I am an innocent and lovely little girl;
Destined to fight against the bald monk!
So everyone called me little witch;
The witch is just a witch, and the Four Shaolin Shows are the power I give them!
But things unfolded increasingly out of my control;
Suddenly my world changed;
How should I choose?
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Reader comments
When this article was finished, I read it and read it for three days at a stretch. I often cried while reading it. I cried when they were sad, they cried when they were tender, they shed tears during their vivid daily interactions, and they shed tears when they were sadistic. Until the end of the story, I started writing a long review with red eyes. As the author said, you can feel it in the story. This is not the outline that the author originally wanted to write, but it does not prevent it from being a good article. There is not too much twist and conflict in the whole article, but it is not peaceful either. Three days seems to have followed them through a long half life, like watching a two-hour movie, an immersive following experience. The author's small foreshadowings are well laid out, and the title and summary of each chapter are also very concise. There is no intrigue story, but it can be read with gusto at such a long length. I like Fang Wei, this forced split personality, this little Huya who has some bad ideas from time to time, this little Huya who will do everything conscientiously, this woman who has been reborn alone, whose experience is heartbreaking but so powerful. I like her calmness when she is not loved, her generous response when she is loved, her dignity and quietness when she is dumped, her attitude of not complaining about others, her gentleness of taking care of others, and her little Huya's small temper and little ghost. There may be some things in the story that may seem unreasonable. For example, he was thin and short due to malnutrition when he was young, but at just over 1.6 Meters, emm is not really short. Another example is that in order to induce Fang Wei's fear of mental illness, Xu would pinch his neck repeatedly when playing. After imagining it several times with his eyes closed, he felt that even a normal person would be afraid of such a scene. When I read some details, I marveled at the author's writing style, which can be written so fluently. The psychological changes of the divorce and the calm expectation, Fang Wei's move forward alone after being stimulated, and even the plot of her stuffing back the plane ticket and deciding to walk alone in the current city. Every psychological change and every growth of them are like real people. At this point in the story, we have lost the right to spy. I wish Miss Fang and Miss Xu peace and happiness in their world. I wish Dad Xu can be out of the air force without bait. I wish Xiaoxi and Xiaobai Ningxuan become a regular at the film festival. Thank you to the author for the story. See you again.
Oh my god, this update time, please don't be fooled.
Even if Jinde doesn't like Shu Yierha, he shouldn't treat the royal princess like this, it's unreasonable
It is easy to fall in love but difficult to get along with each other. In love, pride is the most essential luxury. Bi Ke's choice is cruel, but it is correct. They will eventually end because he does not love her enough. He loves his own ideals and freedom more, while Mingruo does not understand love when she encounters love.
The male protagonist leaves no room for action
I looked at the arrow without feathers first, it looks great~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Supplementary points
I feel very aggrieved when I read this article...
I hate Bi Ke very much, and I feel sorry for Wei Lan. Not every relationship has a result. Someone you love deeply may not necessarily have the same feelings for you, so people who are in love are so happy.
I hate Bi Ke very much, and I feel sorry for Wei Lan. Not every relationship has a result. Someone you love deeply may not necessarily have the same feelings for you, so people who are in love are so happy.
I hate Bi Ke very much, and I feel sorry for Wei Lan. Not every relationship has a result. Someone you love deeply may not necessarily have the same feelings for you, so people who are in love are so happy.
Damn, thank you for your hard work, this shadow man... I still won't guess anymore, hehe, let's wait and see.
Bai Yang started to touch the two father and son, why didn't he discuss it with Chu Xiao?
Spread flowers, I remember that I opened your article N times every day, but it didn't update.
I thought you gave up, oh~~ it'll be fine if you come back
Don't run away again
Sir, since you participated in the Yue Du Ji competition, will it be updated on that day? You see, your voting results are only so low. .
In fact, I am urging adults to write well and update more~
By the way, why can't I cast five votes from one IP?
Isn't it said that one IP can cast five votes? ?
Update soon ah ah ah
Did this... Just disappear like this...
But I still like her very much~~~~Oh hehehehehe~~~~Keep up the good work~~~~O(∩_∩)O~
What happened to Lin Lei and Lin Bing in the end? What does the extra chapter mean?
It's not a good surname but Wu. Wu Qi's weapons are so unpleasant!
Also, don't tell me that the white T-shirt is Xiangzi, I'll beat you to death with a gold brick!
There are seven classes a day, in addition to ABCDEFG, which are 1234567, or writing about people, things, things, scenes, plant cells, animal cells, Asia, Africa, South America, North America, Europe, Oceania, Antarctica, and finally, on X, month, day, day, time, China signed the XX Treaty...
Tears... Winter vacation, winter vacation, come quickly55555555555555
How do you say it (?
The review is too bad
No requirements, just want to update
Not bad. Especially the last two chapters are very touching. I almost cried to death.
