Neither does it go forward, nor does it go backward.
"There is no dream in this life..." The blind man not far away was singing something confused.
She suddenly stood still, and suddenly many things seemed to pass through her mind.
However, I can't remember it.
Reader comments
The author is using the form of a unit drama, right? O(∩_∩)O!
I poked in, and I didn't expect it was on the sofa. I really liked this story and said, "I want to be friends with you!" Hahaha! Penguin: When I was a child, the moisture flow spreads for a long time.
In fact, for newcomers, the title and copywriting are really important.
The title "The Night Rain Is Hard to Stay" seems confusing, and its purpose is not clear.
Furthermore, the copywriting lacks highlights and cuteness. I think the purpose of copywriting is to draw readers in at a glance. Therefore, it must have the reader's cuteness. I hope the author can write down the most attractive part of this article in the copywriting, whether it is the dialogue of the characters or the storyline. Being able to attract people is the most important thing!
The first point is to attract readers. With the first point, readers will read if they like it n(*≧▽≦*)n
Let's talk about the author Wenwen again.
The article is clear and the images are very good. It is in Tang Liu's story that the wiring seems a bit blurry and the story is not very clear.
Each paragraph is separated, so thumbs up for the format! ! \\(^O^)/~
The writing is also good, simple yet flavorful. You can tell that the male protagonist is probably the little boy. The setting is very cute!
O(∩_∩)O Ha! Continue to the second picture
After reading it, I looked at it more carefully at the beginning. After the male and female protagonists are together, it becomes more obvious.
To be honest, don't be sad, author. The exchanges between the male and female protagonists are really too bland and have no ups and downs. The personalities of the male and female protagonists are also not distinct enough.
But to be honest, the author's writing style is quite good. In fact, what I define as good writing is not to use various vocabulary to show off skills. It looks good like the author.
I think the author probably planned to write a very long novel, so the pace may be a little slower.
All in all, good luck to the author~~n(*≧▽≦*)n
( ⊙ O ⊙ ) Ah! Is this the path of cultivating the male protagonist to become an immortal?
The author is using the form of a unit drama, right? O(∩_∩)O!
I poked in, and I didn't expect it was on the sofa. I really liked this story and said, "I want to be friends with you!" Hahaha! Penguin: When I was a child, the moisture flow spreads for a long time.
In fact, for newcomers, the title and copywriting are really important. The title "The Night Rain Is Hard to Stay" seems confusing, and its purpose is not clear. Furthermore, the copywriting lacks highlights and cuteness. I think the purpose of copywriting is to draw readers in at a glance. Therefore, it must have the reader's cuteness. I hope the author can write down the most attractive part of this article in the copywriting, whether it is the dialogue of the characters or the storyline. Being able to attract people is the most important thing! The first point is to attract readers. With the first point, readers will read if they like it n(*≧▽≦*)n Let's talk about the author Wenwen again. The article is clear and the images are very good. It is in Tang Liu's story that the wiring seems a bit blurry and the story is not very clear. Each paragraph is separated, so thumbs up for the format! ! \\(^O^)/~ The writing is also good, simple yet flavorful. You can tell that the male protagonist is probably the little boy. The setting is very cute! O(∩_∩)O Ha! Continue to the second picture
After reading it, I looked at it more carefully at the beginning. After the male and female protagonists are together, it becomes more obvious. To be honest, don't be sad, author. The exchanges between the male and female protagonists are really too bland and have no ups and downs. The personalities of the male and female protagonists are also not distinct enough. But to be honest, the author's writing style is quite good. In fact, what I define as good writing is not to use various vocabulary to show off skills. It looks good like the author. I think the author probably planned to write a very long novel, so the pace may be a little slower. All in all, good luck to the author~~n(*≧▽≦*)n
( ⊙ O ⊙ ) Ah! Is this the path of cultivating the male protagonist to become an immortal?