In the distant star of Alma, there lives such a special group of intelligent beings. They have no childhood, no old age, no birth, and no real death. They came to the world in a very special way, retaining the most primitive memories of existence in the reincarnations of generations. They are the Tianxu people. After every Tianxiu person finds the person he likes, if he wants to become a partner with that person, he must go through a life-and-death coming-of-age ceremony. The winner of the ceremony will become the absolute dominant player in the relationship. The losing side is called - Qizi
Concept: A love story about a couple whose love cannot be stopped by time and space. In the story, no difficulties can make them succumb. Even if they are full of setbacks and die, their souls are immortal and their true love is eternal.
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How can I put it, I feel... Why does Ranpo only have extras? How can it be repaired! ! It also feels like a perfect match for Xiao Qian!
"The ancient Greeks believed that humans originally had four arms, four legs, and two complete faces. However, the gods were worried that the integrity of humans would hinder their worship, so they split the humans in two. The separated humans wandered in pain on the earth. From then on, people have been searching for their other half in the name of love forever."
It is indeed a masterpiece written 11 years ago. I am so happy to have read this book on Valentine's Day. I would like to thank the author for such a shocking story.
It is difficult for me to accurately use "plot line" and "emotional line" to summarize "Qizi". At the source of all conflicts, before all tragedies have happened, the Tianxiu people were born out of love. The story is more like a space opera than a science fiction, and the dramatic conflicts that occur all stem from love. After killing his lover, the founding fathers endured the humiliation and fulfilled the long-cherished wishes of all the "lone stars" to establish a republic. Can it be superficially understood that the republic was born out of love? Every sentence of this grand worldview is inseparable from love. The author wrote all kinds of love in 600,000 words. Thinking about it this way, it feels like whether a mountain is a mountain or whether a water is water.
When I first read it, I really didn't understand the Amian Spouse System, and I even read it with the idea of "how can love be born in such a deformed system." When I saw the ending, I just wanted to say that the entire story reflected the phrase "the soul is immortal, true love is eternal" in the text. Returning to the proportion of the plot line and the emotional line, I can only simply and crudely summarize it as the emotional line accounts for 100%. The author even used this article to make something similar to a social experiment, the Tianxiu Spouse System, a story about "love, freedom, and life" "Life" was sorted, and the words near the end read: When this article was first published, there were countless opponents of the Tiansu spouse system. I don't know if you are still there now. There is a multiple-choice question at the end of today's chapter. Everyone is welcome to participate in deciding the future of Tiansu. It is no exaggeration to say that I got goosebumps when I read this sentence. When I read the "Royal Sky" chapter, I still had a grudge against this system. However, the love of the protagonist made me understand this as a bug, or an indispensable part to promote the development of the plot, the elephant in the room. But as the plot progresses, layers of the history of Tianxiu star emerge from the water, unfolding like a cocoon. The promise made from generation to generation, the love that has gone through hardships and reincarnations but never ends, makes me burst into tears again and again.
The setting of the deed owner and the deed son is the most suitable for the opening sentence, no one. A machine built for war and killing, it develops love over a long period of time, and then spends its entire life searching for the path of love. As an artificial human, a product of omnics, I almost go against my genes to love you. At this moment, "human" becomes "human". Who can say that this is not free will? Who dares to say that this is not free will? The pain, jealousy, and resentment caused by love are free will itself. The deed owner and the deed child share life. If one dies, the other cannot live alone. I share new life with you and die together.
I would like to use Gibran's words to illustrate this story, "Love gives nothing but itself and takes nothing but itself. Love neither possesses nor is possessed." The soul is equal above all else, the soul is immortal, and true love is eternal.
2026.2.15 Literary review writing of What Is Rebirth?
This review contains a lot of meaningless screaming and spoilers, so newcomers should read with caution!
Stacked armor is just my feeling after reading this. The original content is quoted, but the proportion is very low, and it should not be suspected of violating the author's rights.
I coded about 15k at first, but finally deleted this much...
@ General comment
This is so well written.
