DeHaven, H. E.
This is a story about the exchange of souls between two people
The timeline is set in third grade, and the specific time the story begins is not long before the Buckbeak incident.
There may be deputy CP branches of Big Dog and Professor
Research the original work while writing, and try not to deviate from the characters and plot.
Disclaimer: The settings and roles of all characters in Harry Potter belong to J. K. Rowling, I just borrowed them
I will try my best to update it every week. Girls who are interested can stock it up to see how big it is.
Finally, if there is anything that is shocking, please leave a message~
I will read all messages carefully and then reply.
Anyway, that's it, although there are very few people who read this article, I still want to say... Thank you so much~
Finally, Zang Dacheng used her dog head to guarantee that this article will not be a scam~ and if there are no problems, it will be a long story that lasts until the seventh grade and even after the war...
I wish you a happy reading and welcome updates~ (Is this the legendary TikTok)
Reader comments
(This is my first time writing a review on Jinjiang. Please forgive me if there are any inaccuracies. Also, haha, this online name is destined to be soy sauce...)
A few nonsense words before the article review, I came here specifically to like and encourage others to criticize, um, so I want to confirm Chengda, it's hard for your fans to wait for your comments, please take some time to ask for some benefits~
Okay, cough cough, serious review:
Fan fiction is a genre in which the author imagines and recreates based on the original work. Therefore, compared to original work, fan fiction is subject to more restrictions when creating, especially when drawing on the original work. Fans who write famous works such as HP with many storylines and grand backgrounds... In fact, I just want to say that writing this article is very difficult, so I will give Chengda a thumbs up for the material!
Then, I learned that most of Chengda's articles are original. When I came across this fanfic, I was pleasantly surprised and worried at the same time. Needless to say, I was worried because I knew that Chengda is a writer with a very distinct, unique and stable personal style. It is precisely such a writer who has to retain the tone of the original while highlighting his personal style and keeping the characters intact. This sounds difficult, but it is not worrying, but obviously I have overthought it. From the first three chapters, this new work by Chengda is quite remarkable.
The entire beginning maintains the style and tone of the original work very well, the characters of Harry and Malfoy are accurately grasped, and the story has tension and a sense of imagery. These are all things that must be praised by Chengda. Well, let me do the math, it's a total of 10,086 likes!
Let's talk about some personal suggestions for the following chapters. If Chengda thinks it is feasible, please adopt it without hesitation. If there is something wrong, please ignore it decisively. My personal opinion is for reference only.
I feel that the current progress of the article seems to be to find a sense, so I suggest that in the following chapters, we can try to incorporate more personal style, that smooth and tangible sense of life, exquisite and unique artistic sense, relaxed and witty sense of humor, etc., Which can make the article more orange-flavored. (Forgive me for describing it this way, I hope you can understand...)
There is not much to say, but in the end, I wish Chengcheng a prosperous day, full of inspiration, filling in many pitfalls, and distributing benefits. That's all.
Come out... Come out and update... I will definitely not hit you... As long as you update...
I'm really going to start writing the two hundred words I agreed to write. I am really in love ahhhhhhhhhhh.
I'm tired of waiting for the update, and I haven't had time to read it when it comes. I actually clicked on the homepage and saw two endings, which scared me. . .
Sui Sui Nian is an ability. Compared with Zang Da Cheng, this ability of mine is really weak. The things I have been thinking about here are almost ready for the text (oh, that's all I'm saying...)
Without further ado, I'm really going to start commenting! So what. All I want to say is, can it be faster next time... Your update speed is even slower than Luo Xiaohei's, I'm tired. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh.
Don't think I'm trying to make up the word count. . . No. . Snort. . Zang Da Cheng's writing is so good~ every word and every sentence is a classic. It's over two hundred words!
(This is my first time writing a review on Jinjiang. Please forgive me if there are any inaccuracies. Also, haha, this online name is destined to be soy sauce...) A few nonsense words before the article review, I came here specifically to like and encourage others to criticize, um, so I want to confirm Chengda, it's hard for your fans to wait for your comments, please take some time to ask for some benefits~ Okay, cough cough, serious review: Fan fiction is a genre in which the author imagines and recreates based on the original work. Therefore, compared to original work, fan fiction is subject to more restrictions when creating, especially when drawing on the original work. Fans who write famous works such as HP with many storylines and grand backgrounds... In fact, I just want to say that writing this article is very difficult, so I will give Chengda a thumbs up for the material! Then, I learned that most of Chengda's articles are original. When I came across this fanfic, I was pleasantly surprised and worried at the same time. Needless to say, I was worried because I knew that Chengda is a writer with a very distinct, unique and stable personal style. It is precisely such a writer who has to retain the tone of the original while highlighting his personal style and keeping the characters intact. This sounds difficult, but it is not worrying, but obviously I have overthought it. From the first three chapters, this new work by Chengda is quite remarkable. The entire beginning maintains the style and tone of the original work very well, the characters of Harry and Malfoy are accurately grasped, and the story has tension and a sense of imagery. These are all things that must be praised by Chengda. Well, let me do the math, it's a total of 10,086 likes! Let's talk about some personal suggestions for the following chapters. If Chengda thinks it is feasible, please adopt it without hesitation. If there is something wrong, please ignore it decisively. My personal opinion is for reference only. I feel that the current progress of the article seems to be to find a sense, so I suggest that in the following chapters, we can try to incorporate more personal style, that smooth and tangible sense of life, exquisite and unique artistic sense, relaxed and witty sense of humor, etc., Which can make the article more orange-flavored. (Forgive me for describing it this way, I hope you can understand...) There is not much to say, but in the end, I wish Chengcheng a prosperous day, full of inspiration, filling in many pitfalls, and distributing benefits. That's all.
Come out... Come out and update... I will definitely not hit you... As long as you update...
I'm really going to start writing the two hundred words I agreed to write. I am really in love ahhhhhhhhhhh. I'm tired of waiting for the update, and I haven't had time to read it when it comes. I actually clicked on the homepage and saw two endings, which scared me. . . Sui Sui Nian is an ability. Compared with Zang Da Cheng, this ability of mine is really weak. The things I have been thinking about here are almost ready for the text (oh, that's all I'm saying...) Without further ado, I'm really going to start commenting! So what. All I want to say is, can it be faster next time... Your update speed is even slower than Luo Xiaohei's, I'm tired. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh. Don't think I'm trying to make up the word count. . . No. . Snort. . Zang Da Cheng's writing is so good~ every word and every sentence is a classic. It's over two hundred words!