You Are My Plaything (Original Name: Yi Tianxia, The Mother of the Best Killer in the World)
你是我的玩物(原名:天下第一杀手之母仪天下)
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 181k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 18y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Stats
101Favorites
68Chapters
1.5kClicks / chapter
204Comments
看到这里感觉剧情逻辑已经从偏离逐步走到了扭曲的程度了。被王子调戏说出来是败坏名誉的,那被安文调戏了说出来就不是了吗?最后锅还要兄妹俩背。安文这解决问题的能力怎么斗死公爵其他的儿子现在还能好好地光鲜于众人之前的?兄妹俩的设定都很强,但是剧情发展上完全看不出来。感觉大部分剧情的发展是为了虐而虐,强行虐女主,强行制造麻烦,比方说秘密永远不能保存住,两次以死人和良心谴责收场,虐韦翰也是半途而废,兄妹相聚坑弟弟也不做解释,还有很多剧情逻辑奇怪的地方就不一一列举了。和本文的缘分大概也就到此为止了。最后奉劝作者一句话,傻白甜逻辑扭曲但至少看着开心所以有人追,但是虐文还逻辑扭曲真的就没什么看点了。通俗的说,实力不到位别强行写虐文。看文多年,第一次发语气这么重的评论,因为能看到这里说明你肯定有一些长处的地方,真心希望你能顺顺逻辑,别再这么想当然地写了。希望以后能看到你有好的作品。
This article is so touching. It reminds me of my old days in school. It's really touching... Author, please don't give up. Keep up the good work.
The characters are very delicate and lovable
设定好新,大大加油啦!
What is behind the malice and absurdity of a rebellious twelve-year-old boy? Too many people know clearly, and too many people turn a blind eye. Leyang is a heart-wrenching child, and I look forward to more plots about him.