It's really amazing. It's one million words and four hundred chapters. You can open a chapter at random, even if it's a story that hasn't been told clearly yet. The main point of view has not yet been pushed to the point where the plot is obscurely revealed from other people's perspectives. It is still said in the setting stage. After you know the whole plot, you don't feel inconsistent. At most, you feel why it is so obscure. But because the person who said this was designed by the author, he was indeed an outsider at the beginning and did not understand it, so it was normal.
Because I have been watching it back every time in the past few years, and only after watching plq did I realize that I had to guess here back then, and it had not yet been decrypted. It just looks really consistent.
I personally think it's really rare to be able to preserve the diversity of everyone's characters and not be OOC at all in such a huge worldview and so much of the past.
The gray line of grass and snakes lies thousands of miles away, this is so well written... I personally think this book is a masterpiece of the author's imagination, a very excellent work.
In addition to being logically self-consistent, there are many other points. The character setting is very symmetrical. In chapter 80, the junior brother will know the past of the senior brother, and in the 160th chapter, the senior brother will know Chen He's past life. After this, there are still two to three hundred chapters that still have something to write and have not been repeated.
Feelings can be said to be extremely pure.
In such a complex worldview, the feelings are so pure and the protagonist does not seem weak or idealistic. It is such a healthy and sound love.
So beautiful, so aesthetic.
I gain something every time I read this article, and I feel it after my mood changes... I love so passionately and purely.
@Conjectures on main character design and group portraits
In terms of character creation as a whole, I think Senior Brother > Junior Brother > Li Yan. But Junior Brother + Li Yan > Senior Brother.
This is my personal opinion, because Li Yan is from an outsider's perspective most of the time, and the Li Yan who actually appears later is not the real Li Yan, but a character who combines Li Yan's memory fragments with the current Chen He. Therefore, although he appears, I don't think he can be portrayed as a complete person, and can only be thought of as another part of his junior brother. Of course, the author did not create them separately, and the senior brother did not understand them separately, but readers may...
However, these two are really good.
Every reincarnation of Yang Xinyue is very easy to beat, and the "human" part of his body is also very strong. The arrogance of the ancient monks, the anger of being attacked, the confusion of sleeping for eight thousand years, and the confusion of "why does this ginseng have such a bad temper" when fighting Shen Yubai?
He is also a very three-dimensional character.
But Nan Hong is that I haven't seen a character that can really be compared to him until now.
But if you write a character like Nan Hong in this life, you will be very successful. Do you understand?
And a very valuable point is that both Shi Zhonghuo and his senior brother are partly similar to Nan Hong, and at the same time they are very cute when they get along with him [it will not appear like the left and right hands of the same person are talking to each other, everyone has their own personality], but Nan Hong is unique.
It's just that I feel that it would take a million-word essay to carve out such a character. But not everyone can have such a role in a million-word long novel.
As for the master, even a mortal can continue on without any sense of disobedience, because he does not feel that he is too weak when he has strength.
It's just that the settings of the protagonist's attacks and attacks have been thrown away in the first two hundred chapters [I'm not saying that the plot of the protagonist's attacks and attacks is not rich. In fact, I don't think it will be repeated in the future]. But Nan Hong continued to throw in new settings until the last fifteen chapters, and it was completely appropriate.
Moreover, many articles say that they don't mind if someone is stronger than me, saying: Ah, this xx and I are a family, but in fact, even my closest Taoist companions and children cannot let them be stronger than me, but this article can really make the protagonist not be the strongest.
After reading a lot of thoughts (Diaijia does not mean to join the party, but I) I feel that good works are like this that you can look back at anytime!
There is a very good design, which means that the examples that must be used when characterizing the protagonist must be the people around him. There are such three-dimensional group portraits of villains and heroes.
Because it's boring to write about righteous people. Three-dimensional villains are often easier to write than three-dimensional righteous characters. The three-dimensional righteous characters often turn into complaints or jokes, or people whose ideas are not exactly the same as those of the protagonist, but the author hardly sees such a bottleneck. The author can write funny stories, or he can write very serious ones.
Cui can be so three-dimensional because he is a person who doesn't touch anything. For example, Immortal Lord Yunchen is so three-dimensional because his accompanying immortal weapons are Huanjian and Black Abyss Valley Master (the reason for stacking armor is that he appeared relatively late). And conspiracy theories have deceived many people.
