The naughty ghost Jinsha finally walked out of the four-sided wall that had imprisoned her for seventeen years, and entered the outside world that she had longed for.
She shouted "Have a bowl of bamboo leaf greens" in a restaurant where she spent a lot of money;
She risked her life just to catch a glimpse of the legendary beauty who would captivate the entire country;
She climbed the wall in the middle of the night just to escape from an engagement that everyone envied her.
She made friends with beggars and became close friends with the sword god. She is everyone's daughter, but she is free and uninhibited.
She thought the world was pure and beautiful, and it was harmless to make small mistakes occasionally, but her friends took advantage of her, her confidants deceived her, and even her sweetheart...
"Jin You, the distance between you and me is so far, it's like we are separated by thousands of mountains and rivers, and there is a thick layer of barrier..."
The knife in her hand, the blood on the knife, the red romance, filled the air...
Poplar flowers are flying all over the sky, just like many years ago, the sky is vast and the land is vast.
Dear readers and friends, Tianyao Xiaosandian has transformed into Aries Xiaojiu, why? Just willful!
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Reader comments
The wait is finally here, a lot of hard work
I was fascinated by Lin Yushen's version of Yang Xiao. I found several fanfics to read, and this one is the best!
The writing style is really good, and the last sentence is so appetizing. O(∩_∩)O haha~, I send you flowers and flowers, I hope you can write better. (*^__^*) Hee hee...
Isn't black on black 18 years old?
Runyu is so powerful, but could you please be more careful about the spiritual practice segment? And it ends like this. It's too short.
It's so cruel. I'm going to explode. I don't know how long I can hold on.
The boss is true love! ! ! ╭(╯ε╰)╮
Hello, I'm sorry, my comment is late due to some things! Forgive me!
Let's start the review~
1. Copywriting: The large copywriting looks dense, so add some simple code~ Then modify the small details and create an artistic version and a general version of the introduction, which will attract readers more! The cover is pretty suitable too! The name is very literary and I don't think it has any special features. 23333333333 But I don't want to change it. It sounds good anyway. Come on!
Here are some things to look out for! TUT
2. Details: There are a lot of places that have not been handled well and transitions have not been added. For example, the name "Musu Su" in the first chapter of "Whebubuzao" does not appear in front of it! So you need to pay attention! There are also separated paragraphs, and most of the whole text is connected together. Every sentence is separated into paragraphs, so it looks a little tired. You should also pay attention to this. Of course, some places look a bit inexplicable → [Xiao Qianjin asked Ah Zhan in a sweet voice: "Why should I change my name? Jin Ning sounds so nice, Jin Sha sounds so awful!" "Jin Sha sounds nice! This is the name that Brother Baiyi likes, Brother Baiyi -" The little daughter's face glowed with a faint green light] You need to pay attention to this sentence, for example.
In fact, the beginning is quite good, and the descriptions of the two children are great. These two particularly lively children seem to appear in front of the nest, but because of the nest, they thought they would have a certain role, but they were just passers-by... 23333 The author should pay attention to the details and grasp the readers' attention when introducing the following!
Below is Suwo's understanding of the article!
3. Summary: The article seems to be a story about a woman who died unjustly and merged with the Yanghua demon who had not yet reached the peak of her cultivation (?!). They should be regarded as becoming one person - Jinsha. In fact, the author did not handle it well. He only made slight insinuations without explanation, so it seems that there is confusion - who they are and how they became this process. Then this goblin became successful in cultivation and then took away a little human girl? It should be like this!
Well, I don't really understand QAQ. If I have my own reasons for IQ, I would like to trouble the author to write it clearly.
Then here are some personal suggestions from Suwo! ~\\(≧▽≦)/~La La La
4. Suggestion: Ah, the character's personality is too jumpy and I can't figure it out. I hope you can stop being so erratic... In addition, the stories about various ghosts and monsters are actually quite well written! Come on, keep it up! I'm really looking forward to the passionate showdown between the male and female protagonists! Come on, come on, hero, come on, come on and hold the beauty back! Now it seems that the impression of the male lead in Pig's Foot is not very good. 23333333 What plot will happen to make them put aside their past resentment and be happy? 233333
Then it's a perfect ending! Oh yeah~\\(≧▽≦)/~La la la
5. Encouragement: Some sentences are so literary and artistic that they give me goosebumps. They are so pretentious. 23333333 Come on, in fact, the words and sentences are quite meticulous. Paying attention to the small details can go further!
The text is actually very artistic. When I read it, sometimes a beautiful picture will appear in my mind! When you read it, you will feel like a lonely crow in an old tree, which is great, very good~
Because the article has not been fully developed yet and I cannot read many things in detail, I can only write so much! In fact, Wenwen is great! Come on! (^ω^) Looking forward to the follow-up! The hero and heroine have gone through many hardships and come together!
