Hey, I've been watching "Doctor Who" recently. I beg you to start a fanfic in the future. I really like the Tenth Doctor and Rose! ! !
I highly recommend watching it, I'm envious, I really want one after watching the TARDIS.
Even though he's a Time Lord and all that, he's very powerful, but the Doctor is still too lonely.
I think Master Bai is pretty good too. . I
Thanks for S's congratulatory message (づ￣ 3￣)づ
What did I say at the beginning? It's an expected BE ending, but it's just a matter of taking advantage of it. How can it be done if I don't do it a few times? [Hey
The idiot's face is so high!
In this chapter, I am still on the sofa <(￣▽￣)> Wow haha... [Actually, I am a diver who couldn't help but leave a message after seeing the sofa.
Damn, I really want to see Lin Ruhai's mother
Oh, why are you writing so cool?
Well, congratulations on the completion. . . .
Please update, by the way, who is the attacker?
I really like watching it! Come on Guangguang! I really want to see Luo being eaten! Blushing, drifting away...
I've finally waited for you, my dear!
Keep updating, I'm still squatting! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 11The author replied:
Well! ~ OK! I'll do my best! ~
Oh my god, this idiot STK is so bad [face covering
How big is the psychological shadow of Natsume CicadaHey
Praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, it simply cannot be written better, keep up the good work! ! !
Just running through the plot is so melancholy. . . .
加油～您写的很好看～～！
Just write if you want~~Here~Come on~! Author's reply:
>.< I also want to write beautiful works
I can only say no zuo no die to grandpa
Waiting alone, living alone
Abuse
Xiao Longnu is a few years younger than Yang Kang now, so she must be much older than Yang Guo~~ The timing is wrong!
Keep it for now, please do more work.
Haha, I feel dizzy when I read it. I don't know what the author's intention is.
All the emotions have become that everyone is surrounding the heroine
But don't write it like a saintly novel.
- -Correction~ It seems that the first time I watched was Brazil = =|||||
Although I have been rating it until now, I feel that this article is not as good as the other articles. Although this article takes a warm and cozy approach and can be said to be a clear-water article, it is a bit too clear. If the water is clear, there will be no fish yet. If the article is too clear, there will be no explosive points. Of course, I don't want Dada to be a stepmother and start abusing her children with a whip, but I still feel that this article is not as good as Dada's other articles in terms of writing style and overall structure. Haha, this is just my personal feeling, but I still hope that more articles will be written about two people who can be firmly together, because love will not always go smoothly, especially this kind of love that is not tolerated in the world, so two people who are not so determined will not be able to reach the end and see the rainbow. But I still spread flowers and encourage you greatly. A ZA A ZA, Fighting.
Hey, I've been watching "Doctor Who" recently. I beg you to start a fanfic in the future. I really like the Tenth Doctor and Rose! ! ! I highly recommend watching it, I'm envious, I really want one after watching the TARDIS. Even though he's a Time Lord and all that, he's very powerful, but the Doctor is still too lonely.
I think Master Bai is pretty good too. . I
Thanks for S's congratulatory message (づ￣ 3￣)づ What did I say at the beginning? It's an expected BE ending, but it's just a matter of taking advantage of it. How can it be done if I don't do it a few times? [Hey The idiot's face is so high!
In this chapter, I am still on the sofa <(￣▽￣)> Wow haha... [Actually, I am a diver who couldn't help but leave a message after seeing the sofa.
Damn, I really want to see Lin Ruhai's mother
Oh, why are you writing so cool?
Well, congratulations on the completion. . . .
Please update, by the way, who is the attacker?
I really like watching it! Come on Guangguang! I really want to see Luo being eaten! Blushing, drifting away...
I've finally waited for you, my dear! Keep updating, I'm still squatting! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 11The author replied: Well! ~ OK! I'll do my best! ~
Oh my god, this idiot STK is so bad [face covering How big is the psychological shadow of Natsume CicadaHey
Praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, praise, it simply cannot be written better, keep up the good work! ! !
Just running through the plot is so melancholy. . . .
加油～您写的很好看～～！
Just write if you want~~Here~Come on~! Author's reply: >.< I also want to write beautiful works
I can only say no zuo no die to grandpa
Waiting alone, living alone Abuse
Xiao Longnu is a few years younger than Yang Kang now, so she must be much older than Yang Guo~~ The timing is wrong!
Keep it for now, please do more work.
Haha, I feel dizzy when I read it. I don't know what the author's intention is. All the emotions have become that everyone is surrounding the heroine But don't write it like a saintly novel.
- -Correction~ It seems that the first time I watched was Brazil = =|||||
Although I have been rating it until now, I feel that this article is not as good as the other articles. Although this article takes a warm and cozy approach and can be said to be a clear-water article, it is a bit too clear. If the water is clear, there will be no fish yet. If the article is too clear, there will be no explosive points. Of course, I don't want Dada to be a stepmother and start abusing her children with a whip, but I still feel that this article is not as good as Dada's other articles in terms of writing style and overall structure. Haha, this is just my personal feeling, but I still hope that more articles will be written about two people who can be firmly together, because love will not always go smoothly, especially this kind of love that is not tolerated in the world, so two people who are not so determined will not be able to reach the end and see the rainbow. But I still spread flowers and encourage you greatly. A ZA A ZA, Fighting.