If you want to write about a kind person, you will be like a saint. If you want to write about someone who is not evil, some people say that being dark will be boring. Being obsessed with the past and always being sad will make the reader ordinary. If you write about someone who is not sad at all, it will make the reader feel pretentious.
To put it simply, it is easy to write about justice, to be like a saint, to write about kindness, to be pretentious, to write about sadness, to be pretentious, and to write about open-mindedness, it is easy to be pretentious.
But the shaping of Nam Hung succeeds in this situation. And there is no trace of carving at all, as if it is natural.
@About the relationship between Chen He and Li Yan
And what's particularly embarrassing is that Li Yan looked down on Chen He at first.
Wow, you are so lucky. You have such a good senior brother and master, you have an innate fire spirit as a playmate, and you grew up in the Black Abyss Valley where all the gods are transformed into Mahayana. I don't envy you, nor am I jealous, I just despise you.
When Li Yan knew that "Chen He also liked his senior brother, and Chen He also made his senior brother like him and stay together", he realized, ah, it turns out that the other me is also me.
That is to say, Li Yan doesn't care about everything Chen He has. He doesn't care about Chen He's less hardship or more happiness. He doesn't care about the gold, silver, treasures, heavenly materials and earthly treasures that Chen He may have. He has plenty. He believes that even in this situation he can achieve everything.
But he must admit that Chen He loves his senior brother. Because that's who he is. That is, it turns out that the other me is also me, and it turns out that I can also be like this.
It turns out that this is me too.
Only Ye Feng can write such a healthy relationship so well.
Because the love is the same, even though the path is different.
That is, he could admit that it was me who was happy, loved, self-respecting, and accompanied by my senior brother.
It's not the other person I envy, it's not the mirror image that doesn't exist, it's not the other side that I can't reach.
And that's me.
That is, he actually chose to become Chen He (of course, he has always been this way, this is just Li Yan's phantom, but for him who thinks he is Li Yan, he will not accept it so simply)
The two intertexts between Chen He ver Li Yan and Li Yan ver are quite interesting.
It turns out that I am not destined to live alone for hundreds of years, it turns out that I am not destined to draw faceless people, and it turns out that I am not destined to stand by the stream where he once lived and wait for someone who will never come back.
It turns out that I can also be happy (this kind of happiness is closely related to senior brother, but it is not just about getting senior brother). But from the senior brother, he knows, it turns out that this is me too.
: The other me is also me, that kind of me is also me, and the me now may not be the me in the future, and I may not be the me now.
Why is it not because he is willing to become Chen He because he has received the love of his senior brother?
Because he can no longer deny that at this moment, he is like that moment.
[Li Yan quickly returned his grip, and there was an indescribable hidden fire in his deep eyes.
Like a thirsty person who finally sees an oasis, or like a person who is too poor to eat and suddenly finds an ancestral jade in a dilapidated home.
That's right, that's right! ! ! Very good at describing... It's hard to tell that the article is twelve years old! !
Also, the first time Li Yan and his senior brother did it was [spirits and souls blended together in the clouds and rain in Wushan, and he suddenly forgot everything. Li Yan even had a vague illusion that Shi Feng had never left. After they met in the Chifeng Desert, they became senior brothers, and to this day...
When you wake up from a dream, you know it is just a dream after all.
Except for Shi Feng, he still had nothing.
Silently looking at the person who was in trance, he vaguely traced the outline with his hand, as if the eyebrows, eyes, and corners of his lips became alive under his fingers.
I'm afraid it's just a dream. But [——This is reality, not an illusion of inner demons.
I didn't mean that Li Yan had no self-esteem, but Chen He had a kind of self-confidence. He felt that his own value did not have to be achieved by crushing others.
To put it simply, he is the kind of person who is more reasonable.
Because he has been around since he was a child, adults are trying to reason with him, making him believe that there is a certain amount of truth in the world. And Li Yan has always seen sanctimonious people. From his relatives when he was a child, to Yuanlou when he grew up, and then to the Fusion Sect, he has never lived with anyone in the Black Abyss Valley.
That is, although the Adelists would say that the past does not necessarily determine the future, it still has some influence. Of course, they are all very self-consistent people, and everything has become their skeleton. But what is the composition of bones? How about the color. Although they are all calcified, they are still different.
