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Introduction to this article A little girl who looked like a palace maid said with a smile: "Congratulations, general, the princess is invited."
Weibosuo smiled and nodded, then entered the bridal chamber, saw a beautiful figure, lifted up the red cloth and said, "Madam."
The princess said with a smile on her face: "Mr. Sir." Since everyone wants to see the sequel, I will write an article. I hope this article will not be so sad. One
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Hello girl, this is Yanjiang from Shicheng Studio. When I saw the title of the article, I really thought it would be a cute and sweet article, but I didn't expect it to be BE. The contrast is really big. But as a BE lover, this article still pokes fun at my cuteness. I also congratulated the girl on her completion and said that I still want to see other people's extras~
Regarding the copywriting, I have to say that the content is somewhat misleading, which is the same problem as the title. If I hadn't known that this was a lily novel, I would have mistaken it for an ancient Mary Sue romance novel...
Let's start with the content of this article. Infatuation without whirling is an important condition that makes readers cry. Her infatuation contained so much hatred, resentment, unwillingness, expectations, and persistence. The author Jundu has performed well, but unfortunately, this often creates a sense of "weakness" and "silliness". She is infatuated and wrongly paid, has no regrets, and is being calculated for her whole life. This is too unfair to her. However, perhaps death is the best relief for her. I have to say that I like this woman very much, but I also feel sorry for her.
On the contrary, subjectively speaking, I have little fondness for Yue Lan. I think she is too ruthless and a bit inexplicable. Objectively speaking, throughout the entire article, her impressions change very quickly, resulting in a feeling that her character is not outstanding and that she is not eye-catching. For example, in Chapter 12, she originally followed Whistling to the Snow Country with hatred for the destruction of her country and her people, but her attitude suddenly improved inexplicably at the end. Forgive me for thinking that this princess turned against her too quickly. It's simply not worthy for Bosuo to like her so much. So why does it give readers the illusion that Yue Lan is ruthless and unworthy of her sacrifice?
In my opinion, it is because of the rhythm of writing. The writing pace of this article is relatively fast, and the plot connection is also very tight, but it often transitions to the next plot before it is fully explained in detail. This will allow us to enter the following content with confusion about the previous plot that was not explained clearly. Moreover, the pace of writing is too fast, and the characters' emotions are not expressed delicately, making it difficult for people to empathize with them. For example, girl, you just started with the part about the fall of the Yan Kingdom. At that time, Posuo and the princess had already formed a fixed state, but you did not spend any time writing about their emotional experiences. Although readers can read and understand it, just like when I saw Wei Suo die, I just sighed and didn't feel great sadness, because I didn't understand how deep the relationship between the two of them was. There is only one-sided contribution from Whistle. The same goes for the emotional experiences of Pei Qirui and Wei Posuo in this article.
In addition to the above, there are some issues that have to be mentioned in this article. In the chapter about the plot to seize Dayan, you wrote: "Pei Qirui looked slightly relaxed. As long as there are conditions, it is easy to say. Although the first condition is difficult to accept, it is nothing compared with life, and this It's not surprising that General Jade Face brought up this matter, but for the second one, if he doesn't attack the city within three days, doesn't Wei Po Sa have any trump card?" At this time, Pei Qirui didn't know that General Yu Mian was Wei Po Sa and was born as a girl. He completely regarded Wei Po Sa as his brother, which was a bug.
The second is "The silver bells jingled, but my still heart sank a little bit. I looked at the man with a firm look and a desolate smile." After the firm look, it should be followed by "Moon Orchid". Here, the sentence structure is incomplete (the object is incomplete) and it belongs to a language disorder.
The third is that "this battle is really too fierce." In war, the adjective "ferocious" cannot be used to describe a war. The use of "dangerous" is a misnomer.
Si Wei, during the part where Po Sa pretended to surrender, Wei Po Sa saw this and quickly knelt down in front of Lou Yue Lan, lowered his head and said, "I wonder if what His Highness the Crown Prince said before counts?", I think he should be walking in front of Pei Qirui here...
In addition, there are some minor typos and punctuation issues in this article, such as "the most decapitated person". In addition to the above, this article still has many advantages that are worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard~~~
Shicheng Studio——Yan Jiang
什么时候更新大大
How to say it. I thought that little Bosuo would embark on the life path of becoming a general and marrying a princess, but I didn't expect that she would completely abuse her body and mind. . . Is there any factual basis for the conspiracy to revive the great cause? . . .
Do I have to fail after completing elementary school?
Leg fetishism is definitely hereditary! ! ! I plan to send some Spring Festival gifts to Da Da Fishing Net ~
才发现终于更了以及更完了！
Update quickly. Update quickly. Update quickly.
Come on! Long live the sequel!
The writing is not good at all, just sad. There is no plot. And the heroine is too cowardly. Unpleasant
I want to say, why peel it? Isn't your face ruined?
I don't know why, but I just like whirling so much. I feel so distressed in all kinds of ways.
——Author: Actually, I want to know who of these two is attacking and who is suffering (Mud)
Xia Sanniang is a good girl. I hope she can finally tell this story to the next generation...
Why is it a tragedy? Otherwise, it would be good for Wu Sao to die together with the princess. Or it would be good to write a continuation and a modern story about the princess and Wu Sao.
虽然没看懂但好带感的样子
It's so tragic. None of the bad guys died, but all the good guys died.
