Love of the Four Gods

I discovered that Alian's attribute is that of a crazy guy, and Tutu's loyal dog attributes are also starting to show up. The pairing of crazy guys and loyal dogs is also very good O(∩_∩)O~~The big little theater is so cute (*/ω＼*)

Increasingly complex rhythms. . . .

I really like Teacher Ling and Mu Mu. Can I watch them after marriage? Happy birthday to you! Always young and beautiful! Thoughts and thoughts are flowing, and good articles are produced!

Recently, Lezi has been updated every day, and I will witness the updates and records of Lezi!

The style of the novel is somewhat unusual, and seems to be a mixture of narrative and discussion. But the theme is very interesting. It talks about the love between men and women; the love between women and women. The author updates tens of thousands of words in one breath, which is a bit fierce. Come on!

It seems that I don't intend to cheat him yet T^T

Still abusing the heroine. . .

Is Xun Qi the male protagonist? Does he love the heroine or is he just using her?

I won't comment until I've finished watching it. It looks great! I like it.

Hey-hey! ! I also read Chapter 2! ! ! ! I can only say that the color and theme of the fantasy story are somewhat interesting. The mood in the first chapter was indeed too heavy, but in the second chapter the mood was obviously relieved. No matter whether it is thoughts, expressions, or moods, they will follow the author's words and feel them. I like to watch. . . ! Why do I call the theme review of Chapter 2 expectations? It seems that the article is all nothingness, things that cannot happen in real life, but sometimes, it is indeed what people want and expect the most. Everyone knows that people cannot be resurrected, no matter what they have experienced during their lifetime, what kind of secrets they have, who they have met, and whether they are happy or not! All these things have disappeared with people! ! Impossibility is impossible. Maybe in real life there are only hatred and memories, but so what, we still have to live our lives and continue to live. However, the author seems to be bringing us into science fiction, but in fact he is really bringing us into our thoughts. Yes, life is like this, why live so seriously? Are you right? But! ! For the fish in sour soup at the end! I think it's just the author who wants to eat it! Ha ha! ! I was so happy when I saw that! ! This is a good novel that is rich in color when it is integrated into life! ! Love you! ! Regardless of whether my comments are good or bad, this is my perspective and opinion on this article. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. This is my attitude towards life! Whoops!