I watched it again. I was so happy. I unexpectedly discovered that there is an extra update. I'm so happy~~
Meow meow meow~ Come on~\(≧▽≦)/~
The tiger head means Xiaofeng's temperament.
So there are still a lot of volumes left! Come on, come on! With a wave of his hand, there was a pile.
I think the setting is so interesting, please give me a lot of support from the author＾0＾~
Very well written! Come on
The author may consider changing his name and adding [Interstellar] to make it easier to be searched.
The wait is finally here, a lot of hard work
I was fascinated by Lin Yushen's version of Yang Xiao. I found several fanfics to read, and this one is the best!
The writing style is really good, and the last sentence is so appetizing. O(∩_∩)O haha~, I send you flowers and flowers, I hope you can write better. (*^__^*) Hee hee...
Isn't black on black 18 years old?
Runyu is so powerful, but could you please be more careful about the spiritual practice segment? And it ends like this. It's too short.
It's so cruel. I'm going to explode. I don't know how long I can hold on.
The boss is true love! ! ! ╭(╯ε╰)╮
Hello, I'm sorry, my comment is late due to some things! Forgive me! Let's start the review~ 1. Copywriting: The large copywriting looks dense, so add some simple code~ Then modify the small details and create an artistic version and a general version of the introduction, which will attract readers more! The cover is pretty suitable too! The name is very literary and I don't think it has any special features. 23333333333 But I don't want to change it. It sounds good anyway. Come on! Here are some things to look out for! TUT 2. Details: There are a lot of places that have not been handled well and transitions have not been added. For example, the name "Musu Su" in the first chapter of "Whebubuzao" does not appear in front of it! So you need to pay attention! There are also separated paragraphs, and most of the whole text is connected together. Every sentence is separated into paragraphs, so it looks a little tired. You should also pay attention to this. Of course, some places look a bit inexplicable → [Xiao Qianjin asked Ah Zhan in a sweet voice: "Why should I change my name? Jin Ning sounds so nice, Jin Sha sounds so awful!" "Jin Sha sounds nice! This is the name that Brother Baiyi likes, Brother Baiyi -" The little daughter's face glowed with a faint green light] You need to pay attention to this sentence, for example. In fact, the beginning is quite good, and the descriptions of the two children are great. These two particularly lively children seem to appear in front of the nest, but because of the nest, they thought they would have a certain role, but they were just passers-by... 23333 The author should pay attention to the details and grasp the readers' attention when introducing the following! Below is Suwo's understanding of the article! 3. Summary: The article seems to be a story about a woman who died unjustly and merged with the Yanghua demon who had not yet reached the peak of her cultivation (?!). They should be regarded as becoming one person - Jinsha. In fact, the author did not handle it well. He only made slight insinuations without explanation, so it seems that there is confusion - who they are and how they became this process. Then this goblin became successful in cultivation and then took away a little human girl? It should be like this! Well, I don't really understand QAQ. If I have my own reasons for IQ, I would like to trouble the author to write it clearly. Then here are some personal suggestions from Suwo! ~\\(≧▽≦)/~La La La 4. Suggestion: Ah, the character's personality is too jumpy and I can't figure it out. I hope you can stop being so erratic... In addition, the stories about various ghosts and monsters are actually quite well written! Come on, keep it up! I'm really looking forward to the passionate showdown between the male and female protagonists! Come on, come on, hero, come on, come on and hold the beauty back! Now it seems that the impression of the male lead in Pig's Foot is not very good. 23333333 What plot will happen to make them put aside their past resentment and be happy? 233333 Then it's a perfect ending! Oh yeah~\\(≧▽≦)/~La la la 5. Encouragement: Some sentences are so literary and artistic that they give me goosebumps. They are so pretentious. 23333333 Come on, in fact, the words and sentences are quite meticulous. Paying attention to the small details can go further! The text is actually very artistic. When I read it, sometimes a beautiful picture will appear in my mind! When you read it, you will feel like a lonely crow in an old tree, which is great, very good~ Because the article has not been fully developed yet and I cannot read many things in detail, I can only write so much! In fact, Wenwen is great! Come on! (^ω^) Looking forward to the follow-up! The hero and heroine have gone through many hardships and come together!
I watched it again. I was so happy. I unexpectedly discovered that there is an extra update. I'm so happy~~
Meow meow meow~ Come on~\(≧▽≦)/~
The tiger head means Xiaofeng's temperament.
So there are still a lot of volumes left! Come on, come on! With a wave of his hand, there was a pile.
I think the setting is so interesting, please give me a lot of support from the author＾0＾~
Very well written! Come on
The author may consider changing his name and adding [Interstellar] to make it easier to be searched.