@ Jade ball
The protagonist left the Black Abyss Valley in the first few pictures and came back only once in 275 pictures.
All the memories of this green jade ball didn't come back until my senior brother ascended. But for Chen He, it has always been that the present time with his senior brother is the most important. It is best if he has the memories of the past, and it doesn't matter if he doesn't.
Moreover, this touching scene is also written very, very well. The picture is of the past, and the viewer is the grown-up Chen He, with a feeling of loss.
That's it
What the readers (together with Chen He) see is the complete happiness that they once had without knowing it. At that time, the senior brother was by his side, and he could reach out and pick him up. At that time, his biggest worry was "There are two over there, and my senior brother can't beat them." At that time, he firmly believed that everything would be better "when I grow up."
But now, he has really grown up and has the ability to "teach them a lesson for his senior brothers", but the person he wants to protect, show off, and show how powerful he is is no longer in this yard.
"He is in the Black Abyss Valley where he has lived with his senior brother for more than ten years. However, Shi Feng will never return here again."
Oh my God, my God! ! !
@ The green jade ball of past and present lives/ten thousand years mirage bead
This mirage ball is quite powerful. It has many shortcomings but is also very good. It is much better than the beryl ball.
The requirements for cultivation are very high and you can't go to the South China Sea, but there are indeed many benefits.
However, this article is handled in such a way that all the golden fingers of the protagonist are pitted, just, very balanced.
Li Yan also had a mirage bead, but Chen He had a ten thousand year mirage bead from the beginning because of the Brotherhood, and Li Yan didn't have such a person around him. Moreover, only Chen He had the green jade ball refined by his elders.
So delicious.
If Li Yan was like this in his previous life, he might open it first.
But Chen He in this life [He was stunned for a long time, and then as if he remembered something, he moved the big box out from under the bed.
He didn't come back to see memories. He "was in a daze for a long time, and then he went to look through the box as if he remembered something." He's not in a hurry. Because the present moment between him and his senior brother [even if his senior brother has ascended] is more important than those memories.
This is not to look down on the past, this is the calmness that only those who live in the present can have. He knew that the past would not run away, so he was in no hurry to go back. He knows that his senior brother is here, so he is not afraid of forgetting.
Moreover, the description of Beauty 1 is always magnificent. Chen Xiaohe has such a controlled appearance to the end and has such a sense of golden words. It is really awesome! ! ! [Too many to list one by one]
Whether it's a sense of regret or that sense of beauty.
Support the United States 1.
I edited a lot of them and deleted them. I was really worried about being regarded as a dream girl. But in fact, the reason readers of this article like senior brother so much is because Chen He likes senior brother!
@About a little bit of throwing settings
Some people say that a good beginning is the end. You don't want the protagonist to appear in a state of "getting ready to go to the battlefield", but let him appear in a state of "reading a thousand sails and traveling in dust". But I also feel that if the ending is too strong, it will fall into an invincible flow. Or trivializing all the suffering the protagonist has suffered before. But this article is about the senior brother appearing in the middle of reading Qianfan, but it is still very interesting.
@About Li Yan's memory Chen He made some reasonable inferences from some reactions before he got it
In fact, I really think that when the time comes, I will start to discuss who has a stronger desire for each other?
I believe everyone has their own opinions, and what I'm saying is just my understanding:
I think the senior brother's desire for the junior brother is much stronger than the junior brother's desire for the senior brother. At first, the junior brother's desire was just to see other aspects of the senior brother. He cared more about the senior brother's expression for this than the specific pleasure and feelings. Later, it was out of Li Yan's subtle possessive desire. Li Yan couldn't get it in his life, but I can touch it easily. A very subtle kind of complacency and self-esteem.
Although the senior brother has always been indifferent, he was actually the one who had the desire first, and it was also him many times after that.
It's just that senior brother's moral bottom line is too high, so as long as Chen He wants it, he will have it, and Chen He won't mention it if he doesn't want it.
