How can something with hundreds of thousands of words be summarized clearly in just 500 words? Friends who are interested should read it slowly!
(The next chapter will be written after all exams are completed. Thank you for your support!)
Reader comments
.... YY has no limits. It's so cool. .... Endure.... YY has no limits. It's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
I am indeed very happy! Author's reply:
The ending must be good...
Hum hum, why don't you update it quickly? ! Author's reply:
Here it comes~~~~~~
I just deliberately read this chapter slowly from the first chapter, and I feel really sad. Although I always feel that novels are fictional stories, such stories exist in reality, and there are really two children who support each other and work hard to live in the adult world. I was very moved. Xiaomiao's writing is very delicate. Although there are still some small flaws in the inner shaping of the "I" in the text, I still can't help but feel the child's sad desolation from the bottom of my heart. As for Kuno's indifference, it may be better shaped. He is obviously a kind and quiet child, but for some unknown reasons, he begins to hide his tenderness and enthusiasm. Just two lonely children met and began to encourage each other. The immature feelings between children may be thought by that "I" to be in love with "you", and Kuno may be getting closer to you because of the tenderness of "I", so that he can slowly get rid of the shadow of the past and start to find what he wants again.
Seeing that Xiaomiao chose tragedy, many people may be afraid of seeing the heartbreaking ending because of the excessive sadness that has been revealed in the past. But if the two children were written as "hahaha" at the beginning, then it would be too ridiculous to write a tragic ending in the end. Xiao Miao's writing has the style of Midorikawa Yuki's comics, and at the same time, it seems to have the protagonist in Gong Qijun's story style, and it also touches people's emotions from the heart. Speaking of which, most of the young people who write articles now write about Korean things because they want fame and money. The titles of the stories seem to be very "ha" and special, but in fact they are full of rotten and bad writing. People who really want to write good articles will never do this. I think Xiaomiao is very good. He seems to enjoy writing articles. Hehe. In fact, the possibility of publishing a story like "Butterfly" serialized in Jinjiang is not very high. It would be great if you could go to other places to write. Although I don't like Guo Jingming, your style of writing might be successful in his place. (Purely talking nonsense, haha)
I may be able to guess at the ending of this story. But I just hope that Xiaomiao can write something new, and not have someone get sick and die, someone be hit by a car or become a vegetative state, or have a slightly better reunion ending. This would be very suitable.
Speaking of which, I love the character Kuno very much. So don't let him die!
Hehe. It was obviously a comment, why did it come out as a plea?
Also, I really like that scene. It was the time when the two of them went to Qingyuan Mountain. It was beautifully written from the time I arrived to the time I came back, and it still had a sense of suspense. It's really worrying! I really hope Xiaomiao can write something that makes me cry. To be honest, there are very few articles that can make me cry.
By the way, I just forgot to mention that. Reading Xiao Miao's article reminds me of Iwai Shunji's film editing. It's as sad as "Love Letter" and as lonely as "Dream Traveler"... Anyway, I really like it...
Forget it, I originally wanted to comment in depth, but now it's become a bit of a personality cult, I can't help it...
Finally, I want to say something. I feel that even if this story is a tragic route, even if everyone dies in the end (I'm talking nonsense), even if the butterfly will die sadly as the title says, it at least once flew so bravely and hard.
The life of a butterfly is really short, but the glory it once had will not be erased because of its fall! (Haha, suddenly I feel that my writing is a little philosophical)
Finally, I wish Xiaomiao success in filling the hole! It is my first time to write a long review. It is not very standardized and the text seems messy. Xiao Miao, please don't blame me! Author's reply:
This is the first time someone has written a long review for me!
I suddenly got excited~
Thank you for reading my writing so carefully. I dare not say that I am good at writing, but I will try my best to write it down!
In fact, if no one reads what I write, there is no point in publishing it.
But if someone can analyze my articles as carefully as you do, then it doesn't matter even if I can't publish them in a hundred years.
Because the purpose of my writing is to be read by people, to bring them ideas...
