An accident ten years ago left him forever unable to forgive himself and forever trapped in the shackles he had woven.
He put all his will into the battle for the throne, thinking that he could feel at ease.
She, like the only floating board in the dark tide, gave him the illusion of hope.
However, since I am a sinful person, what qualifications do I have to stand on your left side.
If I fall in love with you, I will never abandon you.
But I am a guilty person, please, please don't be nice to me.
[The author is a lazy student, with poor writing skills and few updates. He only wants to write about cruelty but always comes up with inexplicable laughter. If you don't like it, don't criticize it]
Reader comments
Well written, keep up the good work
There are a little few words. But I still like it
Let's talk about the small issues first:
1- Copywriting, the author can modify the content to make it more attractive.
2- Numbers, the author had better limit the number of words in each chapter to 2500-3000+, which is the standard number of words in Jinjiang.
3- It is best for the author to leave paragraphs with blank lines and branch lines, otherwise readers will get dizzy after reading for a long time.
4- For the cover, the author can go to the picture shop to ask for one, which will make it look better.
Since the author's word count is only 16,000+, most of the plot has not yet been fully presented, so let's talk about this part that the author has written.
1- Some sentences do not make sense to read, and there are many places where the sentences do not match up. It is recommended that after completing the chapter, re-read it from the perspective of a reader. This can help you find where the sentences are not smooth.
2- Sometimes the scene changes too quickly, leaving the reader with a feeling of being in a fog and having a sudden fragmentation of memory. Appropriately adding some scene descriptions can reduce the abruptness of scene transitions.
3- The progress of the plot has an indescribable feeling, a bit chaotic, a bit strange, a bit jumpy, and a bit overwhelmed.
4- The psychological description, expressions and actions of the characters in the author's works are too little and can be increased appropriately.
Finally, I wish the author success in writing and becoming a god as soon as possible.
---------Taking a silly look at the steamed buns at Changping Shop
Fortunately, I don't like reading ancient novels very much.
The writing is good, keep up the good work and look forward to it
I wish the author not to be too lazy and write more words. . .
It's okay, the progress is too weird
As long as everyone wants to watch it, thank you for your support! ! Shao tide will work hard!
The new book is also a debut novel. Come on, enter the literary world.
What's the title of this chapter?
Yes, the nest is the nightmare of Fuhua, hahaha [please ignore the joke No. 1], Although the writing style is good, the number of words in one chapter is too few. . . .
Then come on, sama~ [Heart]
Not bad, a newbie can write such a creative article, the tomb owner recommends it.
There are too few words!
I saw your message on the forum and wanted to thank you for your support. "Come on, newcomers!" Also given to you. I have collected the article and look forward to more updates from you!
Can the plot be faster? The author has updated a lot!
The content is just okay. Do you dare to reduce the number of words?
Under the blessing of my famous Brother Kai, this article will definitely receive a lot of clicks
The hero is pretentious and the heroine is pretentious. It's a boring article and a waste of my traffic.
The number of words is too few. Is this a case of falling in love and killing each other?
I really like the male protagonist, so cheers for the author! ! ! Will follow the article! ! !
Well written, keep up the good work
There are a little few words. But I still like it
Let's talk about the small issues first: 1- Copywriting, the author can modify the content to make it more attractive. 2- Numbers, the author had better limit the number of words in each chapter to 2500-3000+, which is the standard number of words in Jinjiang. 3- It is best for the author to leave paragraphs with blank lines and branch lines, otherwise readers will get dizzy after reading for a long time. 4- For the cover, the author can go to the picture shop to ask for one, which will make it look better. Since the author's word count is only 16,000+, most of the plot has not yet been fully presented, so let's talk about this part that the author has written. 1- Some sentences do not make sense to read, and there are many places where the sentences do not match up. It is recommended that after completing the chapter, re-read it from the perspective of a reader. This can help you find where the sentences are not smooth. 2- Sometimes the scene changes too quickly, leaving the reader with a feeling of being in a fog and having a sudden fragmentation of memory. Appropriately adding some scene descriptions can reduce the abruptness of scene transitions. 3- The progress of the plot has an indescribable feeling, a bit chaotic, a bit strange, a bit jumpy, and a bit overwhelmed. 4- The psychological description, expressions and actions of the characters in the author's works are too little and can be increased appropriately. Finally, I wish the author success in writing and becoming a god as soon as possible. ---------Taking a silly look at the steamed buns at Changping Shop
Fortunately, I don't like reading ancient novels very much.
The writing is good, keep up the good work and look forward to it
I wish the author not to be too lazy and write more words. . .
It's okay, the progress is too weird
As long as everyone wants to watch it, thank you for your support! ! Shao tide will work hard!
The new book is also a debut novel. Come on, enter the literary world.
What's the title of this chapter?
Yes, the nest is the nightmare of Fuhua, hahaha [please ignore the joke No. 1], Although the writing style is good, the number of words in one chapter is too few. . . . Then come on, sama~ [Heart]
Not bad, a newbie can write such a creative article, the tomb owner recommends it.
There are too few words!
I saw your message on the forum and wanted to thank you for your support. "Come on, newcomers!" Also given to you. I have collected the article and look forward to more updates from you!
Can the plot be faster? The author has updated a lot!
The content is just okay. Do you dare to reduce the number of words?
Under the blessing of my famous Brother Kai, this article will definitely receive a lot of clicks
The hero is pretentious and the heroine is pretentious. It's a boring article and a waste of my traffic.
The number of words is too few. Is this a case of falling in love and killing each other?
I really like the male protagonist, so cheers for the author! ! ! Will follow the article! ! !