Copywriting one:
"Hua Si Xu, sit down and eat well. I won't steal your meat."
Hua Si Xumo, I'm not afraid that you will steal mine, I'm afraid that I won't be able to help but steal yours.
"I'm glad you want to eat my flesh."
Bian Yifan cut the steak slowly and looked at her with a smile.
Copywriting two:
"You never said anything, how could I know what you were thinking?" His low voice sounded like he had been crying all night.
"Hua Si Xu, why do you never take a look with your eyes?" In front of the floor-to-ceiling window, cigarette smoke filled the air, Bian Yifan tilted his head and leaned against the glass. He looked tired, "Why don't you always understand my heart?"
This is my first time for a newcomer to write an article, and there are many shortcomings. I am not looking for favorites, just suggestions.
Reader comments
Upstairs, I'm also looking forward to the wedding night, haha~
Am I too slow... Or am I too insensitive to politics? Why can't I understand this chapter... However, I don't know how awesome you are! However, why is it that I feel a little bit abusive now... I dare not read any further! ! ! I feel so unhappy! Why are there so many people who have some agenda, are bent on betrayal, or are suspicious of the male protagonist? It just so happens that they are all the ones to whom the hero repays his sincerity! I can't stand it anymore!
Upstairs, I'm also looking forward to the wedding night, haha~
Am I too slow... Or am I too insensitive to politics? Why can't I understand this chapter... However, I don't know how awesome you are! However, why is it that I feel a little bit abusive now... I dare not read any further! ! ! I feel so unhappy! Why are there so many people who have some agenda, are bent on betrayal, or are suspicious of the male protagonist? It just so happens that they are all the ones to whom the hero repays his sincerity! I can't stand it anymore!