Continuing from the previous one, The Lady's Backyard, the writing is rough, feel free to take a look
Intention: overhead
Reader comments
Is there a group? I want to join the group to watch the deleted ones
Abuse it, abuse it, don't abuse Nangong →_→
Hh, Mary Sue, it looks like it was written by a primary school student. The plot develops too fast. You must have read too many Mary Sue school novels. How can celebrities fall in love so easily? Does the company not care? Didn't Clover notice that early love is so obvious? Does the school not care?
There are too many symbols, too little description of the characters' psychology, appearance, actions, and demeanor, and too many dialogues. This is not a drama. The character's personality is completely destroyed. In short, it is a mess.
I feel sorry for Mingjia~~~I feel sorry for Xiaoqi~~~Xiao Gege, I also feel sorry for you~~~
Come on(? ??_??)?
Damn, it's been three months. Please update.
Feeling sorry for Xiao Qi
Damn, it's been three months. Please update.
Feeling sorry for Xiao Qi
Damn, it's been more than three months~~ I've even forgotten what the last chapter was about, please update it soon! ! ! ! !
Wow, I'm so touched. It's even better.
Jinghong wants to give birth safely! Big
After waiting for so long, it's finally updated.
It's been updated, I'm really looking forward to the plot of Ruge
If you can't see the growth of the heroine, she's just like a child, making random decisions and then overturning them. She can't be responsible for her own actions, and she can't conquer the hero with her personality charm. She regrets it at every turn and relies on coaxing to win the hero's heart. One or two can do it, but if you continue later, you won't be able to convince readers that such a person is worthy of love. You can only rely on the author's golden finger. Can't the heroine be a little more mature? Can we pursue it without relying on coaxing or backing? Design some meaningful plots to let the heroine shine more. Don't always be led by men and look aggrieved. Be strong. Don't use soft-hearted and emotional catalysts. Take responsibility for your own actions. If you abuse, you will abuse. As long as you make the right decision, how can you be the head of the house if you are afraid of attracting hatred?
It's been a long time and there's still no update?
One year has passed, and my heart feels numb for the male protagonist. Why doesn't Han Da come back to abuse the female protagonist? I beg to be abused~
Has this started the update? That's great.
Is this a new update? That's great.
Suddenly I feel a little sorry for Nangong Mingjia
Is there a group? I want to join the group to watch the deleted ones
Abuse it, abuse it, don't abuse Nangong →_→
Hh, Mary Sue, it looks like it was written by a primary school student. The plot develops too fast. You must have read too many Mary Sue school novels. How can celebrities fall in love so easily? Does the company not care? Didn't Clover notice that early love is so obvious? Does the school not care? There are too many symbols, too little description of the characters' psychology, appearance, actions, and demeanor, and too many dialogues. This is not a drama. The character's personality is completely destroyed. In short, it is a mess.
I feel sorry for Mingjia~~~I feel sorry for Xiaoqi~~~Xiao Gege, I also feel sorry for you~~~
Come on(? ??_??)?
Damn, it's been three months. Please update. Feeling sorry for Xiao Qi
Damn, it's been three months. Please update. Feeling sorry for Xiao Qi
Damn, it's been more than three months~~ I've even forgotten what the last chapter was about, please update it soon! ! ! ! !
Wow, I'm so touched. It's even better.
Jinghong wants to give birth safely! Big
After waiting for so long, it's finally updated.
It's been updated, I'm really looking forward to the plot of Ruge
If you can't see the growth of the heroine, she's just like a child, making random decisions and then overturning them. She can't be responsible for her own actions, and she can't conquer the hero with her personality charm. She regrets it at every turn and relies on coaxing to win the hero's heart. One or two can do it, but if you continue later, you won't be able to convince readers that such a person is worthy of love. You can only rely on the author's golden finger. Can't the heroine be a little more mature? Can we pursue it without relying on coaxing or backing? Design some meaningful plots to let the heroine shine more. Don't always be led by men and look aggrieved. Be strong. Don't use soft-hearted and emotional catalysts. Take responsibility for your own actions. If you abuse, you will abuse. As long as you make the right decision, how can you be the head of the house if you are afraid of attracting hatred?
It's been a long time and there's still no update?
One year has passed, and my heart feels numb for the male protagonist. Why doesn't Han Da come back to abuse the female protagonist? I beg to be abused~
Has this started the update? That's great.
Is this a new update? That's great.
Suddenly I feel a little sorry for Nangong Mingjia