The senior brother just looked at the erotic pictures with his junior brother indifferently (although I also suspect that this sentence was just made up by Chen He, but it really is not surprising), just like, Chapter 312: The senior brother calmly let people kill people. He would not kill someone to expose Chen He's identity. It's just that I accidentally didn't hold it down (the alchemist said that Madman Chi let his senior brother successfully deduce it)!
But Chen He is the same, he has a limited appearance, but it's nice to be able to get what he wants. Only control one person's appearance.
I can't stand you two 99
In fact, I really feel that the senior brother is much more in love in the early stage (superposition is only in the early stage, in the senior brother's perspective), or in the perspective of the senior brother before Chapter 160 (in Chapter 166, the senior brother clearly said to me, I know that you liked me in the previous life, but in Chapter 160, I feel that the senior brother has completely guessed it), Chen He does not love each other as much as he does. But he still loves his junior brother. Just, as long as the junior brother also loves me, the rest is actually not that important. After looking back several times, I feel that the senior brother was worried too much at that time, worried that he would fall in love with his junior brother, and worried that his junior brother would not love him. After discovering that his junior brother likes me, he wonders if he doesn't love her that much, if he admits his mistake, if he will become cold and disgusted with her in the future, and then he will be completely helpless.
But the junior brother expressed his liking, so... Well, they got together.
(Junior brother asked for it and gave it to him) (crossed out) (heavy fog)
For senior brother, as long as he doesn't hate himself, that's fine.
As long as my junior brother can be with me and get close to me, it's fine, whether I do it or not, whatever happens is fine.
He just hopes that his junior brother will like him and love him. There is no need to question how much I love him.
The repo is that the senior brother said to his junior brother, "It's not because you are fragile and need protection, it's not because you are pitiful and deserve sympathy."
Just because I like it, I am often afraid that you will suffer losses, worried that you will suffer, and suspect that you are not smart (either intellectually unsmart or worried about being deceived or confused) but will not take the initiative.
At the same time, Chen He is the one who does things when he should do things, and intimidates when he should intimidate. Even if he kills people and sets fires, it will not affect his ability to strategize and act cute in front of his senior brothers... He just controls it very well.
@God, the world is turned upside down, and they are slightly happy.
Mainly, I believe that if you love to a certain extent, you will definitely hope that others will avoid detours, you will definitely hope that the other person can be happy, not to be hurt by anything, and hope that the other person will be like this... This further step is to shape - desire -.
And there is another urge for complete destruction, this step back is destruction - desire -. But Ye Feng is able to write such love so lightly.
Although I completely believed in Ye Feng's level from the beginning, I still choked up after reading this.
At this time, I have to mention Li Yan again. I personally think that a touch of happiness is
[You must first believe that even if you are not shaped or destroyed, you are worthy of being loved. You must first experience (even if only in your imagination) the acceptance that "I don't have to change anything, you are here."
This certainly creates a desire for destruction (rather than be abandoned, I'd rather destroy everything first). It seemed like this was the case when Li Yan appeared, but being able to be cured by his senior brother was a kind of acceptance.
Possession-desire-and shaping-desire-are like small heads and big heads. But I can hardly see it in the senior brother, but in fact the senior brother's emotional character is indeed very strong.
A kind of hands-off, a kind of "even so, still."
@Worldviewshaping
Often fantasy works must be logically self-consistent if they add a lot of new things into a default framework, and they must be written in detail and detail, with a main plot, but the author has undoubtedly done it all.
At the beginning of this article, it seems to be an ordinary world of immortal cultivation. Later, it has such a detailed world view, which I think is also very powerful.
Often when writing some professional content, readers feel that the author looks very professional, and may even make readers feel more professional than writing by someone who has been in the industry for many years.
Making other readers feel that the author is very, very professional... This is an ability. This is professionalism.
Readers can't come over and ask you to do it yourself, and readers can't do it themselves.
So it's more important to appear professional than to actually be professional. It is more important to be easy to understand.
Even this article is like this. Although it is about cultivating immortality, it is completely different from reality, which means that a lot of details need to be filled in. The author tells a very profound story completely self-consistently, and the author writes very confidently.
Everyone really thinks within that worldview.
Each character is very three-dimensional. Even when the protagonist is not mentioned, they are developing their own stories normally. It is not like many entertainment works where everything remains the same if the protagonist does not appear, and everything changes within a few days after the protagonist appears.
