After thinking about it, I decided to change the copywriting, as follows:
How did Reiko Kojima try to kill herself again and again?
How Sawada Tsunayoshi was played off by Reiko step by step,
How did the originally pure love become so twisted that it was so creepy?
Because I have seen too many dark versions of Tsuna, so in order not to follow the cliché, this article will not show the heroine being tortured to death. It will only be Tsuna-kun who is tortured, both physically and mentally.
The characters are in shape, the main emotional line is main, and the plot is supplementary. Corrections are welcome, negative points and criticisms are accepted. Please give me more advice.
Conception:
Reader comments
It's very well written. If it could be divided into sections and each chapter had more words, it would definitely be great.
Ahhhhh, I actually forgot to comment after reading this
I always feel that there is something about the male protagonist being violently tortured later on... Otherwise it will be hard to let go...
Why can't I always see it?
Congratulations on finishing it. Long review. I'll see if I have time to write it.
Xiaobai, I'm here to do the second brush. Thank you for writing such a great story. Watching it again, I am still moved. The people who write stories are really amazing. You are truly amazing. Love you always.
I finished reading this big novel in one sitting, and I look forward to more updates on My Husband is a Loyal Dog.
I must urge you to update! I want Chu Liuxiang to be unlucky!
Hahaha, passers-by become fans
Oh yo yo, chewing the red velvet, laughing and spitting at Tanlang, my emperor is full of charm, he is fascinated by the spirit and does not stick to his form.
I found this article when I was searching for sweet articles (smile), but later I saw that it had become a farming article, and now you tell me it's an abuse article? Hahaha
It's very well written. If it could be divided into sections and each chapter had more words, it would definitely be great.
Ahhhhh, I actually forgot to comment after reading this
I always feel that there is something about the male protagonist being violently tortured later on... Otherwise it will be hard to let go...
Why can't I always see it?
Congratulations on finishing it. Long review. I'll see if I have time to write it.
Xiaobai, I'm here to do the second brush. Thank you for writing such a great story. Watching it again, I am still moved. The people who write stories are really amazing. You are truly amazing. Love you always.
I finished reading this big novel in one sitting, and I look forward to more updates on My Husband is a Loyal Dog.
I must urge you to update! I want Chu Liuxiang to be unlucky!
Hahaha, passers-by become fans
Oh yo yo, chewing the red velvet, laughing and spitting at Tanlang, my emperor is full of charm, he is fascinated by the spirit and does not stick to his form.
I found this article when I was searching for sweet articles (smile), but later I saw that it had become a farming article, and now you tell me it's an abuse article? Hahaha
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? The smile suddenly solidified