8 Pass I feel like some places are a little far-fetched. Isn't it because Duan Xiaochun is very smart? Why did he choose such a stupid method to treat his daughter? It feels like he just wants to die vigorously. Isn't Duan Shuang very clever? She had seen all these people so clearly, so how could she suddenly be tapped on acupuncture points and not be at all wary of that old monk?
Sir, come on, continue watching your second part:)
How do you say this~
Duan Xiaochun should have sneaked into Shaolin, but I think she couldn't find Shuang's hiding place for a while. I should have mentioned that someone was killed in the temple, so they decided to tie Shuang to the Main Hall in order to lure Duan Xiaochun to appear in broad daylight. Based on this situation, Duan Xiaochun just wanted to die. He was even prepared to die with her without being able to save Shuang, but even if he died, he would kill him in a dark way~~~~
As for Shuang being controlled by the old monk, I think there is no problem at all. Because Shuang's nature is still very real, I think she is willing to trust people. She is smart, but she does not need to be deified, and the old monk has no ill intentions. This is the most important thing... This monk actually has a big mystery, which will be explained in "No Feather Arrow". If you come back to it this way, there should be no problem:)
Okay, that's my answer here
Thank you for reading my article so carefully, I am so moved~~
I can't help crying every time I read the last two chapters, they are so well written. I wonder if Plankton thought about the scene of the death of Ye Erniang in The Legend of The Dragon when he wrote this ending. I was also quite moved when I was watching Jin Yong's scene, but what Plankton wrote was even more touching. Please fill in the hole as soon as possible.
Answer:
Thank you, I really didn't think about Tian Long Ba Bu, because the inspiration for writing this article was "Snowflake Divine Sword", and when I started writing it, I thought of getting closer to Jin Yong's grammar, which led to the current article:)
When the whole series is finished, can I publish a book? It's very beautiful. It would be perfect if I could have a book that I could hold in my hand and read all the time! ! !
I didn't expect a fellow countryman to write such an interesting story. . . . . . . .
Keep up the good work! ! !
I especially like your "hot dry noodles for breakfast" here, hey, my mouth is watering. . . .
The writing is really good, but it's a pity that I only saw it now. It seems that there are so many good articles buried in JJ.
I'm still crying now...
I looked at the arrow without feathers first, it looks good~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My review: A martial arts novel, telling the story of a little girl from a demon sect who teases an upright person from a well-known family.
-The concept is unique. At first I thought it was a plagiarism of Snowflake Excalibur, but later I found it was completely different, especially in the sequel. The little girl grew up and became a cool girl, smart and generous.
-Some places are quite humorous
Major drawbacks:
-The text is not rigorous enough
When this article was finished, I read it and read it for three days at a stretch. I often cried while reading it. I cried when they were sad, they cried when they were tender, they shed tears during their vivid daily interactions, and they shed tears when they were sadistic. Until the end of the story, I started writing a long review with red eyes. As the author said, you can feel it in the story. This is not the outline that the author originally wanted to write, but it does not prevent it from being a good article. There is not too much twist and conflict in the whole article, but it is not peaceful either. Three days seems to have followed them through a long half life, like watching a two-hour movie, an immersive following experience. The author's small foreshadowings are well laid out, and the title and summary of each chapter are also very concise. There is no intrigue story, but it can be read with gusto at such a long length. I like Fang Wei, this forced split personality, this little Huya who has some bad ideas from time to time, this little Huya who will do everything conscientiously, this woman who has been reborn alone, whose experience is heartbreaking but so powerful. I like her calmness when she is not loved, her generous response when she is loved, her dignity and quietness when she is dumped, her attitude of not complaining about others, her gentleness of taking care of others, and her little Huya's small temper and little ghost. There may be some things in the story that may seem unreasonable. For example, he was thin and short due to malnutrition when he was young, but at just over 1.6 Meters, emm is not really short. Another example is that in order to induce Fang Wei's fear of mental illness, Xu would pinch his neck repeatedly when playing. After imagining it several times with his eyes closed, he felt that even a normal person would be afraid of such a scene. When I read some details, I marveled at the author's writing style, which can be written so fluently. The psychological changes of the divorce and the calm expectation, Fang Wei's move forward alone after being stimulated, and even the plot of her stuffing back the plane ticket and deciding to walk alone in the current city. Every psychological change and every growth of them are like real people. At this point in the story, we have lost the right to spy. I wish Miss Fang and Miss Xu peace and happiness in their world. I wish Dad Xu can be out of the air force without bait. I wish Xiaoxi and Xiaobai Ningxuan become a regular at the film festival. Thank you to the author for the story. See you again.
Oh my god, this update time, please don't be fooled.
Even if Jinde doesn't like Shu Yierha, he shouldn't treat the royal princess like this, it's unreasonable
It is easy to fall in love but difficult to get along with each other. In love, pride is the most essential luxury. Bi Ke's choice is cruel, but it is correct. They will eventually end because he does not love her enough. He loves his own ideals and freedom more, while Mingruo does not understand love when she encounters love.