Thank you very much. Regardless of your opinions or anything else, I will work hard!
How come your articles are so fickle. . . The heroine's character is really changeable. . Just write like this without a theme
Are you going to become a heartthrob?
The article is really boring...
It's still a good watch. Please close your eyes when it gets dark. The author's reply:
Not a heartthrob! I don't really like heartthrobs...
Hehe, I'm so sorry for the poor writing. Originally, I just wanted to write about the strong bond between the male and female protagonists, and what KID said to the female protagonist: "Look, I said, no matter where you are, I can find you."
If there is no theme, then it is my usual style... I am the worst at writing about love...
When your author said something, what did the two sounds of "haha" mean? I'm very confused...
By the way, you can't abuse Kaka, Shuishui has already been abused, you must not abuse him anymore... Let them be happy~God~The author's reply:
Haha twice means everything, oh yeah.
Wherever I was abused, it was normal!
Suddenly I saw Lu Zhong's fanfic on JJ~Chicken Jelly, Chicken Jelly >3<
Why not? I'm so anxious to see the ending! Come out quickly! Author's reply:
I'm going to work hard. . . .
Mistake,,, I just scored
I've written so well that I'll give you some black forest cake~
Buy (sell) a few more paintings and you won't have to worry about it for a lifetime! "
Could it be Tianqing?
What I'm watching, keep going
I worked hard to code two chapters in two days~
Adults are hardworking little bees~~
Take a note! ! ! Author's reply:
There is a little bee
Fly to the west and fly to the east
buzz buzz buzz buzz
Not afraid of rain or wind...
Wei Dian Da Xin~~Run over and give me a bite~~
I am very happy. I read this masterpiece in one sitting without waiting. I like your words very much. Looking forward to the extra episodes and the new work.
Compensation for Joan, Hikari, Tezuka Kunimitsu is also
Why hasn't it been updated yet? . . . .
I'm being lazy again. . .
How many words do you need to comment on to get points?
Keep writing.
I'm still waiting to see what happens next. . .
You should still recognize my name. . . Haha, I am Ding Ding. . . Author's reply:
Someone actually urged me to write the article, so a super lazy guy like me had no choice but to take the initiative and update a chapter.
Hello, you are finally back
Sorry, I forgot to rate it, please make it up!
It's better to leave a message and show your face!
Going abroad is such a good job! I'm afraid I'll have to wait a few years to go abroad!
It's better if you don't abandon the pit~~We have been waiting for a long time to say
The author of the non-vampire zombie replied:
Soul sucking...
It's over~I can't bear to let it go! Looking forward to the new work!
It's really not worth it for Qingyu, Atobe Keigo has hurt her countless times and still can't learn"
So stupid
I like planning my life, but I like my brother more
Although I will follow any fanfic about my brother, I can fantasize about doting on him and admiring him, but the worst I can do is give him a place to rest.
It's not easy for someone to dress up as Tang Tang, but it's not with his brother
The most disgusting thing is pit pit pit!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't know if it's possible to fill in ㄚㄚㄚㄚㄚㄚㄚ~
Haha, I like martial arts competitions the most, there are so many JQs, oh haha
How do you write about candy with this kind of subject matter... Tsk tsk, it's too difficult, it's too difficult, just take it one step at a time, keep up the good work
Haha, when I see flaxen hair, I think of knights.
Oh, Ye Xifan is the reincarnation of Han Ting, Lang Yixuan is the demon who fell in love with Li, and Tonny is Mo Xue and the little silver wolf Xue'er who was rescued by Li'er. Han Ting and the Snow Wolf clan hate each other, and Li'er is caught in the middle. Love and hate are both painful. Lang Yixuan's love is deep, fulfilling Li'er's wish to be a human being and fulfilling the love between Han and Li'er. But he was unwilling to let Han's reincarnation have his own appearance. In order to protect Li'er, Xuan used a secret method to appear in Li's dream and accompany Li's growth, resulting in Xuan's physical condition in real life being very poor. (This is just my guess, please forgive me if it's wrong)
Looking forward to what follows. . . . . . .
