Taking a ring as an opportunity to enter a strange era and start a new life. . .
The palace, the rivers and lakes, are bloody. . .
This is my first time writing an article, I hope you all like it
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Could it be that Xiaoyi started staring at the heroine? Or exudes murderous aura? ? The possibility of returning to the original appearance is only 11.2%~
I think what you wrote is quite good! So don't give up! ! ! Otherwise I will curse you BJ!
The story is good, the writing is also good, the only fault is that the logical coherence is not satisfactory.
Could it be that Xiaoyi started staring at the heroine? Or exudes murderous aura? ? The possibility of returning to the original appearance is only 11.2%~
I think what you wrote is quite good! So don't give up! ! ! Otherwise I will curse you BJ!
The story is good, the writing is also good, the only fault is that the logical coherence is not satisfactory.