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The system said, Welcome to the game "Such a cute girl must be curvy".
The system said, please don't try to escape, we will accidentally erase you.
The system says that your mission is to travel through the worlds of various novels or movies, save those cute girls who are obviously bent but are tortured by the author to talk about their boyfriends, and create a beautiful world of what heterosexuality is.
The system says that your system is not an ordinary system. In daily status, it is only responsible for complaining and pretending to be dead.
The system says you can refuse, but of course we will delete it if you refuse.
The system said, I wish you a happy game.
You look happy!
The system prompts that the vehicle is starting. Please sit firmly and hold your seat firmly, and give up your seat to the elderly, weak, sick, and disabled. Thank you.
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This article is also known as: "The hodgepodge of ideas I'm too lazy to write"
The tentative world line may include: entertainment industry + general modern + palace battles + holographic online games + immortality fantasy + apocalypse + western fantasy + magic school. The others have not been decided yet.
Reader comments
Is it White Fang's companion on Floor 485?
Drunk... There is also a deputy CP, and the first chapter is so scene-stealing,
Hahaha, what a good bestie
Spread flowers, watch it well, read it in one go! Super nice HP article, highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! !
Reminds me of that song in Wulin Gaiden o(*≧▽≦)ツ┏━┓clapping the table and laughing wildly
Little goblin, look at how good I am to you. I will hold you and come to see you. I will not kill you again!
It's summer vacation, any updates? Want to see it!
Tied in one night o(*￣▽￣*)ブ
Finally updated, senior brother is so cute~~
Or do you prefer "Save the Boss"?
I revisit my old place... How long will it take?
Dashalong, this is the rhythm of seeking death (ฅ′ω`ฅ) Read and Leave Claws
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tail... OK...... Touch your ears for me. [Perverted Face]
Arrange some alcohol for Deer and Cat, you know.
Oh my god, it's been updated a lot, I'm so excited, okay?
(.?`ω??)
Although there was some foreshadowing before, it was too sweet and I forgot about it?
Remember to update the article! (T_T)
I can't afford it even if it's discounted = = The system is ruthless
In fact, I read this article before it was revised. The writing was unfamiliar at the beginning, and the sentences were not very accurate in portraying the characters and scenery. The writing was not very clear. There was only one result and no reason. When I looked at it, I could only say, "Why is this happening?" Instead of "Oh, so that's how it is." It's just that the middle one is missing. A brief introduction: it is not easy to write this kind of article. It requires a lot of historical knowledge. I also read through books and wrote it virtually based on the situation at that time. However, there is nothing exciting in the writing. I can't close the web page and I can still recall the exciting aspects of the novel I just read. There is no one. A single point can attract people. It may also be because the author is not experienced enough in writing novels and cannot grasp a wonderful point. When describing it, the character characteristics are not clearly described. The novel relies on the author's writing description and then adds the reader's own imagination to create a picture of his own. However, The author's description seems very stiff. It is a character description that is forced into the character's activities. It is not a very rounded description of the character. He can use more scenes to describe the inner dynamics of the character. Even the bulingbuling of the eyes must be vividly written.
Now that you have revised and adjusted everything you wrote before, it is indeed very good. The content is much smoother than before, and you have added a lot of outstanding features in the character description. When it comes to describing, it is not abrupt at all. The character description is also very smooth and delicate, allowing readers to feel the psychological dynamics of the male protagonist at that time, and smoothly eliciting an idea from the male protagonist.
Regarding the choice of plot, don't you think the progress from meeting to acquaintance is a bit too fast? No matter how good the person is, they will not fall in love too early. Author, you have only written a few articles now, and the seeds of love have already begun to rise (this is just me Personal opinion, I personally feel that this progress is too fast), you have written a lot of things about the two of them who have been ambiguous for a long time, and they have been ambiguous for a long time. If a cauliflower falls down, there will be a person who looks at each other, and the affection is endless, but does not reveal it. Can you, the author, Write something that is innovative, eye-catching, and memorable after reading it. It is best to add something else in the middle. Don't always have scenes that increase the relationship between the two of them. It will be boring to watch too many scenes of ambiguous scenes. For example, it would also be good to write some scenes of the male protagonist's previous life. , Or the female protagonist goes out alone with her friends to live a very ordinary life. The male protagonist should not be too naive. The gods above can still come down to earth to play secretly. The male protagonist is a big man and cannot be a mother. If you are a mother, you will suffer. This is not a BL story.
It's better to add more other interesting chapters. Too many rules will make you tired, and you will also get tired of eating the same flavor of food all the time. Add some legendary color. I haven't seen anything legendary or fantasy yet, which will increase my interest in reading.
