One sentence introduction:
Luo Yan, who hated his family and killed himself, came back to life and started practicing cultivation all over again. This life is just for revenge! A tooth for a tooth, an eye for an eye! (Fog)
The history of the new generation of big devils beating people up!
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Minesweeper:
1. The male protagonist in this article has a slow relationship, a lot of bloodshed, thunder and lightning, jumping into pits is risky, so bring your own lightning rod!
2. Insist on 1V1, the male protagonist has the tendency of "dark newspaper", paranoid and cold man VS talkative and warm man
3. Under normal circumstances, it will be updated at 8 o'clock in the evening, and daily updates will be as much as possible.
Reader comments
In the first chapter, he died at the age of fifteen. In the second chapter, he said that the senior brother was not older than he was when he died at the age of eleven or twelve?
Supplementary points, hope it will be updated daily, please don't cheat me
The author is sorry, please update quickly, it has not been updated for several years Q_Q
The author is sorry, please update quickly, it has not been updated for several years Q_Q
Sorry girl, I found out after leaving a message in the first chapter that the girl didn't seem to have signed the contract yet, so she didn't have the option of throwing a thunderbolt.
It looks great, come on!
It's pretty good-looking! I don't know what will happen next... I'm looking forward to it~~
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Words written in front
Judging from the author's introduction and notes, Jing Ming thinks this is a rare main article, right? Mirror is a die-hard fan of the Count of Monte Cristo, so he always likes to read revenge stories. Although the stories are a little short, Mirror is looking forward to it and will try to read them!
At first, I didn't look at the cover of the author carefully. I thought it was an eye or a bear. I was shocked by the mirror. Haha, it turned out to be the moon. Orz
The author said that his data is not very good and the article is very cold, but in my opinion, the author only published the article in September and there is no need to be so anxious. If you want to sign a contract, Impact Xinjin is a good choice. With 3,000 updates per day, you will be able to hit the new list immediately, and then the editors and stuff will come. Of course, if the author deliberately didn't want to sign the contract, just pretend I didn't say so. First of all, thank you, the author, for your diligent updates. The mirror likes you, hmm!
PS: Shenma from the Dark News Agency is the most adorable!
[Evaluation of the text]
Because the article is relatively short, I won't comment on it in chapters. I'll just write a few points:
1. Paranoid and indifferent man VS talkative and warm man. Because of this note, the mirror thinks that the protagonist should be Gong. After all, Gong is in front, and the protagonist is definitely not a talkative and warm man... However, from the first chapter, it seems that the protagonist suffered forced OOXX before his rebirth, so at the beginning, regardless of whether it was voluntary or not, he appeared in the image of Shou. If you want to reverse it, the plot direction and writing power of the author are very important.
2. The plot of the first chapter can be regarded as the beginning of a normal revenge novel, which can arouse people's interest in watching revenge. However, the setting of large sections at the beginning of the second chapter slightly detracts from it. After all, in this era, few people will have the patience to read a long introduction ╮(╯▽╰)╭. If any readers say in the future: Oh my god, something crazy happened between the human world and the demon world in this world! This is definitely because like the mirror, he has the habit of skipping the setting and not reading it... If you are eager to tell the setting, I would like the author to highlight it through dialogue in the plot, so that it will be more natural. (In addition, the number of words will also increase...) Personally, I feel that starting the second chapter with the sentence "Am I finally dead..." Is completely unimpressive. You can take your time with the background!
3. The development of the plot is a bit slow, and there is no special highlight in the first three chapters to attract people to continue to follow the article. The only purpose of pursuing the article now analyzed is to see the protagonist's biggest goal of revenge, but judging from the slow development of the plot, it seems to be a very distant thing...
4. Continuing from the previous point, the reason for the slow plot may be that the author describes some details very carefully, such as cooking, psychological description, and some trivial things... Based on my experience in reading the article, Jing Jing personally feels that the progress can be faster at the beginning of this type of article, whether it is Golden Finger or Growth Horse. Details are more suitable for daily life, and for daily life, they can be left in the article after the data is stabilized, or simply in the extra chapter. Especially for newcomers who have no foundation, it is better to quickly attract readers with the plot.
5. If you accidentally mess up a large section of settings, you can control it a little, because at least in the mirror, these settings are not very effective. Did you suddenly realize that the author also discovered the nature of verbosity? Hahahaha, so when it comes to a big setting article, you don't necessarily need to come up with so many settings and details at once, just take your time. If there are really so many settings, it will not necessarily make people feel that the background of the story is grand, but it will make people feel that the author is verbose or impatient!
[Personal opinion]
This is purely a personal opinion. If it is inconsistent with the facts, I hope the author will forgive me.
I feel that although the author has just published the article, the current data cannot explain anything. Many things will change after signing the contract and being listed. But the progress of the story is indeed a bit slow. After more than 30,000 words, there is no aspect of revenge... In addition, Jingjing suddenly remembered that the protagonist has traveled to another world, so will the author's road to revenge be particularly bumpy? Do you want to go back to your original world?
In addition, I think rebirth into another body is a good setting, so it should be taken advantage of. Rather than following the future Xiao Shou and his master running around, if the author had set the child to be found by his family from the beginning and live in his original home, the plot might have been more down-to-earth.
Yes, it is grounded. This kind of plot is not novel, but it may be the more grounded among the current rebirth novels...