.... YY has no limits. It's so cool. .... Endure.... YY has no limits. It's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... YY has no limit, it's so cool. .... Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
I am indeed very happy! Author's reply: The ending must be good...
Hum hum, why don't you update it quickly? ! Author's reply: Here it comes~~~~~~
I just deliberately read this chapter slowly from the first chapter, and I feel really sad. Although I always feel that novels are fictional stories, such stories exist in reality, and there are really two children who support each other and work hard to live in the adult world. I was very moved. Xiaomiao's writing is very delicate. Although there are still some small flaws in the inner shaping of the "I" in the text, I still can't help but feel the child's sad desolation from the bottom of my heart. As for Kuno's indifference, it may be better shaped. He is obviously a kind and quiet child, but for some unknown reasons, he begins to hide his tenderness and enthusiasm. Just two lonely children met and began to encourage each other. The immature feelings between children may be thought by that "I" to be in love with "you", and Kuno may be getting closer to you because of the tenderness of "I", so that he can slowly get rid of the shadow of the past and start to find what he wants again. Seeing that Xiaomiao chose tragedy, many people may be afraid of seeing the heartbreaking ending because of the excessive sadness that has been revealed in the past. But if the two children were written as "hahaha" at the beginning, then it would be too ridiculous to write a tragic ending in the end. Xiao Miao's writing has the style of Midorikawa Yuki's comics, and at the same time, it seems to have the protagonist in Gong Qijun's story style, and it also touches people's emotions from the heart. Speaking of which, most of the young people who write articles now write about Korean things because they want fame and money. The titles of the stories seem to be very "ha" and special, but in fact they are full of rotten and bad writing. People who really want to write good articles will never do this. I think Xiaomiao is very good. He seems to enjoy writing articles. Hehe. In fact, the possibility of publishing a story like "Butterfly" serialized in Jinjiang is not very high. It would be great if you could go to other places to write. Although I don't like Guo Jingming, your style of writing might be successful in his place. (Purely talking nonsense, haha) I may be able to guess at the ending of this story. But I just hope that Xiaomiao can write something new, and not have someone get sick and die, someone be hit by a car or become a vegetative state, or have a slightly better reunion ending. This would be very suitable. Speaking of which, I love the character Kuno very much. So don't let him die! Hehe. It was obviously a comment, why did it come out as a plea? Also, I really like that scene. It was the time when the two of them went to Qingyuan Mountain. It was beautifully written from the time I arrived to the time I came back, and it still had a sense of suspense. It's really worrying! I really hope Xiaomiao can write something that makes me cry. To be honest, there are very few articles that can make me cry. By the way, I just forgot to mention that. Reading Xiao Miao's article reminds me of Iwai Shunji's film editing. It's as sad as "Love Letter" and as lonely as "Dream Traveler"... Anyway, I really like it... Forget it, I originally wanted to comment in depth, but now it's become a bit of a personality cult, I can't help it... Finally, I want to say something. I feel that even if this story is a tragic route, even if everyone dies in the end (I'm talking nonsense), even if the butterfly will die sadly as the title says, it at least once flew so bravely and hard. The life of a butterfly is really short, but the glory it once had will not be erased because of its fall! (Haha, suddenly I feel that my writing is a little philosophical) Finally, I wish Xiaomiao success in filling the hole! It is my first time to write a long review. It is not very standardized and the text seems messy. Xiao Miao, please don't blame me! Author's reply: This is the first time someone has written a long review for me! I suddenly got excited~ Thank you for reading my writing so carefully. I dare not say that I am good at writing, but I will try my best to write it down! In fact, if no one reads what I write, there is no point in publishing it. But if someone can analyze my articles as carefully as you do, then it doesn't matter even if I can't publish them in a hundred years. Because the purpose of my writing is to be read by people, to bring them ideas... Thank you very much. Regardless of your opinions or anything else, I will work hard!