Comments on "[Yoonjae] I'm Sorry, I Love You" Foreword It was really rare to see Yun Jae on Jinjiang. With my passion for Shinqi, I grabbed the list. Okay, maybe no one will compete with me [draw circles] The author has something to say. Yun Zai's novels are not popular in Jinjiang, and the first-person narrative is easy to block. In view of my first experience in writing an article, to be honest, I am not qualified to say anything, but I still want to share my only experience with you. 1. First person problem limitations Newcomers like to write in the first person, which is a very strange phenomenon. [Okay, me too, cough cough...] Maybe many newcomers think that writing in the first person is because they feel that this can better express the psychological and emotional changes of the protagonist, portray the character well, and thus deepen the impression of the protagonist in the minds of readers. However, doing so greatly limits the depiction of other characters in the article. It's like looking at the outside world through a narrow slit, and what you see is limited. Why is it difficult to write in the first person? In fact, this is the truth. The first-person narrative has great limitations. If the novel leaves the perspective of "my", many plots will have to be stopped. 2. Reader preferences In general, for online novels, readers are more accepting of the third-person narrative method. Compared with the first-person narrative, the third-person narrative method is a more mature one. We generally see more first-person works in girls' magazines. This narrative method is highly subjective, so it is one-sided in many aspects. Many gay friends I know have reported that they generally give up writing when they see the first person. I guess they think it is too naive... [Okay, except for the great gods] writing style, plot It is difficult for the first person to truly reflect the author's writing style. I believe that in a work, the author should assume the role of director, not just an actor. As the name suggests, a director can direct, act, and coordinate the overall situation. In other words, from a third-party perspective, the subtle movements and expressions of the protagonist can be accurately captured, allowing readers to feel the emotional and psychological changes of the character. In the final analysis, it is a matter of detail characterization. If the writing is written in the first person, many details of other characters will be missed. At the same time, the grasp of the plot will not be smooth. 2. Genre and innovation Good genre is half the battle, but perhaps that is a bit too one-sided. However, the fact is that for newcomers, choosing the right genre is really important. For newcomers, you can choose a popular genre at the beginning. As far as I know, Danmei's current popular themes are ABO, system, and a more classic one is rebirth. Yes, you can get a clue from the gold list or strong recommendation. Of course, you have to consider whether you can control it. Blindly following the trend is not enough. You have to be original in terms of character setting and plot setting. For example, in the case of rebirth, it can be set up as a double rebirth. Xiao Shou is reborn at the beginning, but Xiao Gong is not aware that Xiao Gong is also reborn. This can lay down the foreshadowing and leave suspense for the readers, which will be revealed later. Or set a special skill for the protagonist. For example, in the Korean drama "I Hear Your Voice", the male protagonist has the ability to read minds. Elements such as aliens are also very popular now [ask about the beast] Or you can write some novels about popular Korean dramas and anime characters, such as Korean dramas such as "The Heir" and "My Love from the Star" [You can write about Professor Dou and Erqian's younger brother, hehe~]; for anime, you can write about popular fan fiction, such as "Brothers War", "Devil Lover", "Free", "Prank of the Gods" [I have been waiting for this anime novel, stare~] The reason why Korean dramas are so popular nowadays is actually because of the innovative elements added, such as "The Hundred Years Bride" [Why are we talking about Korean dramas again?] Okay, so much talk, let's get to the point now. Main topic This is an article about a fan named Yun Jae. As can be seen from the title "[Yun Jae] I'm Sorry, I Love You", this article is somewhat tragic. I have seen a lot of articles about Yun Jae in magazines before, and I have to say that the writing is quite good. It greatly connects their experiences into a complete story in the novel, which is sad and touching. The background of the story is the disbandment of Shinqi. After the group disbanded, a gap developed between the two. After such a long time apart, when Jaejoong saw Yunho again, it was Yunho who had been in a car accident and was lying unconscious on the hospital bed. The following chapters unfolded as Jaejoong was heartbroken and fell into memories. From the cautious exploration at the beginning to the sweetness later [there may be a gap later], as the group became more and more popular, the relationship between the two also experienced ups and downs and became stronger. Then, some suggestions. [Analysis of data reasons] 1. The full text is based on the real story background between them, so people who are familiar with Shinqi will be greatly touched, such as the Yellow Rose incident, Yunho's poisoning incident, etc. Similarly, for other readers, there is a lack of novelty. I think this is also the case. One of the small reasons for poor article data. 2. In addition, this article is written in the first person voice, so many readers will choose to give up silently. In fact, it would be okay if Dada was serialized in a magazine such as "Korean Wave Hurricane". I think the writing and plot arrangement of Dada are good, but as an online literature, it would be better to write it in the third person, and the writing style would appear more mature. 