一口气看到底√很喜欢，大大加油√
I'm asking for a romance story between the two heroines, and I hope the author won't give up! This article is very good. I have been looking forward to the continuation of the article for several days and have urged it many times. Don't let me down
Aunt Baili~Why do I think she is the character in which article~~Baili Cangmo
First! Really awesome! Finally got married! Is it almost over?
Hello girl, this is Yanjiang from Shicheng Studio. When I saw the title of the article, I really thought it would be a cute and sweet article, but I didn't expect it to be BE. The contrast is really big. But as a BE lover, this article still pokes fun at my cuteness. I also congratulated the girl on her completion and said that I still want to see other people's extras~ Regarding the copywriting, I have to say that the content is somewhat misleading, which is the same problem as the title. If I hadn't known that this was a lily novel, I would have mistaken it for an ancient Mary Sue romance novel... Let's start with the content of this article. Infatuation without whirling is an important condition that makes readers cry. Her infatuation contained so much hatred, resentment, unwillingness, expectations, and persistence. The author Jundu has performed well, but unfortunately, this often creates a sense of "weakness" and "silliness". She is infatuated and wrongly paid, has no regrets, and is being calculated for her whole life. This is too unfair to her. However, perhaps death is the best relief for her. I have to say that I like this woman very much, but I also feel sorry for her. On the contrary, subjectively speaking, I have little fondness for Yue Lan. I think she is too ruthless and a bit inexplicable. Objectively speaking, throughout the entire article, her impressions change very quickly, resulting in a feeling that her character is not outstanding and that she is not eye-catching. For example, in Chapter 12, she originally followed Whistling to the Snow Country with hatred for the destruction of her country and her people, but her attitude suddenly improved inexplicably at the end. Forgive me for thinking that this princess turned against her too quickly. It's simply not worthy for Bosuo to like her so much. So why does it give readers the illusion that Yue Lan is ruthless and unworthy of her sacrifice? In my opinion, it is because of the rhythm of writing. The writing pace of this article is relatively fast, and the plot connection is also very tight, but it often transitions to the next plot before it is fully explained in detail. This will allow us to enter the following content with confusion about the previous plot that was not explained clearly. Moreover, the pace of writing is too fast, and the characters' emotions are not expressed delicately, making it difficult for people to empathize with them. For example, girl, you just started with the part about the fall of the Yan Kingdom. At that time, Posuo and the princess had already formed a fixed state, but you did not spend any time writing about their emotional experiences. Although readers can read and understand it, just like when I saw Wei Suo die, I just sighed and didn't feel great sadness, because I didn't understand how deep the relationship between the two of them was. There is only one-sided contribution from Whistle. The same goes for the emotional experiences of Pei Qirui and Wei Posuo in this article. In addition to the above, there are some issues that have to be mentioned in this article. In the chapter about the plot to seize Dayan, you wrote: "Pei Qirui looked slightly relaxed. As long as there are conditions, it is easy to say. Although the first condition is difficult to accept, it is nothing compared with life, and this It's not surprising that General Jade Face brought up this matter, but for the second one, if he doesn't attack the city within three days, doesn't Wei Po Sa have any trump card?" At this time, Pei Qirui didn't know that General Yu Mian was Wei Po Sa and was born as a girl. He completely regarded Wei Po Sa as his brother, which was a bug. The second is "The silver bells jingled, but my still heart sank a little bit. I looked at the man with a firm look and a desolate smile." After the firm look, it should be followed by "Moon Orchid". Here, the sentence structure is incomplete (the object is incomplete) and it belongs to a language disorder. The third is that "this battle is really too fierce." In war, the adjective "ferocious" cannot be used to describe a war. The use of "dangerous" is a misnomer. Si Wei, during the part where Po Sa pretended to surrender, Wei Po Sa saw this and quickly knelt down in front of Lou Yue Lan, lowered his head and said, "I wonder if what His Highness the Crown Prince said before counts?", I think he should be walking in front of Pei Qirui here... In addition, there are some minor typos and punctuation issues in this article, such as "the most decapitated person". In addition to the above, this article still has many advantages that are worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard~~~ Shicheng Studio——Yan Jiang
什么时候更新大大
How to say it. I thought that little Bosuo would embark on the life path of becoming a general and marrying a princess, but I didn't expect that she would completely abuse her body and mind. . . Is there any factual basis for the conspiracy to revive the great cause? . . .
Do I have to fail after completing elementary school?
Leg fetishism is definitely hereditary! ! ! I plan to send some Spring Festival gifts to Da Da Fishing Net ~
才发现终于更了以及更完了！
Update quickly. Update quickly. Update quickly.
Come on! Long live the sequel!
The writing is not good at all, just sad. There is no plot. And the heroine is too cowardly. Unpleasant
I want to say, why peel it? Isn't your face ruined?
I don't know why, but I just like whirling so much. I feel so distressed in all kinds of ways. ——Author: Actually, I want to know who of these two is attacking and who is suffering (Mud)
Xia Sanniang is a good girl. I hope she can finally tell this story to the next generation...
Why is it a tragedy? Otherwise, it would be good for Wu Sao to die together with the princess. Or it would be good to write a continuation and a modern story about the princess and Wu Sao.
虽然没看懂但好带感的样子
It's so tragic. None of the bad guys died, but all the good guys died.
一口气看到底√很喜欢，大大加油√
I'm asking for a romance story between the two heroines, and I hope the author won't give up! This article is very good. I have been looking forward to the continuation of the article for several days and have urged it many times. Don't let me down
Aunt Baili~Why do I think she is the character in which article~~Baili Cangmo
First! Really awesome! Finally got married! Is it almost over?