Of course, the author's article has just begun. Everything is possible, but what the mirror says now is only one-sided. I just hope that the author can control the settings in the future writing process, not too many, and then add more twists and turns in the plot, more surprises, more imagination, and more excitement...
I wish the author good luck in starting the pit, and the data will keep improving, okay!
In the first chapter, he died at the age of fifteen. In the second chapter, he said that the senior brother was not older than he was when he died at the age of eleven or twelve?
Supplementary points, hope it will be updated daily, please don't cheat me
The author is sorry, please update quickly, it has not been updated for several years Q_Q
The author is sorry, please update quickly, it has not been updated for several years Q_Q
Sorry girl, I found out after leaving a message in the first chapter that the girl didn't seem to have signed the contract yet, so she didn't have the option of throwing a thunderbolt. It looks great, come on!
It's pretty good-looking! I don't know what will happen next... I'm looking forward to it~~
Good Words Collection Shop|Mirror Orders Words written in front Judging from the author's introduction and notes, Jing Ming thinks this is a rare main article, right? Mirror is a die-hard fan of the Count of Monte Cristo, so he always likes to read revenge stories. Although the stories are a little short, Mirror is looking forward to it and will try to read them! At first, I didn't look at the cover of the author carefully. I thought it was an eye or a bear. I was shocked by the mirror. Haha, it turned out to be the moon. Orz The author said that his data is not very good and the article is very cold, but in my opinion, the author only published the article in September and there is no need to be so anxious. If you want to sign a contract, Impact Xinjin is a good choice. With 3,000 updates per day, you will be able to hit the new list immediately, and then the editors and stuff will come. Of course, if the author deliberately didn't want to sign the contract, just pretend I didn't say so. First of all, thank you, the author, for your diligent updates. The mirror likes you, hmm! PS: Shenma from the Dark News Agency is the most adorable! [Evaluation of the text] Because the article is relatively short, I won't comment on it in chapters. I'll just write a few points: 1. Paranoid and indifferent man VS talkative and warm man. Because of this note, the mirror thinks that the protagonist should be Gong. After all, Gong is in front, and the protagonist is definitely not a talkative and warm man... However, from the first chapter, it seems that the protagonist suffered forced OOXX before his rebirth, so at the beginning, regardless of whether it was voluntary or not, he appeared in the image of Shou. If you want to reverse it, the plot direction and writing power of the author are very important. 2. The plot of the first chapter can be regarded as the beginning of a normal revenge novel, which can arouse people's interest in watching revenge. However, the setting of large sections at the beginning of the second chapter slightly detracts from it. After all, in this era, few people will have the patience to read a long introduction ╮(╯▽╰)╭. If any readers say in the future: Oh my god, something crazy happened between the human world and the demon world in this world! This is definitely because like the mirror, he has the habit of skipping the setting and not reading it... If you are eager to tell the setting, I would like the author to highlight it through dialogue in the plot, so that it will be more natural. (In addition, the number of words will also increase...) Personally, I feel that starting the second chapter with the sentence "Am I finally dead..." Is completely unimpressive. You can take your time with the background! 3. The development of the plot is a bit slow, and there is no special highlight in the first three chapters to attract people to continue to follow the article. The only purpose of pursuing the article now analyzed is to see the protagonist's biggest goal of revenge, but judging from the slow development of the plot, it seems to be a very distant thing... 4. Continuing from the previous point, the reason for the slow plot may be that the author describes some details very carefully, such as cooking, psychological description, and some trivial things... Based on my experience in reading the article, Jing Jing personally feels that the progress can be faster at the beginning of this type of article, whether it is Golden Finger or Growth Horse. Details are more suitable for daily life, and for daily life, they can be left in the article after the data is stabilized, or simply in the extra chapter. Especially for newcomers who have no foundation, it is better to quickly attract readers with the plot. 5. If you accidentally mess up a large section of settings, you can control it a little, because at least in the mirror, these settings are not very effective. Did you suddenly realize that the author also discovered the nature of verbosity? Hahahaha, so when it comes to a big setting article, you don't necessarily need to come up with so many settings and details at once, just take your time. If there are really so many settings, it will not necessarily make people feel that the background of the story is grand, but it will make people feel that the author is verbose or impatient! [Personal opinion] This is purely a personal opinion. If it is inconsistent with the facts, I hope the author will forgive me. I feel that although the author has just published the article, the current data cannot explain anything. Many things will change after signing the contract and being listed. But the progress of the story is indeed a bit slow. After more than 30,000 words, there is no aspect of revenge... In addition, Jingjing suddenly remembered that the protagonist has traveled to another world, so will the author's road to revenge be particularly bumpy? Do you want to go back to your original world? In addition, I think rebirth into another body is a good setting, so it should be taken advantage of. Rather than following the future Xiao Shou and his master running around, if the author had set the child to be found by his family from the beginning and live in his original home, the plot might have been more down-to-earth. Yes, it is grounded. This kind of plot is not novel, but it may be the more grounded among the current rebirth novels... Of course, the author's article has just begun. Everything is possible, but what the mirror says now is only one-sided. I just hope that the author can control the settings in the future writing process, not too many, and then add more twists and turns in the plot, more surprises, more imagination, and more excitement... I wish the author good luck in starting the pit, and the data will keep improving, okay!