There are many characters that I think my understanding is not as good as everyone in the comment area, so I have deleted them.
Thank you very much Ye Feng for bringing such a magnificent story to readers, I believe they will definitely be in that world99.
It was so uncomfortable after reading it, so depressing
When I persuaded Lin to get a dog, I actually hoped that she would have a bond in Spain, and a name and so on.
I remembered a dog I once had. That dog was in Spain and was very obedient.
But what is the other guy doing in Spain?
It's been so long since I last read it that I almost forgot about it, but I still remember the shock that the setting of this book brought to this young me.
I watched it again and was still extremely shocked. I only had one thought: How could there be such a normal and profound love? All the characters have very normal views, and the truth, goodness and beauty are vividly displayed. The author has never shied away from discussing profound issues, and many of his words have made people shout, "I'm so awesome." It's still not out of date even now.
It is very romantic, with discussions on love and profound remarks on truth, goodness and beauty, which are self-contained and are what everyone is looking for.
I always see a sentence saying that normal love is good, but abnormal love is really wonderful.
Does the protagonist of this book have a deformed relationship? I feel that although there is a sense of forced love at the beginning, marriage first and love later, it is completely normal for them to fall in love with each other, they respect each other, their outlook is completely normal, and they are completely destined. After reading it, you will think that holy shit, both protagonists are very charming and transparent. I feel that this is difficult to write well, but the author obviously really understands it. What he writes is very weighty, logically consistent, and the characters are full of character.
When I reopened this book, I actually read it all in one night. I was full of praise for their beautiful love. It was so awesome and romantic! ! I didn't expect this to be a 14-year-old book. What I ate when I was a kid was all fine bran.
Very very beautiful! A very romantic book full of positive energy! This is how love should be! Love at its best! Worth revisiting and learning again and again!
Alas, I feel that at my age, I can't describe love, truth, goodness and beauty in a very logical way, and I don't have a deep understanding of life. I'm very ashamed.
This set of settings is actually not popular. I feel like the author could become popular just by changing the book cover. I recently promoted it in the book recommendation section.
As expected of an old novel, the setting of the deed master and deed son really offends me.
I read it five or six years ago and read it three times. I really like the setting. It's a pity that I haven't seen the same type of writing since then. I really like this very novel and interlocking world view. It's a pity that there is only one extra story after all these years. I really want to see if Hong Mao and the others will meet again in the next life.
T TThis is not an update every other day at all
The author is amazing and the plot is so well written and interlocking.
The last few chapters felt a little rushed, and I felt like they could have been more detailed. Many scenes felt like they were rushed to the next scene without much description. But the faults do not hide the good points. It is a very good article. There are many foreshadowings that I didn't read carefully at the first glance. Wait for me to read it again!
After reading it again, I still really like this setting. I hope the author can use this setting to write a short article again one day, whether it is about this life or the next life.
Ahhhh, the flowers are finished! ! Cat ears and tail play, the heroine has a lot of fun hehe
25.1.5 Once completed
After watching Little Bee, I came to n brush
It's been ten years. I remember I was in high school when I first read it. I didn't expect to review this book again now.
Hey, I still hope that in the end, Ling Xiao can be happy in this life
Did I overcome all the difficulties through hard work and wasted efforts, or can I only renew our relationship in the next life? Thinking of this makes me feel so sad?
Love rises in the east and falls in the west, romance will last until death!
This year is 2026. I regret that I missed this masterpiece for 11 years because I was afraid of being abused. Fortunately, I finally read it this year!
This is the most exciting book I have read this year, and it is also the most disgusting book for me. The combination of a particularly touching setting, very reasonable logic, and a very disgusting love system makes me love and hate it at the same time. I was both pleased and angry at the same time. I don't think this can be considered a scumbag article, it is a truly sour article. Halfway through, I just wanted to know why I came to read this article. I will never read anything related to BDSM again. It really made me feel extremely disgusted. Of course, the author's writing is very good. I think this setting surpasses abo and whistle. I also see that the author has opened up the permissions. I hope to see similar articles in the future.
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Watched it again, it's so beautiful and I love it so much. Goddess, I will follow you for the rest of my life.
