He stared blankly at her side face in the green smoke, she looked so beautiful in the curling smoke that it was unreal. The deer curled up in her arms and licked the grass in her hand meekly. The corner of her mouth curled up, and the smile spread all over her body; it reached into his heart. He felt his eyes heat up and his chest felt like he had been punched hard; he had never looked forward to one thing so much in his life, which was to change places with that happy deer...
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It was my first time writing a story, and I was stumbling...
今天21了,飘过~~~