The male protagonist leaves no room for action
I looked at the arrow without feathers first, it looks great~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Supplementary points
I feel very aggrieved when I read this article...
I hate Bi Ke very much, and I feel sorry for Wei Lan. Not every relationship has a result. Someone you love deeply may not necessarily have the same feelings for you, so people who are in love are so happy.
I hate Bi Ke very much, and I feel sorry for Wei Lan. Not every relationship has a result. Someone you love deeply may not necessarily have the same feelings for you, so people who are in love are so happy.
I hate Bi Ke very much, and I feel sorry for Wei Lan. Not every relationship has a result. Someone you love deeply may not necessarily have the same feelings for you, so people who are in love are so happy.
Damn, thank you for your hard work, this shadow man... I still won't guess anymore, hehe, let's wait and see.
Bai Yang started to touch the two father and son, why didn't he discuss it with Chu Xiao?
Spread flowers, I remember that I opened your article N times every day, but it didn't update. I thought you gave up, oh~~ it'll be fine if you come back Don't run away again
Sir, since you participated in the Yue Du Ji competition, will it be updated on that day? You see, your voting results are only so low. . In fact, I am urging adults to write well and update more~ By the way, why can't I cast five votes from one IP? Isn't it said that one IP can cast five votes? ? Update soon ah ah ah
Did this... Just disappear like this... But I still like her very much~~~~Oh hehehehehe~~~~Keep up the good work~~~~O(∩_∩)O~
What happened to Lin Lei and Lin Bing in the end? What does the extra chapter mean?
It's not a good surname but Wu. Wu Qi's weapons are so unpleasant! Also, don't tell me that the white T-shirt is Xiangzi, I'll beat you to death with a gold brick!
There are seven classes a day, in addition to ABCDEFG, which are 1234567, or writing about people, things, things, scenes, plant cells, animal cells, Asia, Africa, South America, North America, Europe, Oceania, Antarctica, and finally, on X, month, day, day, time, China signed the XX Treaty... Tears... Winter vacation, winter vacation, come quickly55555555555555
How do you say it (? The review is too bad
No requirements, just want to update
Not bad. Especially the last two chapters are very touching. I almost cried to death. 8 Pass I feel like some places are a little far-fetched. Isn't it because Duan Xiaochun is very smart? Why did he choose such a stupid method to treat his daughter? It feels like he just wants to die vigorously. Isn't Duan Shuang very clever? She had seen all these people so clearly, so how could she suddenly be tapped on acupuncture points and not be at all wary of that old monk? Sir, come on, continue watching your second part:)
How do you say this~ Duan Xiaochun should have sneaked into Shaolin, but I think she couldn't find Shuang's hiding place for a while. I should have mentioned that someone was killed in the temple, so they decided to tie Shuang to the Main Hall in order to lure Duan Xiaochun to appear in broad daylight. Based on this situation, Duan Xiaochun just wanted to die. He was even prepared to die with her without being able to save Shuang, but even if he died, he would kill him in a dark way~~~~ As for Shuang being controlled by the old monk, I think there is no problem at all. Because Shuang's nature is still very real, I think she is willing to trust people. She is smart, but she does not need to be deified, and the old monk has no ill intentions. This is the most important thing... This monk actually has a big mystery, which will be explained in "No Feather Arrow". If you come back to it this way, there should be no problem:) Okay, that's my answer here Thank you for reading my article so carefully, I am so moved~~
I can't help crying every time I read the last two chapters, they are so well written. I wonder if Plankton thought about the scene of the death of Ye Erniang in The Legend of The Dragon when he wrote this ending. I was also quite moved when I was watching Jin Yong's scene, but what Plankton wrote was even more touching. Please fill in the hole as soon as possible.
Answer: Thank you, I really didn't think about Tian Long Ba Bu, because the inspiration for writing this article was "Snowflake Divine Sword", and when I started writing it, I thought of getting closer to Jin Yong's grammar, which led to the current article:)
When the whole series is finished, can I publish a book? It's very beautiful. It would be perfect if I could have a book that I could hold in my hand and read all the time! ! !
I didn't expect a fellow countryman to write such an interesting story. . . . . . . . Keep up the good work! ! ! I especially like your "hot dry noodles for breakfast" here, hey, my mouth is watering. . . .
The writing is really good, but it's a pity that I only saw it now. It seems that there are so many good articles buried in JJ.
I'm still crying now...
I looked at the arrow without feathers first, it looks good~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My review: A martial arts novel, telling the story of a little girl from a demon sect who teases an upright person from a well-known family. -The concept is unique. At first I thought it was a plagiarism of Snowflake Excalibur, but later I found it was completely different, especially in the sequel. The little girl grew up and became a cool girl, smart and generous. -Some places are quite humorous Major drawbacks: -The text is not rigorous enough