要入v了……嗯……可能我个人的话可能就不会继续追下去了，没到我心目中该入v的标准吧，原因有好几个…… 首先，我不太会看别的数据，不知道你的编辑是怎么和你说的，但是我印象中入v的文章节均评大概应该在10个左右，但是这骗显然评论数是偏少的。我大部分时间是手机上晋江，点击”排行”只能显示两个榜单，一个是积分榜，一个是人气榜。我个人比较喜欢人气榜，通常会点开人气榜从第一页看到7、8页，寻找感兴趣的题目，点开看一下介绍和评论。让我有兴趣看一篇文，首先是文案里出现的元素要吸引我，但是评论数也是一个挺重要的指标。特别有的文案很简单看不出有没有喜欢的元素，这时候评论数就非常重要，如果我看到评论数在均章20以上的话就会让我觉得这个文章估计还不错，只要题目和文案没有出现雷点就可以一看。榜单后两三张的评论数大约在均章十个以下，个人经验很少有比较受欢迎或者我觉得好看的文，除非题材特别冷或者萌点特别偏，剩下的给人的第一印象就是不靠谱。所以本文的这个评论数真的是挺让人伤感的。 其次是题材，末世丧尸题材在去年是很吃香的，但是2012一过，这个题材瞬间冷了很多，而且很多文笔不错的作者都在去年涉及过这个题材，即便是文笔一般因为题材的原因这类文章的读者数量也能保证，但是今年的话2012这个噱头已经没有了，读者在去年大量的末世文洗礼下也出现了审美疲劳，所以相对的来说读者变少，而且对丧尸题材的质量要求也高了，这个时候在写丧尸文其实是不占光的。 第三，本文来说的话丧尸+随身空间+萌宠+修炼，这几个元素的确不错，但是笔力均分，没有一个特别突出的元素，也没有特别出彩的地方，对配角的刻画也不是很深入，除了上章出来的这个谭月月，感觉这几个配角都是可有可无，拿掉了也不影响主角和文章发展的。整篇文章都是平平淡淡的，情节也比较慢，到现在我也看不出很明确的主线剧情，是主角的升级修炼为主？还是和□□的斗争？还是单纯和原小绿恋爱其他为辅？（不过这个也有可能是我自己阅读水平有限）情节也有点拖沓，快到50章原小绿才刚刚变身，而且看这一章说这才刚进入少年期，主角的活动范围也仅限于一个城市，一个小院，还没有展开的样子，算后面还有五十章吧，至少应该有两个小高潮最后结局一个大高潮，不然情节上会给人很拖很平的感觉。 最后还有一个问题就是这个文中间曾经断更1个月，这段时间流失了很多读者，实话说我都快忘记收藏了这个文了，后来是有一天整理收藏夹才发现还有这样一篇文，而且看名字几乎已经忘了文章的内容，断更回来以后点击下降了好几百，而且这一个月以来点击还在不断的下降，我真的觉得你的编辑让你现在入v不是一个好的时机呢……哪怕是你入v前断更了，回来继续更了还能有一部分读者为了不浪费之前花的钱回来看呢……而现在，吸引新读者的地方不是太多，入v以后读者更会减少一点。对作者来说这样的入v我想不到有什么好处呢……（当然也可能会有读者觉得入v了的文质量上更有保证而专门看入v的文，不过这样的读者数量应该是非常少的吧） 以上都是我个人的意见，仅从读者的角度提出。不是为了批评什么的，千万不要被我上面的话打击了，我从来没有写过文，每个有勇气开始一篇文章并且一直写下去的作者我都是十分十分十分佩服的！毛毛断更一个月还能回来继续更新就比我遇过大把大把坑掉的作者好太多了，这么好的作者我觉得自己看完了文章应该留下一点意见，希望毛毛看完之后能有哪怕一点点觉得对你写作能有帮助的地方。虽然这篇文我可能不会追下去了但是以后如果毛毛写了我喜欢的题材的话我们还会再相见的~
不會是懷孕石吧……
Come on, big girl, do you think my knife looks good?
Cat, cat, guess who I am =v= Wait for next
Great attack! ! ! ! Attacking brings feelings! ! ! ! Please update! !
亲爱的，啃一口！谢谢你把肉发给我！终于一口气看完了，就一个字：爽！最喜欢这种没有猜忌没有误会的感情，纯粹而浓烈，笃定对方懂得自己、维护自己，就如同自己维护对方一样。能酣畅淋漓的看完一个好故事，实在是太幸福了！你新文哪里啦？养肥没有？啥时候放出来？等着看呢哈