It's a very cliché story, an ordinary woman meets a domineering man who has all the power in the world.
They met by chance and entered the palace by chance.
She just wanted to spend her life in an ordinary way, with no desires or demands. But when she met the domineering and handsome man... The man who controlled the world, he never allowed her to refuse.
So he and she began their emotional entanglement...
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If the tabloid has a nose and an eye, that's good!
Haha, come on, come and scatter flowers...
I agreed to write a long review, but until I opened the document, I was still hesitant and felt powerless. To be honest, this article is not my ideal Shendiao fan, so I can't help but worry that the comments will be too subjective and will easily deviate from the topic. But since I agreed, I had no choice but to bite the bullet and write it down.
What first attracted me to "Fu Mian Peach Blossom" was the protagonist Guo Fu. The woman Guo Fu in the original work is by no means a positive image. She is willful and arrogant, has mediocre martial arts, and her intelligence is not outstanding even if it is not dull. However, she has a good appearance, and what is more useful than a good appearance is a good family background. So I couldn't help but wonder how the world of the divine sculpture would change if this woman was no longer herself and replaced by someone else.
The first thing I came into contact with was the copywriting of this article. The sentence "I'm not a prostitute, I'm not a prostitute, I won't dismantle Yang Long's CP, the protagonist is a normal human being with upright views" immediately attracted me to read the text, and I couldn't help but be amazed. Well, actually it is definitely not easy to be amazed by a beginning, but I did feel like my eyes were bright at that time. Why? It's definitely not because of the main plot that has no shadow at all, but because of the author's writing style. Sigh, when you praise an article, starting from the writing, you will inevitably be suspected of prevaricating, but I am not perfunctory. The writing style of this article gives me the feeling not of being gorgeous, but of being sophisticated and leisurely. Although the opening chapter is a description of the scenery, the text reveals a kind of nature, which is well integrated with the era in which the story is set. It does not have an unconventional modern style, nor does it force the text to conform to the words and deeds of the ancients. The smooth, natural and not dry opening is definitely a good way to attract readers.
And as I continued reading, I came to a second sense of satisfaction: not darkening the original characters. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. When I read fan fiction, especially time travel fan fiction, what I fear most is that the time travellers use modern ideas to judge the characters of that era casually from a high position. Whether it is criticizing the characters' thoughts or complaining about the characters' personalities, this approach makes me feel sick. So when Guo Fu in this article mentioned her father Guo Jing, she used the sentence "He held himself so awkwardly that he was afraid of falling, and he was so nervous that he seemed to be frightened." I immediately decided to pursue this article just for this sentence. No matter what the author's true thoughts are about the characters in the original work, since he writes a fanfic, he should have corresponding respect for the original work. There are many protagonists in time-travel fan fiction who always self-righteously define the original characters, and then try to transform others through time-travelling. But such a protagonist is no longer a character written by the author, but has become the author himself. When the character becomes God, then an article has no meaning. From this point of view, I am grateful to the author for allowing the protagonist Guo Fu of this article to exist from beginning to end, instead of transforming into a god due to time travel. In the end, he lost his own personality and became a prop to develop the plot.
Having said that, let's say a few more digressions. Although this article's attitude towards the original characters surprised me, it is a pity that these original characters have gradually become passers-by from supporting roles, and this article has gradually become original from a fan at the beginning. No matter Guo Jing, Huang Rong at the beginning, Huang Yaoshi Cheng Ying and others later, or even Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu in the original work, as the plot unfolded and the relationship between the male and female protagonists developed, they all... Disappeared from the world. I didn't pay much attention to this because I kept following the article, but when I came to the end of the article and looked back, I couldn't help but feel embarrassed - obviously what I wanted to read at the beginning was a Shendiao fan, not a biography of a time-travel heroine. I'm not sure what the author was thinking when he first started writing this article. Have you ever paid attention to downplaying the fan background and focusing on developing your own original settings? If I think about it carefully, it was actually hinted that this article was starting to deviate towards originality as early as when the subplot of Feng Heng's mother's family surfaced, but I didn't realize it.
