Fan Zhichen, a ten-year-old who has always treated people as toys, accidentally met the humble Bai Yihai. When he wanted to treat Bai Yihai as his next "toy", he fell deeply into it...
When Bai Yihai first saw Fan Zhichen, he was deeply fascinated by his face, but he didn't know that he had a vicious heart! After taking away his only relative, his fiancée, he decided to leave her and avenge his tragic death...
Now Fan Zhichen is just a down-and-out Baylor, and how does Bai Yihai, who became a mighty general through strength and luck, take revenge?
This is my first time writing a novel. Please give me some criticism~~ It's okay if you don't give any marks~
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Reader comments
Fortunately, I am the first reader to comment.
Your writing is very beautiful and has a light flavor. Maybe, this is where I fall in love with you, (*^__^*) Hee hee...
Ares' left hand. Come on!
I'm here to lay flowers again. I hope you'll check out my Blood Phoenix of St. Louis College. We support each other.
So sweet... The characters of the male and female protagonists are a bit like the "Gentle String" I watched before... But that movie was too sad, so Yuyu gave me a warm version~hehe
So happy. It makes me want to write a modern novel, about someone who has been separated for many years but can still achieve success. I have been talking about the college entrance examination all the time today, and we have finally reached an agreement, so I am breathing a sigh of relief. We will have a good chat later after my Chinese, Mathematics, and English proficiency tests are passed. We haven't chatted for a long time~5555
Well, most importantly, Happy New Year~
Hurry, hurry, wait a long time
In fact, when writing this chapter, the author was probably at the peak of his stress and felt a little overwhelmed. Piercing is originally a manifestation of condensing pressure to the extreme.
The most annoying thing is that it is rare. There are still many in China.
Give me tea 23333
Yes, I love this author!
Finally saw Nai come back alive (*^__^*)
Hey, Jiujiu, give me a hug~
In fact, I quite understand your feelings. Sometimes I really don't know which of my words will hurt others, or my more innocent lifestyle. Because my living conditions have been different since childhood, I may be overly sensitive when I come into contact with people who are higher than my previous life circle. No matter what, the most important thing is to work hard and be happy. It's normal to not want others to know that you are having a hard time, and I often feel the same way. For many reasons, I don't want to make others worry and I want to maintain the best version of myself in the minds of others. Even if I come back in the middle of the night and I am really tired, I have to get up on time at 5:30 the next day. There are also lab reports all over the UK that will write about going crazy and pretending to be a small case... I think Jiujiu is great. Jiujiu has done very well in a foreign country. Come on Jiujiu! ! !
PS: What is Jiujiu's major? Jiujiu said he was doing experiments, was he an engineering major?
... I was wrong. How could I be so stupid to think... You will have 2 updates =-= too innocent... Squatting on the ground and drawing circles
Fortunately, I am the first reader to comment. Your writing is very beautiful and has a light flavor. Maybe, this is where I fall in love with you, (*^__^*) Hee hee... Ares' left hand. Come on!
I'm here to lay flowers again. I hope you'll check out my Blood Phoenix of St. Louis College. We support each other.
So sweet... The characters of the male and female protagonists are a bit like the "Gentle String" I watched before... But that movie was too sad, so Yuyu gave me a warm version~hehe So happy. It makes me want to write a modern novel, about someone who has been separated for many years but can still achieve success. I have been talking about the college entrance examination all the time today, and we have finally reached an agreement, so I am breathing a sigh of relief. We will have a good chat later after my Chinese, Mathematics, and English proficiency tests are passed. We haven't chatted for a long time~5555
Well, most importantly, Happy New Year~
Hurry, hurry, wait a long time
In fact, when writing this chapter, the author was probably at the peak of his stress and felt a little overwhelmed. Piercing is originally a manifestation of condensing pressure to the extreme.
The most annoying thing is that it is rare. There are still many in China.
Give me tea 23333
Yes, I love this author!
Finally saw Nai come back alive (*^__^*)
Hey, Jiujiu, give me a hug~ In fact, I quite understand your feelings. Sometimes I really don't know which of my words will hurt others, or my more innocent lifestyle. Because my living conditions have been different since childhood, I may be overly sensitive when I come into contact with people who are higher than my previous life circle. No matter what, the most important thing is to work hard and be happy. It's normal to not want others to know that you are having a hard time, and I often feel the same way. For many reasons, I don't want to make others worry and I want to maintain the best version of myself in the minds of others. Even if I come back in the middle of the night and I am really tired, I have to get up on time at 5:30 the next day. There are also lab reports all over the UK that will write about going crazy and pretending to be a small case... I think Jiujiu is great. Jiujiu has done very well in a foreign country. Come on Jiujiu! ! ! PS: What is Jiujiu's major? Jiujiu said he was doing experiments, was he an engineering major?
... I was wrong. How could I be so stupid to think... You will have 2 updates =-= too innocent... Squatting on the ground and drawing circles
But haven't you given up yet?