Main CP Zhang Yu: Didn't you take a shower yesterday?
Ouyang: None of your business!
Zhang Yu: Why did you leave garbage all over the floor!
Ouyang: None of your business!
Zhang Yu grabbed Ouyang and threw him into the bathtub: today we will talk about shit!
Deputy CP Wei Shengshu: You are so handsome!
Lian Heguo: Want to ride?
Wei Shengshu: Can... Can... Can it?
Lian Heguo: Of course!
The next morning.
Wei Shengshu: CNMD, I'm being ridiculed!
Lian Heguo: Do you want to ride back? Give you a chance!
Wei Shengshu:...
The morning of the third day.
Wei Shengshu: "You fucking lied to me!
The cover of "When the Nephile Meets the Sloppy" was designed by An Sheng from Yuebai Design Studio, for which I would like to express my gratitude.
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Reader comments
The novel is very novel and interesting
Come on! Yayaya looks good
Poke~I am the first~
Come on~, don't give up
The following chapter is written in great detail.
I like the episode, looking forward to the sequel
Wow, it's suddenly a scam. It's been updated.
Who is the mastermind behind the scenes...
Finally waited for the update! Cry
Why haven't you updated it today?
I don't think Daojun has turned dark.
Hey, friends, this is Wei Luosen, and this is Yan Tiankuang~
Thank you very much for making the order for [Red Scarf] Commentary Shop. We will serve you wholeheartedly. If you are not satisfied, you can go to our customer base and complain to the store manager! The following is the personal opinion expressed by Yan Tian Kuang on behalf of Yan Tian Kuang. It has nothing to do with Yan Tian Kuang himself. If there is any similarity, I would be honored! The following is just my personal opinion as a reader and does not represent everyone's feelings. So, please don't mind if there is anything wrong with the writing!
Friends, we are the same, we are all authors who write about Danmei. By the way, your title really attracted me! I really like novels in this format! For example, mine are all named in this format! Therefore, I will definitely read this article!
Before reading the article, I have a habit of looking at the cover, copy, update date and chapter word count first!
Let's talk about the cover first. The cover effect makes people feel very good, but it doesn't make me feel that it has any connection with the title. Of course this is secondary! This is nothing. I think this copywriting is very attractive, it touches my cuteness, and it also makes me want to continue reading. For writers, copywriting is a very important thing! Please keep going and keep this style up.
Then I look at a very important thing, which is the update time! I checked your update time. You should have made changes after publishing it. If it is a minor change, it can still be forgiven, but if it is a major change, it will be a life sentence!
Personally, when I read the article, I really don't like the author to change the article. Because some readers will read the article before you make changes. After reading it, if you change it again, it will lead to a lack of connection in the later articles, which will easily make readers lose interest in reading! Don't underestimate this, this is a very serious problem!
I also liked the first chapter very much, it was very interesting to read! Moreover, such chapters will also make readers want to read on, which is good.
The writing is also very smooth, and there is nothing that feels unnatural. All in all, your writing is much better than mine! What I write is the feeling of being a scumbag and not being a scumbag anymore! After reading the first chapter, people don't want to read any more. So, honey, you must keep writing! I have to work hard even as a brother [ps: Please don't mind me calling myself brother, I'm used to it...]
I can see that, my dear, you are also writing the article very carefully, and you are also putting all your love into the article. Therefore, when I read the article, I also feel that the article is very well written! Not much to say, click to collect this is a must!
One final issue is to update the word count of each chapter. I see that the number of words in each chapter is too large, 7000, 6000, and some even less than 1500+. I think this is not good! Because if the number of words in a chapter is too small, it will be meaningless to read.
I don't know if you, my dear, follow Japanese anime, such as "One Piece" and "Naruto". An episode is updated every week, so you won't have to wait until you see the best moments! It's the same when reading novels. You may have felt something just now, but this chapter is gone. For the next chapter, you have to cultivate your feelings again. This will make readers lose their patience, so be sure to pay more attention to the word count in chapters! You can merge the two chapters together!
Okay, let's just say that much this time! Articles and stuff, I've already collected them! If you are tired of waiting, keep watching! It's really beautiful, so my dear, you must keep writing! Updates don't kill!
By: Yantian KuangYou can also call me brother~
The two of them turned the stage hahahahaha
It feels like I'm reading a horror novel... Give me a pen, it's really well written.