How come your articles are so fickle. . . The heroine's character is really changeable. . Just write like this without a theme Are you going to become a heartthrob? The article is really boring... It's still a good watch. Please close your eyes when it gets dark. The author's reply: Not a heartthrob! I don't really like heartthrobs... Hehe, I'm so sorry for the poor writing. Originally, I just wanted to write about the strong bond between the male and female protagonists, and what KID said to the female protagonist: "Look, I said, no matter where you are, I can find you." If there is no theme, then it is my usual style... I am the worst at writing about love...
When your author said something, what did the two sounds of "haha" mean? I'm very confused... By the way, you can't abuse Kaka, Shuishui has already been abused, you must not abuse him anymore... Let them be happy~God~The author's reply: Haha twice means everything, oh yeah. Wherever I was abused, it was normal!
Suddenly I saw Lu Zhong's fanfic on JJ~Chicken Jelly, Chicken Jelly >3<
Why not? I'm so anxious to see the ending! Come out quickly! Author's reply: I'm going to work hard. . . .
Mistake,,, I just scored
I've written so well that I'll give you some black forest cake~
Buy (sell) a few more paintings and you won't have to worry about it for a lifetime! " Could it be Tianqing?
What I'm watching, keep going
I worked hard to code two chapters in two days~ Adults are hardworking little bees~~ Take a note! ! ! Author's reply: There is a little bee Fly to the west and fly to the east buzz buzz buzz buzz Not afraid of rain or wind... Wei Dian Da Xin~~Run over and give me a bite~~
I am very happy. I read this masterpiece in one sitting without waiting. I like your words very much. Looking forward to the extra episodes and the new work.
Compensation for Joan, Hikari, Tezuka Kunimitsu is also
Why hasn't it been updated yet? . . . . I'm being lazy again. . . How many words do you need to comment on to get points? Keep writing. I'm still waiting to see what happens next. . . You should still recognize my name. . . Haha, I am Ding Ding. . . Author's reply: Someone actually urged me to write the article, so a super lazy guy like me had no choice but to take the initiative and update a chapter.
Hello, you are finally back
Sorry, I forgot to rate it, please make it up!
It's better to leave a message and show your face! Going abroad is such a good job! I'm afraid I'll have to wait a few years to go abroad!
It's better if you don't abandon the pit~~We have been waiting for a long time to say
The author of the non-vampire zombie replied: Soul sucking...
It's over~I can't bear to let it go! Looking forward to the new work!
It's really not worth it for Qingyu, Atobe Keigo has hurt her countless times and still can't learn" So stupid
I like planning my life, but I like my brother more Although I will follow any fanfic about my brother, I can fantasize about doting on him and admiring him, but the worst I can do is give him a place to rest. It's not easy for someone to dress up as Tang Tang, but it's not with his brother The most disgusting thing is pit pit pit!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if it's possible to fill in ㄚㄚㄚㄚㄚㄚㄚ~
Haha, I like martial arts competitions the most, there are so many JQs, oh haha
How do you write about candy with this kind of subject matter... Tsk tsk, it's too difficult, it's too difficult, just take it one step at a time, keep up the good work
Haha, when I see flaxen hair, I think of knights.
Oh, Ye Xifan is the reincarnation of Han Ting, Lang Yixuan is the demon who fell in love with Li, and Tonny is Mo Xue and the little silver wolf Xue'er who was rescued by Li'er. Han Ting and the Snow Wolf clan hate each other, and Li'er is caught in the middle. Love and hate are both painful. Lang Yixuan's love is deep, fulfilling Li'er's wish to be a human being and fulfilling the love between Han and Li'er. But he was unwilling to let Han's reincarnation have his own appearance. In order to protect Li'er, Xuan used a secret method to appear in Li's dream and accompany Li's growth, resulting in Xuan's physical condition in real life being very poor. (This is just my guess, please forgive me if it's wrong) Looking forward to what follows. . . . . . .