The rice tastes so good, I watched it again [Make Me Well]
A hundred faints! ! I'm so confused! Your wife wrote so well! Just can you feed me some extras [poor] [poor]
Ding~Business fluid blessing update is stress-free!
It's so beautiful. I love the author and all the characters in this article.
The same soul, different memories, can they still be considered the same person? Although the two of us can be said to be together forever, I still feel a little uncomfortable [vomiting blood]
My favorite novel in the past? Ahhh, I bought a physical collection for my collection??? I really can't get enough of it [crying]
Here we go again, this is my favorite holographic online game article after all these years.
How can I put it, I feel... Why does Ranpo only have extras? How can it be repaired! ! It also feels like a perfect match for Xiao Qian!
"The ancient Greeks believed that humans originally had four arms, four legs, and two complete faces. However, the gods were worried that the integrity of humans would hinder their worship, so they split the humans in two. The separated humans wandered in pain on the earth. From then on, people have been searching for their other half in the name of love forever." It is indeed a masterpiece written 11 years ago. I am so happy to have read this book on Valentine's Day. I would like to thank the author for such a shocking story. It is difficult for me to accurately use "plot line" and "emotional line" to summarize "Qizi". At the source of all conflicts, before all tragedies have happened, the Tianxiu people were born out of love. The story is more like a space opera than a science fiction, and the dramatic conflicts that occur all stem from love. After killing his lover, the founding fathers endured the humiliation and fulfilled the long-cherished wishes of all the "lone stars" to establish a republic. Can it be superficially understood that the republic was born out of love? Every sentence of this grand worldview is inseparable from love. The author wrote all kinds of love in 600,000 words. Thinking about it this way, it feels like whether a mountain is a mountain or whether a water is water. When I first read it, I really didn't understand the Amian Spouse System, and I even read it with the idea of "how can love be born in such a deformed system." When I saw the ending, I just wanted to say that the entire story reflected the phrase "the soul is immortal, true love is eternal" in the text. Returning to the proportion of the plot line and the emotional line, I can only simply and crudely summarize it as the emotional line accounts for 100%. The author even used this article to make something similar to a social experiment, the Tianxiu Spouse System, a story about "love, freedom, and life" "Life" was sorted, and the words near the end read: When this article was first published, there were countless opponents of the Tiansu spouse system. I don't know if you are still there now. There is a multiple-choice question at the end of today's chapter. Everyone is welcome to participate in deciding the future of Tiansu. It is no exaggeration to say that I got goosebumps when I read this sentence. When I read the "Royal Sky" chapter, I still had a grudge against this system. However, the love of the protagonist made me understand this as a bug, or an indispensable part to promote the development of the plot, the elephant in the room. But as the plot progresses, layers of the history of Tianxiu star emerge from the water, unfolding like a cocoon. The promise made from generation to generation, the love that has gone through hardships and reincarnations but never ends, makes me burst into tears again and again. The setting of the deed owner and the deed son is the most suitable for the opening sentence, no one. A machine built for war and killing, it develops love over a long period of time, and then spends its entire life searching for the path of love. As an artificial human, a product of omnics, I almost go against my genes to love you. At this moment, "human" becomes "human". Who can say that this is not free will? Who dares to say that this is not free will? The pain, jealousy, and resentment caused by love are free will itself. The deed owner and the deed child share life. If one dies, the other cannot live alone. I share new life with you and die together. I would like to use Gibran's words to illustrate this story, "Love gives nothing but itself and takes nothing but itself. Love neither possesses nor is possessed." The soul is equal above all else, the soul is immortal, and true love is eternal.