3. Of course, the main reason for the poor data in this article is that fanfics such as Shinqi and SJ are not popular in Jinjiang. The age range of Jinjiang's readers ranges from junior high school students to women in their 20s and 30s. Most readers are mainly female readers in their 20s, so most readers are not very interested in idols and the like, and naturally they are not familiar with Shinqi [well, many of them are GD fans] But if you are a fan of popular anime, film and television, there is still a lot of room for development. Therefore, please don't casually think that your poor writing results in poor data. Your writing is very good~ Area needing improvement 1. Language . After reading the article, I found that the word "I" appeared too frequently (especially in the first chapter), and by the way, I would like to mention the issue of detail characterization. For example, "I looked at his face that was so pale and even blue, and his body completely lost consciousness. I thought I must be floating now." The first "I" can be removed, and the "body completely lost consciousness" can be deepened, for example, changed to: "Looking at his pale and even blue face, a numb feeling hit his knee joints from his toes, and his lower body seemed to be eaten by a little bit of insects and ants, disappearing, but I couldn't feel a trace of pain. I think my soul must be floating now, otherwise..." [Hmm... The change is rather strange, ignore me] What needs to be reminded here is that the word "I" should be avoided at the beginning of the sentence, and the language should be as concise as possible. Of course, it is necessary to focus on the strength of the language to make it impactful. For example, when you write about a fall, what kind of fall it is, and what kind of reaction you have when you are emotionally excited. Here you need to play the role of an actor and think on your behalf. It is highly recommended that you read the works of great masters. I recommend the writing of Caramel Winter Melon. The language is concise and powerful, and the plot is relaxed and relaxed. 2. Plot Then let's talk about the plot, which is very important. When and what kind of plot will attract readers, we have to think about this issue from the readers' perspective. First of all, the first three chapters must attract readers. After reading the first chapter, to be honest, I couldn't understand it. Then I thought about it carefully several times before I finally understood it. "——Kim Jaejoong, do you miss Jung Yunho? ——Then go back to him! . ——I won't go back, and I can't go back. I looked at his pale and even blue face, and his body completely lost consciousness. I thought I must be floating now. This was the first time we met after such a long time. I was standing next to him again, but he didn't know it. " I feel that the first three sentences have a strong disturbing effect on readers, and they seem a bit abrupt when placed there. I think it's better to capture one shot and slowly describe it, and then add Jaejoong's inner monologue. (Okay, I don't know what I'm talking about either.) Well... The emphasis here is actually to emphasize that the article looks like a lens, so that readers can have that kind of picture in their mind when they read it. Secondly, grasp the points of interest to readers to develop the plot. That is to consider when to be cruel and when to be sweet. At the end of each chapter, the interesting points are stuck there, haha~ For example, let the readers look forward to when to do it, hehe~ Although it is written in the first person of Jaejoong, the portrayal is still remarkable, the plot is smooth, and the characters are well drawn. Cold on the outside and hot on the inside, independent, thoughtful and yearning for freedom, while Yunho is sunny, confident and responsible. What Jaejoong has always longed for is a broader space. He wants to make the music he likes and doesn't want to be bound by a company. Now he has become more mature. Seeing him standing alone on the stage, I can't help but feel that he is becoming more and more out of reach. Perhaps because of this, after the disbandment, Yunho ignored Jaejoong's calls. I think he must be extremely scared in his heart. The young boy who once needed his protection no longer needs him anymore. He was afraid of seeing him, so like Zai Zhong, he got drunk and indulged in the sweet time of the past and refused to wake up. Or maybe it's because of the captain's responsibility that he doesn't understand why Jaejoong and the others want to leave the company. After all, that's where they were trained. Without SM, TVXQ wouldn't be the glorious TVXQ it is today. And Zai Zhong chose to leave, which for him would be like a departure from his previous dream, so he didn't know how to face