But in any case, even from an original point of view, this article is undoubtedly a masterpiece. The original characters such as Feng Dingchu and Xin Shiyi are all well-shaped, and even the playboy Zhao Min is also vivid, and the male protagonist Boyan is even more handsome and a perfect match for Guo Fu. But compared with the clear writing style and characters of this article, the plot is a bit weak. When I say "weak plot", I don't mean the lack of climax or bloodshed, but it's a pity that this article did not involve some deeper collisions. It may be a bit abstract to say this, but I think the author should be able to understand what I want to say based on the discussion between the author and the reader about the fact that Guo Fu is the daughter of Guo Jing and married to Boyan, a high-ranking Mongolian official. Yes, I am looking forward to watching Guo Fu struggle as hard as she can in the gap between the Song Dynasty and Mongolia. But it is obvious that the author understated this point and passed it over in one stroke without touching it. I feel somewhat regretful about this. It is obvious that the identities of Guo Fu and Boyan are so extraordinary, and their respective nationalities are definitely a great test for them. Although their personalities are not unshakable by others' comments, their emotions should not be shaken from the depths of their hearts. They should never be as plain and calm as the author writes. Although Guo Fu is a time traveler, it still makes me feel unreal that many years after marrying Boyan, she simply passed by. This is a kind of unwillingness caused by seeing a fierce conflict coming but disintegrating in an instant. I just feel that the author has failed the life backgrounds of Guo Fu Boyan and this extremely turbulent but also wonderful troubled world.
And seeing that the author of this chapter had something to say, I also understood that the author was also aware of this problem. Although they try to be more restrained when it comes to sensitive topics, the result is inevitably dull and tasteless. Rather than being so original, wouldn't it be better if this article was simply positioned as a Shendiao fanfic from the beginning, downplaying the history and emphasizing it? However, this is too innocuous to say. Now that the male protagonist Boyan has been chosen, the subsequent development can only be said to be inevitable. Although the ending is a bit anticlimactic compared to the beginning, it is finally over. So I took a deep breath and looked forward to the author's new article.
It is the so-called "long commentary on the day when the city is broken", and the task is completed. However, even though it is a long review, after reading it, I feel that there are still too many bricks, which is embarrassing.
Boy, this look makes Ziji even more jealous, haha...
And I am writing about other people... I feel like the previous abuse of NC ended very soon...
... Why there are so many barbecued pork...
Damn it, the big kids are already in elementary school.
Catching insects~
So Xu Qi never takes the initiative to touch Wu Zhe... Never takes the initiative
With his, it can be misleading... Isn't this sentence a bit flawed? ! With him, you can mislead
If the tabloid has a nose and an eye, that's good!
Haha, come on, come and scatter flowers...
I agreed to write a long review, but until I opened the document, I was still hesitant and felt powerless. To be honest, this article is not my ideal Shendiao fan, so I can't help but worry that the comments will be too subjective and will easily deviate from the topic. But since I agreed, I had no choice but to bite the bullet and write it down. What first attracted me to "Fu Mian Peach Blossom" was the protagonist Guo Fu. The woman Guo Fu in the original work is by no means a positive image. She is willful and arrogant, has mediocre martial arts, and her intelligence is not outstanding even if it is not dull. However, she has a good appearance, and what is more useful than a good appearance is a good family background. So I couldn't help but wonder how the world of the divine sculpture would change if this woman was no longer herself and replaced by someone else. The first thing I came into contact with was the copywriting of this article. The sentence "I'm not a prostitute, I'm not a prostitute, I won't dismantle Yang Long's CP, the protagonist is a normal human being with upright views" immediately attracted me to read the text, and I couldn't help but be amazed. Well, actually it is definitely not easy to be amazed by a beginning, but I did feel like my eyes were bright at that time. Why? It's definitely not because of the main plot that has no shadow at all, but because of the author's writing style. Sigh, when you praise an article, starting from the writing, you will inevitably be suspected of prevaricating, but I am not perfunctory. The writing style of this article gives me the feeling not of being gorgeous, but of being sophisticated and leisurely. Although the opening chapter is a description of the scenery, the text reveals a kind of nature, which is well integrated with the era in which the story is set. It does not have an unconventional modern style, nor does it force the text to conform to the words and deeds of the ancients. The smooth, natural and not dry opening is definitely a good way to attract readers. And as I continued reading, I came to a second sense of satisfaction: not darkening the original characters. