relative verbosity in the early stage, the overall shortcomings are not concealed, and the light narrative gradually becomes relaxed and relaxed. There are no iconic warnings, but there are some particularly capable words in the wonderful chapters. Sometimes just a simple repetition of emphasis made me read it several times, and I felt really immersed in the atmosphere at that time. Although the setting of the spell is purely Bingli's second choice, Fuylin also said that it is redundant and not beautiful, but it does look handsome while metaphorically setting the background. The character creation can be described as successful. There are more than ten main characters, large and small, and there are also many supporting characters worth mentioning. Read a novel: Ke'er, Wangqing, Yiyu, Yiguang, Xisi, Zhanlei, Ruide, Dingdong, Dongxiao, Fengya, Bingli, Fulei... When I read these names, they are not symbols to me. I know their stories, understand their joys and sorrows, and respect their positions, their truths and struggles, their persistence and wishes. They change and I see different sides of them. As they walked, I experienced the tricks of fate with them, holding firm, hoping or praying for a miracle. Psychologically, they are just humans. But because of my faith, I was stunned by their light. In terms of plot construction, please allow me to praise Jiu Yao. Generally speaking, before the ninth volume is the story of "human beings"; before the ninth volume is the adventure of gods. The previous climax is probably the series of great changes after Ke'er's departure and Yiyu's engagement party. To be honest, that section is really the concentrated outbreak of almost all the previous conflicts, and the perspective switching is extremely smooth. In front of the grand background of national war, both individuals and collectives are violently swinging on the reins of the times. The story takes place in another world, but the powerlessness and passion are real. Yiyu is simply dazzling when she faces death. The kind of speechless indifference when saying goodbye to Hall Master Ai. In the end, when Ding Dong gave up on herself because of her disabled legs, the blessing she recorded a year ago summed up the dreams of so many people. Everyone stumbled, paid so much, experienced so many unexpected things, and finally got "what we can still get." This is already great. However, Jiu Yaojun also used two volumes to recycle the foreshadowing of the two worlds, and used his solid philosophical reserves and imagination to perfect the rules of the world. The titles of the chapters corresponded to the previous ones one by one, and mixed with different meanings. Fengya finally showed her role as a heroine, and she and other gods controlled the fate of mortals in the torrent of time, and she almost lost her heart. Perhaps the high perspective is too depressing and lonely, and the update has been intermittently delayed for almost two years. The end of the text seems like a long time ago. From an ideological point of view, it is indeed very shocking. I never thought about the true meaning of half-breed saving the world. I guessed the relationship between Fengya and the goddess Fengya who traveled through the past, but I didn't expect that the timeline was going backwards. In fact, the final argument between Feng Ya and Fleur cannot be proven by who won. As Leng Xiao said: "... We are all imperfect human beings. No matter how complete the explanation seems to be, it is just mixed with irrational beliefs. It is precisely because you can not prove it with reason but you can still believe it that in my opinion it is belief..." (Chapter 244). In my opinion, the higher the attunement level, the more you can identify with others and strengthen yourself. It's not that their ideas are so complete and brilliant, but it's actually an antinomy that is difficult to prove or falsify. Even if we know from a detached perspective that the author acts as the transcendent true God, it is not impossible to interpret the characters in the book as probabilistic miracles. I have always believed that even the author cannot completely control the direction of the work. The pen and ink cannot touch every real corner, and their stories will continue after the work is completed. It's just an expansion of the scope. It can be said that there is a powerful consciousness in the book that can interfere with the development of things to a great extent. And is it probability or fate that determines the author's creation and the readers' reading? Overall, maybe because the author is busy in 3D, the update cycle is very long, and the extra chapters are not finished yet (of course I am not urging updates... Laughs). I only revised the beginning of the article. Therefore, although the author has a strong grasp of the plot, there will inevitably be some things that cannot be explained before and after for a long time. I will probably give more active opinions. If Jiu Yaojun thinks it is valuable, he can use it as a reference. In addition, looking at the author's reply in March, it seems that he still has the idea of opening a new pit. If Jiu Yaojun has time... I will definitely support it! Come on!
If you don't believe me, I believe that what you wanted to write was indeed a funny drama, but accidentally, it became a lyrical and sad one.
My heart hurts so much, please give me a good ending
I'm not crying. My abuse point has reached an outrageous level.
Alas, the Dimensional Wall Shenma is the most annoying.
好吃!最喜欢少年啦
Can you write another extra story? ? ?
The plot is very good, come on↖(^ω^)↗
嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤嘤
... I hope this is more than just a dream, I have mixed feelings. Jpg
Too many emoticons will affect reading, right?
I have read this article N times and I still cry when I read it TT
This ending is sooooooooooooooooooooo
Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo uncomfortable
There is no name in the whole article 23333
It was difficult to eat this mouthful of glass shards
三刷完毕,谢谢元嘉