Xia Yun was a beautiful and quiet girl, but when she was sixteen, she resisted the aggression of her male teacher and accidentally killed him during a struggle. From then on, a shadow arose in her heart, and nightmares haunted her for six years. Her college best friend Chen Manni has a cheerful and carefree personality. Manni's optimism infected her and shone a ray of light in her dark heart.
At the age of twenty-two, she met two men who loved her deeply, Xue Junhao and Lian Shaotian. The fate of the three of them is intertwined, which is heartbreaking and touching. The two men accompanied her and got out of the shadow in her heart.
Xue Junhao: He loves her and will marry her even if he uses such means. He believes that she will fall in love with him one day. Although her eyes were fixed on that man now.
Lian Shaotian: Does she love me? I love her like crazy. But why? I'm just the second young master, and I don't have the authority to raise more funds to help her. This is the first time in his twenty-eight-year-old life that he hates his identity so much, and he finally raised funds. But, it's too late, she is getting married, and the groom is not him. Why is he getting married? What should he do?
Reader comments
It is a kind of fate to find you in the vast sea of books. After reading your article, according to your writing, the overall plot direction should be good, but your scenes are too light, such as getting in the car, working overtime, eating, and confessing. I seem to only know that you just said these things, but nothing left a deep impression or feeling on me. The purpose of the novel is to tell these things so that we can be immersed in them. The first two chapters gave me the feeling that it was over before I entered the scene, which would make people confused. It would be better if it could be improved. My pertinent suggestion is that you don't rush to post the rest, and revise the first two chapters first. Come on! Please forgive me if you think what I said is wrong.
It is a kind of fate to find you in the vast sea of books. After reading your article, according to your writing, the overall plot direction should be good, but your scenes are too light, such as getting in the car, working overtime, eating, and confessing. I seem to only know that you just said these things, but nothing left a deep impression or feeling on me. The purpose of the novel is to tell these things so that we can be immersed in them. The first two chapters gave me the feeling that it was over before I entered the scene, which would make people confused. It would be better if it could be improved. My pertinent suggestion is that you don't rush to post the rest, and revise the first two chapters first. Come on! Please forgive me if you think what I said is wrong.