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. When I read fan fiction, especially time travel fan fiction, what I fear most is that the time travellers use modern ideas to judge the characters of that era casually from a high position. Whether it is criticizing the characters' thoughts or complaining about the characters' personalities, this approach makes me feel sick. So when Guo Fu in this article mentioned her father Guo Jing, she used the sentence "He held himself so awkwardly that he was afraid of falling, and he was so nervous that he seemed to be frightened." I immediately decided to pursue this article just for this sentence. No matter what the author's true thoughts are about the characters in the original work, since he writes a fanfic, he should have corresponding respect for the original work. There are many protagonists in time-travel fan fiction who always self-righteously define the original characters, and then try to transform others through time-travelling. But such a protagonist is no longer a character written by the author, but has become the author himself. When the character becomes God, then an article has no meaning. From this point of view, I am grateful to the author for allowing the protagonist Guo Fu of this article to exist from beginning to end, instead of transforming into a god due to time travel. In the end, he lost his own personality and became a prop to develop the plot. Having said that, let's say a few more digressions. Although this article's attitude towards the original characters surprised me, it is a pity that these original characters have gradually become passers-by from supporting roles, and this article has gradually become original from a fan at the beginning. No matter Guo Jing, Huang Rong at the beginning, Huang Yaoshi Cheng Ying and others later, or even Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu in the original work, as the plot unfolded and the relationship between the male and female protagonists developed, they all... Disappeared from the world. I didn't pay much attention to this because I kept following the article, but when I came to the end of the article and looked back, I couldn't help but feel embarrassed - obviously what I wanted to read at the beginning was a Shendiao fan, not a biography of a time-travel heroine. I'm not sure what the author was thinking when he first started writing this article. Have you ever paid attention to downplaying the fan background and focusing on developing your own original settings? If I think about it carefully, it was actually hinted that this article was starting to deviate towards originality as early as when the subplot of Feng Heng's mother's family surfaced, but I didn't realize it. But in any case, even from an original point of view, this article is undoubtedly a masterpiece. The original characters such as Feng Dingchu and Xin Shiyi are all well-shaped, and even the playboy Zhao Min is also vivid, and the male protagonist Boyan is even more handsome and a perfect match for Guo Fu. But compared with the clear writing style and characters of this article, the plot is a bit weak. When I say "weak plot", I don't mean the lack of climax or bloodshed, but it's a pity that this article did not involve some deeper collisions. It may be a bit abstract to say this, but I think the author should be able to understand what I want to say based on the discussion between the author and the reader about the fact that Guo Fu is the daughter of Guo Jing and married to Boyan, a high-ranking Mongolian official. Yes, I am looking forward to watching Guo Fu struggle as hard as she can in the gap between the Song Dynasty and Mongolia. But it is obvious that the author understated this point and passed it over in one stroke without touching it. I feel somewhat regretful about this. It is obvious that the identities of Guo Fu and Boyan are so extraordinary, and their respective nationalities are definitely a great test for them. Although their personalities are not unshakable by others' comments, their emotions should not be shaken from the depths of their hearts. They should never be as plain and calm as the author writes. Although Guo Fu is a time traveler, it still makes me feel unreal that many years after marrying Boyan, she simply passed by. This is a kind of unwillingness caused by seeing a fierce conflict coming but disintegrating in an instant. I just feel that the author has failed the life backgrounds of Guo Fu Boyan and this extremely turbulent but also wonderful troubled world. And seeing that the author of this chapter had something to say, I also understood that the author was also aware of this problem. Although they try to be more restrained when it comes to sensitive topics, the result is inevitably dull and tasteless. Rather than being so original, wouldn't it be better if this article was simply positioned as a Shendiao fanfic from the beginning, downplaying the history and emphasizing it? However, this is too innocuous to say. Now that the male protagonist Boyan has been chosen, the subsequent development can only be said to be inevitable. Although the ending is a bit anticlimactic compared to the beginning, it is finally over. So I took a deep breath and looked forward to the author's new article. It is the so-called "long commentary on the day when the city is broken", and the task is completed. However, even though it is a long review, after reading it, I feel that there are still too many bricks, which is embarrassing.
Boy, this look makes Ziji even more jealous, haha... And I am writing about other people... I feel like the previous abuse of NC ended very soon...
... Why there are so many barbecued pork...
Damn it, the big kids are already in elementary school.
Catching insects~ So Xu Qi never takes the initiative to touch Wu Zhe... Never takes the initiative With his, it can be misleading... Isn't this sentence a bit flawed? ! With him, you can mislead