him. I'm sorry, I love you. This was Jaejoong's monologue to Yunho, but he was unconscious and could not hear such an affectionate confession. He didn't want to be hurt, so he kept his feelings to himself. I thought of the song "Why Did I Fall in Love with You" that they sang, and I felt that the lyrics of that song were equally applicable to them. "Why do I fall in love with you/No matter how time passes, you will always be here/But you chose a different path... I fell in love with you/We have never gone back at that time (thousands of thoughts)/Why can't I hold your hand again/No matter how time passes, you are always in front of me (always like that)/Even so, even if you haven't left my side/I hope you can always be happy/Even so lonely (even though lonely)" QAQ, you must give them a good ending~~~~~~~~~~~ Afterword I mentioned the song "For You" that Jaejoong sang. I also like that song very much. I'm so touched~~~~~~ "Perhaps our complicated fate/makes each other entangled with each other/let me repay it every day is enough/carrying too much debt..." It was a Korean song - "For You" that Jaejoong sang at the Tokyo Dome during his activities as a member of jyj. Jaejoong's affectionate performance was touching, and it really matched the relationship between them. After reading the copy, people who are familiar with Shinqi will probably be very moved. After many hardships, they won various awards in Asia and finally stood at the pinnacle of Asian idols. However, news of their disbandment later spread. In fact, in the past ten years, there have been rumors of disbandment before, from the Yellow Rose incident at the beginning, Yunho was poisoned, and there were also bad rumors about other people. These rumors were shattered by fans time and time again. I remember how they faced the media and fans and said firmly and confidently in unison: "Hello everyone, we are TVXQ". I was really touched. They grow from young boys to responsible men, which is heartbreaking. During this period, I experienced so much and how much inhumane sadness I experienced. Shinqi is really very loving, and the pair of CPs Douhua has always been talked about by fans. Da Da said that he is a fan, and likes Yunho and Jaejoong. Seeing that Yunho is no longer around Jaejoong, he loses a lot of naughtiness and intimacy with others. He always feels that he keeps a polite distance from others (except for Jaejoong). He also sees Jaejoong crying when he gets drunk, sees Jaejoong saying that he misses his members, sees Jaejoong singing some sad and daydream songs, sees Jaejoong becoming more and more independent, and seeing all the above makes him sad. Then Dada said that when Yun Jae started writing about the real-life background, it was because Yun Jae's relationship was too complicated and confusing. At the same time, he felt that their relationship was very real, and felt that something must have happened behind them. He especially wanted to express the Yun Jae in his imagination, so he started writing. That feeling was both satisfying and comforting to himself - maybe they had really fallen in love, maybe they were still thinking about each other, maybe they would get together again. [My dear, as a pollen, I must hug you affectionately] Damn, no matter whether we can be together or not, I believe they must be the people who cherish each other the most! "When the prosperity dissipates, the storm subsides, everything becomes a thing of the past. I live the free life I once longed for, but I feel lonely. I use alcohol to anesthetize, and I use singing to beg. But you can't see or hear. It's not that you can't, it's that you don't want to. When will you forgive me. I'm sorry, I love you. " Dear Darling, I wanted to cry when I saw your copywriting, Jaejoong's monologue to Yunho~~~~~ The writing is really touching~~~~~~~ Come on! I look forward to giving them a happy ending~ There will also be new articles~~ Ink-stained Qiancheng Fuyumi is here!

The heroine is very pretentious, and who can bear it except Mr. Liang?

Qingyue Kan, who watched it first, probably had the first impression. After watching the greatly evolved version and then watching the new version, it was inevitable that the comparison would be unconscious, but it is still very cute, with a cute little Gong, a defensive master, and a friend who is also talkative and loves to show off.

Why lock the text?

Because this is all fiction?

Geng's slow words and so few words~ Geng's most tiring~

Oh, I've been saving this for a long time and finally posted it, but the princes haven't appeared yet.

Congratulations, you have been hit by the author's red envelope.

So please post a link to the next article.

Is this the appearance of Nanzhu? It seems to be a very unique kind of Nanzhu... Currently I prefer Nanzhu, it feels very simple. The author will update it soon, I want to read it...

La la la, I remembered the password again

Third update, thank you for your hard work~~

Ending with flowers???(●˙?˙●)???

Uh, that, that's okay! The ones behind are taking over, you know.

I feel like the author has written Yukimura in a bad light, which makes me feel a little distressed.

Beg! Even! New! QAQQQQQ

Damn, I've finally waited for you! Mwah

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Am I too harsh? (⊙O⊙)…My blood boils as soon as I see the title. I can't live without blood~~~~(>_<)~~~~