Even the Book of Mountains and Seas has a lot of fantastic ideas, not to mention if you want to add more to this or that, you can add more of your imaginative ideas. You can add some other character descriptions. It would also be good to change the characters. You can still have a second male lead, a third female, etc. Come on, write it. I will continue to support you. Write well. At least it will remind me that there is another novel to be updated every day. I am looking forward to reading it.
Douluo: Su's Female Supporting Role
Is it White Fang's companion on Floor 485?
Drunk... There is also a deputy CP, and the first chapter is so scene-stealing,
Hahaha, what a good bestie
Spread flowers, watch it well, read it in one go! Super nice HP article, highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! !
Reminds me of that song in Wulin Gaiden o(*≧▽≦)ツ┏━┓clapping the table and laughing wildly
Little goblin, look at how good I am to you. I will hold you and come to see you. I will not kill you again!
It's summer vacation, any updates? Want to see it!
Tied in one night o(*￣▽￣*)ブ
Finally updated, senior brother is so cute~~
Or do you prefer "Save the Boss"?
I revisit my old place... How long will it take?
Dashalong, this is the rhythm of seeking death (ฅ′ω`ฅ) Read and Leave Claws
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tail... OK...... Touch your ears for me. [Perverted Face] Arrange some alcohol for Deer and Cat, you know.
Oh my god, it's been updated a lot, I'm so excited, okay?
(.?`ω??)
Although there was some foreshadowing before, it was too sweet and I forgot about it?
Remember to update the article! (T_T)
I can't afford it even if it's discounted = = The system is ruthless
In fact, I read this article before it was revised. The writing was unfamiliar at the beginning, and the sentences were not very accurate in portraying the characters and scenery. The writing was not very clear. There was only one result and no reason. When I looked at it, I could only say, "Why is this happening?" Instead of "Oh, so that's how it is." It's just that the middle one is missing. A brief introduction: it is not easy to write this kind of article. It requires a lot of historical knowledge. I also read through books and wrote it virtually based on the situation at that time. However, there is nothing exciting in the writing. I can't close the web page and I can still recall the exciting aspects of the novel I just read. There is no one. A single point can attract people. It may also be because the author is not experienced enough in writing novels and cannot grasp a wonderful point. When describing it, the character characteristics are not clearly described. The novel relies on the author's writing description and then adds the reader's own imagination to create a picture of his own. However, The author's description seems very stiff. It is a character description that is forced into the character's activities. It is not a very rounded description of the character. He can use more scenes to describe the inner dynamics of the character. Even the bulingbuling of the eyes must be vividly written. Now that you have revised and adjusted everything you wrote before, it is indeed very good. The content is much smoother than before, and you have added a lot of outstanding features in the character description. When it comes to describing, it is not abrupt at all. The character description is also very smooth and delicate, allowing readers to feel the psychological dynamics of the male protagonist at that time, and smoothly eliciting an idea from the male protagonist. Regarding the choice of plot, don't you think the progress from meeting to acquaintance is a bit too fast? No matter how good the person is, they will not fall in love too early. Author, you have only written a few articles now, and the seeds of love have already begun to rise (this is just me Personal opinion, I personally feel that this progress is too fast), you have written a lot of things about the two of them who have been ambiguous for a long time, and they have been ambiguous for a long time. If a cauliflower falls down, there will be a person who looks at each other, and the affection is endless, but does not reveal it. Can you, the author, Write something that is innovative, eye-catching, and memorable after reading it. It is best to add something else in the middle. Don't always have scenes that increase the relationship between the two of them. It will be boring to watch too many scenes of ambiguous scenes. For example, it would also be good to write some scenes of the male protagonist's previous life. , Or the female protagonist goes out alone with her friends to live a very ordinary life. The male protagonist should not be too naive. The gods above can still come down to earth to play secretly. The male protagonist is a big man and cannot be a mother. If you are a mother, you will suffer. This is not a BL story. It's better to add more other interesting chapters. Too many rules will make you tired, and you will also get tired of eating the same flavor of food all the time. Add some legendary color. I haven't seen anything legendary or fantasy yet, which will increase my interest in reading. Even the Book of Mountains and Seas has a lot of fantastic ideas, not to mention if you want to add more to this or that, you can add more of your imaginative ideas. You can add some other character descriptions. It would also be good to change the characters. You can still have a second male lead, a third female, etc. Come on, write it. I will continue to support you. Write well. At least it will remind me that there is another novel to be updated every day. I am looking forward to reading it.