As the old saying goes:
A glance at the alluring city
Look at the country of Qingren again
I would rather not know the beauty of the city and the beauty of the country
Beautiful women are rare
You've fallen in love with him since the first time you saw him. Will this love ever end?
Danmei (brothers) + time travel + imaginary + palace super luxurious plot
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I've written an article again! Although I know it's a trap, I still hope everyone will support it!!!!!!!
Reader comments
It actually went 8 chapters, which is too much. I wanted to review it again, but this time it's good, it's no longer possible.
I guess there should be 3 updates today.
Is Luo Xian a boy or a girl? If it's a man, why "peach blossoms seem to be flying out of the corners of his eyes"? Is he a Li Yugang type man?
There are a lot of exclamations and emotions in the article. Although it is very philosophical and the language is beautiful, with a touch of Guo Jingming's style, and a bit of Gu Long's style, it is actually completely unnecessary nonsense. The story is okay, but the protagonists have too many emotions and take over the main role. It was okay at the beginning, but it got annoying later on, and the story progressed too slowly. I hope the author can consider it. After all, this is a fan fiction, not a philosophical prose. Of course, this is just a personal opinion.
Things written by people are just ~~
Come on and update! !
There is a hint of tragedy, bah bah bah bah... My feeling is wrong! !
After the appraisal, I found a big hole! Why hasn't it been updated? There are too many pitfalls in this world.
Dear, ME has updated~~
But looking at the previous one, the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel... My writing is terrible!
I want a major overhaul! ! !
The last chapter was already on the fourteenth day of the first lunar month, why is this chapter only the sixth day of the new year?
Finished~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~???(Thinking!!!)
You wrote well~~~~~~~~~~!
Come on~~~~~~~~~~~!
It actually went 8 chapters, which is too much. I wanted to review it again, but this time it's good, it's no longer possible. I guess there should be 3 updates today.
Is Luo Xian a boy or a girl? If it's a man, why "peach blossoms seem to be flying out of the corners of his eyes"? Is he a Li Yugang type man?
There are a lot of exclamations and emotions in the article. Although it is very philosophical and the language is beautiful, with a touch of Guo Jingming's style, and a bit of Gu Long's style, it is actually completely unnecessary nonsense. The story is okay, but the protagonists have too many emotions and take over the main role. It was okay at the beginning, but it got annoying later on, and the story progressed too slowly. I hope the author can consider it. After all, this is a fan fiction, not a philosophical prose. Of course, this is just a personal opinion.
Things written by people are just ~~ Come on and update! !
There is a hint of tragedy, bah bah bah bah... My feeling is wrong! !
After the appraisal, I found a big hole! Why hasn't it been updated? There are too many pitfalls in this world.
Dear, ME has updated~~ But looking at the previous one, the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel... My writing is terrible! I want a major overhaul! ! !
The last chapter was already on the fourteenth day of the first lunar month, why is this chapter only the sixth day of the new year?
Finished~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~???(Thinking!!!) You wrote well~~~~~~~~~~! Come on~~~~~~~~~~~!