--Dear Wen Xi, do you still think about Lin Yuansheng?
--I seem to miss him.
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Reader comments
I haven't read bg in a long time, this is the first one I've read recently. Personally I think it's pretty good
Since there is only one chapter, I can't tell what this article is about in terms of content. However, I think the author's writing style is not sober and white, and there is no exaggerated yy setting like Long Aotian's. The unfolding of the plot is not too abrupt. The beginning is a scene many years later, which can open up the situation for the unfolding of the plot below. The details of wording are also more careful, such as the description of actions, starting from meeting grandpa and ending when he enters the room and sits by the bed. When you read it, you will think of your own reaction. Still very vivid. And we also paid attention to the foreshadowing, such as the setting of the supporting characters and the two sighs. There is also some suspense at the end.
In comparison, I think the use of person may not be very proficient. Because most of the articles I have read before are in the third person, this article is in the first person. So I'm not used to it. However, both of these have their own advantages. You can try writing with different persons in the future~
Looking forward to the development of the story later. Come on, Smecta~ I wish you good luck in writing ~ brush, brush, brush~
Just finished reading today's update. It seems that I plan to start writing first. Looking forward to the subsequent plot and the transition between past and present. The overall feeling is pretty good~especially the rhythm of the writing is very appropriate. The handling of the plot feels like it could be polished up a bit. :-P. Come on, code words. Damn it~ Hehe.
Although the Dog Beggar Gang has pushed me from the top to the bottom of the Yunhu stage many times, I should still sympathize with this beggar brother for two seconds.
I haven't read bg in a long time, this is the first one I've read recently. Personally I think it's pretty good Since there is only one chapter, I can't tell what this article is about in terms of content. However, I think the author's writing style is not sober and white, and there is no exaggerated yy setting like Long Aotian's. The unfolding of the plot is not too abrupt. The beginning is a scene many years later, which can open up the situation for the unfolding of the plot below. The details of wording are also more careful, such as the description of actions, starting from meeting grandpa and ending when he enters the room and sits by the bed. When you read it, you will think of your own reaction. Still very vivid. And we also paid attention to the foreshadowing, such as the setting of the supporting characters and the two sighs. There is also some suspense at the end. In comparison, I think the use of person may not be very proficient. Because most of the articles I have read before are in the third person, this article is in the first person. So I'm not used to it. However, both of these have their own advantages. You can try writing with different persons in the future~ Looking forward to the development of the story later. Come on, Smecta~ I wish you good luck in writing ~ brush, brush, brush~
Just finished reading today's update. It seems that I plan to start writing first. Looking forward to the subsequent plot and the transition between past and present. The overall feeling is pretty good~especially the rhythm of the writing is very appropriate. The handling of the plot feels like it could be polished up a bit. :-P. Come on, code words. Damn it~ Hehe.
Although the Dog Beggar Gang has pushed me from the top to the bottom of the Yunhu stage many times, I should still sympathize with this beggar brother for two seconds.