Chu You is a noble son from a rich family. To be precise, he became a rich man in his youth. Both of his parents died, and it was all thanks to his elder brother Chu Tian to make a living.
Chu You fell in love with Jiang Yue at first sight at a banquet and thought that he was the only one who belonged to him in this life. However, Jiang Yue only loved his first love.
In order to win Jiang Yue's favor, he was willing to act as a foil behind his first love, but he was framed and even implicated his beloved brother.
In this rebirth, Chu You cannot lack family, friendship, love, and revenge.
PS The author of this article is Shou. I originally planned to write about White Lotus, but then I thought about Shou, who is also a man. He also has the wildness of a man in his heart, so he might become a monster? [Probably this is my first time writing, please give me some advice. I don't like the little chrysanthemum on the upper left w.
Recommendations for gay time travel articles (*￣▽￣) y has opened a new pit √ joint articles with gay friends [main attack]
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我是飞鱼长评铺的评论员罐头。 先和作者大大陪个不是，年底了很是忙碌，这一下就拖了许久，请您不要见怪，么么。 打开作者君的链接，入目的文案像是序多过像文案，弄个封面或许会好一点，往下来，作者君的章节字数有点少呢，最长的只有2800字，这对读者的阅读习惯是有点反作用，不是很讨好。 说到正文，罐头君对历史还算是有一丢丢的研究，美周郎的故事也是知道一点点，可布袋戏这个并没有看过很多，也不清其中的人物有多少，所以只好从行文的方面，同作者君聊上一聊。 第一章交代的情况作者大大的叙述十分流畅，用词用句都是恰到好处的，在我看来很好的交代了背景，然而挤在一堆不讨好眼睛，适当的分段有助于读者的阅读，排版方面的小细节，其实也有用处。 作者君写的小说属于口语化，这是一种让读者阅读体验会很流畅的写作方式，有难度，但缺乏了一种瞬间抓人眼球，也就是简单词句迅速构建一个大框架环境的细节，这要另做文章才好弥补。 全口语化写作，流畅是流畅的，但还是会少了点味道，适当的卖弄一下文采，形成反差，或许会更好一点。 后文中的段落同样如前面一样，大段的文字挤作一团，多分一点会更好，挤作一团的友善度不高。 总结： 大大的这篇小说是短文，故事内容挺好玩的，但还是一点，口语化写作阅读体验是保证了，但滋味就淡了点，对话少，也就对人物的塑造的难度更加困难，也就会造成代入感不强，由于是同人文，读者心中或多或少都是了解这个人物的，而主角的表现也缺乏了一点亮点。 另一点就是排版了，排版的一些小细节做好了，是加分的，挤作一团，不是很友好。但也不必极端。不必句号过后就另起一个段落，两三行，差不多就可以换了，这样清清爽爽，讨好眼睛。 毕竟写出来的东西是要读者去看的，任何一个能给自己加分的地方，都不要轻易的去忽视。 *把握住细节，强化好技能，构思好情节。 赘言很多，望作者君不要嫌弃，希望罐头一点点微末的看法，能为作者君带来一点点的帮助。 若是有说的不对的地方，也请您能够谅解罐头的一家之言。 在这里由衷祝愿作者君越写越好。 谢谢。
辛苦了这是(*/ω＼*)
Come on, \^O^/
I want to know when the heroine will come back
求更新…！！！…………j加油！！！！！
突然就甜上了真好！不要再坑了！
It's written like a running account, with a primary school student's writing style, and there are many mistakes in people's names.