Summer Sun (GD)

Senior brother is out. I thought he was always showing off, and now he's still hanging out with other girls.

The author of The Child Upstairs is very cheating. I hope it doesn't need to be too big. The author digs countless holes and fills them with few.

More news.. Happyww

Let me ask you, what kind of identity can Lei Tian take on two princesses at the same time? . .

I've seen it too, I've seen it, I've seen it. . . .

Depression is a heart disease, can it be cured?

This is my first time commenting on this kind of thing. It's a bit like the rigid Chinese teacher in junior high school who assigned homework and thoughts after reading it. . . Of course, writing this is much more interesting than writing my thoughts after reading it! ! ! This is to comment as a normal reader, and the second half will be mixed with friendship~ This article is about an ordinary girl who sells things she thinks are worthless in order to exchange for the products needed for survival in the rotten world of today. My intuition is that the female pig's feet will eventually find that she has exchanged millet for chaff. Forgive me for the vulgar metaphor = =. Just by listening, I know that this is a good subject matter. As for whether this article will be interesting and whether it will be finished, after all, it is the author's first draft. That depends on the author's ability and perseverance. Regarding the introduction, I think the introduction can be written more interestingly. This author is too lazy = =The introduction is basically just talk and too concise! According to a reader's gaze, if he feels that the introduction is interesting, he will have the desire to read. When I see a novel that interests me, the first thing I do is click on it and read the introduction. The author of this article did not do this well, maybe because it is the first time he writes an article. He cannot be too demanding, but success or failure depends on the details, okay! ! (Although this is not a detail... Some smart authors will lay down the clues in the introduction! This is a small detail~) If I hadn't known the inside story, this article would have seemed a bit unclear at the beginning. In fact, I wouldn't be particularly interested in reading it, but the author laid a little foreshadowing in the second chapter as to why the so-called god (who looks like a villain) showed that look. You have done a very good job at this point~ (If I were to write, I would definitely not be able to think of ambush pens. It is too hard to me...) It can be seen from the article that because this is the first time for the author to write, the writing style is not particularly refined~ Except for a few places where it is not particularly clear, the rest of the writing is very good (not bad for a first-time writer). The first time writing does not seem unfamiliar. This should be the author's accumulated experience from reading novels = =. Personally, I don't like some novels that have a lot of jokes in them. It feels like they are not showing off their literary talent, but showing off how poisonous the author himself is. . . . I am very happy to see that this article does not contain much nonsense. I will wait for the author to accumulate experience in the future and write more smoothly, so that there will be no nonsense in the entire article! It's time to become a master!! Then me! Will be her number one fan! ! ! I believe that the author of this article also knows that his writing skills are slightly lacking. . So, as a general reader's suggestion That ends here~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~Spread flowers~~~~~~~~~~~End~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Go home for the New Year~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The author of this article comes from a not very happy family. From the first time I entered their home, I felt something. I thought my family was very normal. Until now, some things have happened, but I still feel that my family is normal. But in the author's family, I feel something that is not in my family. . However, having grown up in such an environment, she once suspected that she might be sick. . What I didn't expect was that I was really sick. . Fortunately, it's not too serious, so I think it's not a surprise to me that this author can think of this kind of story and write this kind of story. Seeing the literature in Jinjiang now, it is extremely heavy. . . I really want to know how far the author of this article can write. Although I know her, I am still curious about how far she can achieve it. I think people in daily life can write those things. I hope that the author of this article will not be disappointed, because this author is the person who I have met so far, and when I think about it, I feel the most blocked. Writing is not a easy path to take, and many people give up halfway. I guess there are quite a few people starting out now, especially in a place like Jinjiang. There are many great masters, many people who work hard to climb up, and many novices. There are also many writing pits. Not every author can persist in writing an article about such things as pitfalls. . Is the biggest reader It hurts! ! ! ! So I think if the author can't continue writing this article, even if it has a bad ending, please be sure to finish it. For a novice, all this is definitely new, and there is nothing to worry about. However, as a senior high school student, this author will definitely feel more pressure than some authors, and it is also his first time to write an article. I will always support you and will not make your writing meaningless. No matter how bad your writing is, not many people will read it, but I will definitely read it and will always support you. I am giving you a bunch of flowers here, not to encourage you, because today is Valentine's Day~~~ In fact, it is because you can take this step and no longer make your life look meaningless, dim and powerless. When other readers see me giving two points, they will definitely think that I am biased =, I am biased, why not! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Happy Valentine's Day, here's your thousand-word comment. (First of all, let me state that I am a girl, not Lily) (I don't know if there are a thousand words, so let's just assume there are a thousand words)

I felt uncomfortable watching it. One moment it was heaven, the next moment it was hell. Khan, that's a bit exaggerated, but that's what I think. People are about to get married, so why are they interfering with each other? Shi Zhenxuan said in a very sinister way.

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It would be great if I found another chapter and focused on it

I accidentally updated it so much!

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