It was the first time we met when we were young, and you came here with a horse to ask Lan Yu, but you were so high-spirited that you actually felt a bit ashamed. We know that your simple words always make people misunderstand. You went through twists and turns, asked many people, and finally met me. I sing to my heart's content, and you listen quietly, without getting annoyed or making a fuss. I chat with you, and although you speak concisely and to the point, you smile slightly.
Reader comments
Well, that feels a little wrong. The dialogue is suddenly followed by lyricism, which is a bit haphazard and not very harmonious. Also, the dialogue between the characters is a bit too formal and goes beyond the ancient style. People don't use written language to talk to each other.
Also, it felt like the writing was average, and even though you wanted to, it didn't highlight the relationship between them. Just being lyrical doesn't mean being affectionate.
Then, is there no limit to Ye Buxiu's shamelessness? I'm not used to being so polite and disrespectful.
Finally, I want to say goodbye to you. I will start school tomorrow and I don't know when I will be able to do it again. But no matter how long it takes, I will definitely come. Don't be discouraged because no one left a message, I won't leave. I'll come back on National Day at the latest. Anyway, say it!
Well, that feels a little wrong. The dialogue is suddenly followed by lyricism, which is a bit haphazard and not very harmonious. Also, the dialogue between the characters is a bit too formal and goes beyond the ancient style. People don't use written language to talk to each other. Also, it felt like the writing was average, and even though you wanted to, it didn't highlight the relationship between them. Just being lyrical doesn't mean being affectionate. Then, is there no limit to Ye Buxiu's shamelessness? I'm not used to being so polite and disrespectful. Finally, I want to say goodbye to you. I will start school tomorrow and I don't know when I will be able to do it again. But no matter how long it takes, I will definitely come. Don't be discouraged because no one left a message, I won't leave. I'll come back on National Day at the latest. Anyway, say it!