It feels like there are still a lot of things unresolved, including misunderstandings, the United Nations Health Department, both families, and the fake boyfriend. _(:з∠)_Can the two of them be happy? Is there any extra?
Updated? Sprinkle flowers?
I still like Xu Ru, I don't know why, she is like most of us. We know clearly that the person doesn't love us, but we can't help ourselves. Her love is silly, but it makes people want to cry. I hope Xiaoyi and Xiaoru can be together.
The novel is very novel and interesting
Come on! Yayaya looks good
Poke~I am the first~
Come on~, don't give up
The following chapter is written in great detail.
I like the episode, looking forward to the sequel
Wow, it's suddenly a scam. It's been updated.
Who is the mastermind behind the scenes...
Finally waited for the update! Cry
Why haven't you updated it today?
I don't think Daojun has turned dark.
Hey, friends, this is Wei Luosen, and this is Yan Tiankuang~ Thank you very much for making the order for [Red Scarf] Commentary Shop. We will serve you wholeheartedly. If you are not satisfied, you can go to our customer base and complain to the store manager! The following is the personal opinion expressed by Yan Tian Kuang on behalf of Yan Tian Kuang. It has nothing to do with Yan Tian Kuang himself. If there is any similarity, I would be honored! The following is just my personal opinion as a reader and does not represent everyone's feelings. So, please don't mind if there is anything wrong with the writing! Friends, we are the same, we are all authors who write about Danmei. By the way, your title really attracted me! I really like novels in this format! For example, mine are all named in this format! Therefore, I will definitely read this article! Before reading the article, I have a habit of looking at the cover, copy, update date and chapter word count first! Let's talk about the cover first. The cover effect makes people feel very good, but it doesn't make me feel that it has any connection with the title. Of course this is secondary! This is nothing. I think this copywriting is very attractive, it touches my cuteness, and it also makes me want to continue reading. For writers, copywriting is a very important thing! Please keep going and keep this style up. Then I look at a very important thing, which is the update time! I checked your update time. You should have made changes after publishing it. If it is a minor change, it can still be forgiven, but if it is a major change, it will be a life sentence! Personally, when I read the article, I really don't like the author to change the article. Because some readers will read the article before you make changes. After reading it, if you change it again, it will lead to a lack of connection in the later articles, which will easily make readers lose interest in reading! Don't underestimate this, this is a very serious problem! I also liked the first chapter very much, it was very interesting to read! Moreover, such chapters will also make readers want to read on, which is good. The writing is also very smooth, and there is nothing that feels unnatural. All in all, your writing is much better than mine! What I write is the feeling of being a scumbag and not being a scumbag anymore! After reading the first chapter, people don't want to read any more. So, honey, you must keep writing! I have to work hard even as a brother [ps: Please don't mind me calling myself brother, I'm used to it...] I can see that, my dear, you are also writing the article very carefully, and you are also putting all your love into the article. Therefore, when I read the article, I also feel that the article is very well written! Not much to say, click to collect this is a must! One final issue is to update the word count of each chapter. I see that the number of words in each chapter is too large, 7000, 6000, and some even less than 1500+. I think this is not good! Because if the number of words in a chapter is too small, it will be meaningless to read. I don't know if you, my dear, follow Japanese anime, such as "One Piece" and "Naruto". An episode is updated every week, so you won't have to wait until you see the best moments! It's the same when reading novels. You may have felt something just now, but this chapter is gone. For the next chapter, you have to cultivate your feelings again. This will make readers lose their patience, so be sure to pay more attention to the word count in chapters! You can merge the two chapters together! Okay, let's just say that much this time! Articles and stuff, I've already collected them! If you are tired of waiting, keep watching! It's really beautiful, so my dear, you must keep writing! Updates don't kill! By: Yantian KuangYou can also call me brother~
The two of them turned the stage hahahahaha
It feels like I'm reading a horror novel... Give me a pen, it's really well written.
It feels like there are still a lot of things unresolved, including misunderstandings, the United Nations Health Department, both families, and the fake boyfriend. _(:з∠)_Can the two of them be happy? Is there any extra?
Updated? Sprinkle flowers?
I still like Xu Ru, I don't know why, she is like most of us. We know clearly that the person doesn't love us, but we can't help ourselves. Her love is silly, but it makes people want to cry. I hope Xiaoyi and Xiaoru can be together.
Come on, look forward to it