2026.2.15 Literary review writing of What Is Rebirth? This review contains a lot of meaningless screaming and spoilers, so newcomers should read with caution! Stacked armor is just my feeling after reading this. The original content is quoted, but the proportion is very low, and it should not be suspected of violating the author's rights. I coded about 15k at first, but finally deleted this much... @ General comment This is so well written. It's really amazing. It's one million words and four hundred chapters. You can open a chapter at random, even if it's a story that hasn't been told clearly yet. The main point of view has not yet been pushed to the point where the plot is obscurely revealed from other people's perspectives. It is still said in the setting stage. After you know the whole plot, you don't feel inconsistent. At most, you feel why it is so obscure. But because the person who said this was designed by the author, he was indeed an outsider at the beginning and did not understand it, so it was normal. Because I have been watching it back every time in the past few years, and only after watching plq did I realize that I had to guess here back then, and it had not yet been decrypted. It just looks really consistent. I personally think it's really rare to be able to preserve the diversity of everyone's characters and not be OOC at all in such a huge worldview and so much of the past. The gray line of grass and snakes lies thousands of miles away, this is so well written... I personally think this book is a masterpiece of the author's imagination, a very excellent work. In addition to being logically self-consistent, there are many other points. The character setting is very symmetrical. In chapter 80, the junior brother will know the past of the senior brother, and in the 160th chapter, the senior brother will know Chen He's past life. After this, there are still two to three hundred chapters that still have something to write and have not been repeated. Feelings can be said to be extremely pure. In such a complex worldview, the feelings are so pure and the protagonist does not seem weak or idealistic. It is such a healthy and sound love. So beautiful, so aesthetic. I gain something every time I read this article, and I feel it after my mood changes... I love so passionately and purely. @Conjectures on main character design and group portraits In terms of character creation as a whole, I think Senior Brother > Junior Brother > Li Yan. But Junior Brother + Li Yan > Senior Brother. This is my personal opinion, because Li Yan is from an outsider's perspective most of the time, and the Li Yan who actually appears later is not the real Li Yan, but a character who combines Li Yan's memory fragments with the current Chen He. Therefore, although he appears, I don't think he can be portrayed as a complete person, and can only be thought of as another part of his junior brother. Of course, the author did not create them separately, and the senior brother did not understand them separately, but readers may... However, these two are really good. Every reincarnation of Yang Xinyue is very easy to beat, and the "human" part of his body is also very strong. The arrogance of the ancient monks, the anger of being attacked, the confusion of sleeping for eight thousand years, and the confusion of "why does this ginseng have such a bad temper" when fighting Shen Yubai? He is also a very three-dimensional character. But Nan Hong is that I haven't seen a character that can really be compared to him until now. But if you write a character like Nan Hong in this life, you will be very successful. Do you understand? And a very valuable point is that both Shi Zhonghuo and his senior brother are partly similar to Nan Hong, and at the same time they are very cute when they get along with him [it will not appear like the left and right hands of the same person are talking to each other, everyone has their own personality], but Nan Hong is unique. It's just that I feel that it would take a million-word essay to carve out such a character. But not everyone can have such a role in a million-word long novel. As for the master, even a mortal can continue on without any sense of disobedience, because he does not feel that he is too weak when he has strength. It's just that the settings of the protagonist's attacks and attacks have been thrown away in the first two hundred chapters [I'm not saying that the plot of the protagonist's attacks and attacks is not rich. In fact, I don't think it will be repeated in the future]. But Nan Hong continued to throw in new settings until the last fifteen chapters, and it was completely appropriate. Moreover, many articles say that they don't mind if someone is stronger than me, saying: Ah, this xx and I are a family, but in fact, even my closest Taoist companions and children cannot let them be stronger than me, but this article can really make the protagonist not be the strongest. After reading a lot of thoughts (Diaijia does not mean to join the party, but I) I feel that good works are like this that you can look back at anytime! There is a very good design, which means that the examples that must be used when characterizing the protagonist must be the people around him. There are such three-dimensional group portraits of villains and heroes. Because it's boring to write about righteous people. Three-dimensional villains are often easier to write than three-dimensional righteous characters. The three-dimensional righteous characters often turn into complaints or jokes, or people whose ideas are not exactly the same as those of the protagonist, but the author hardly sees such a bottleneck. The author can write funny stories, or he can write very serious ones. Cui can be so three-dimensional because he is a person who doesn't touch anything. For example, Immortal Lord Yunchen is so three-dimensional because his accompanying immortal weapons are Huanjian and Black Abyss Valley Master (the reason for stacking armor is that he appeared relatively late). And conspiracy theories have deceived many people. If you want to write about a kind person, you will be like a saint. If you want to write about someone who is not evil, some people say that being dark will be boring. Being obsessed with the past and always being sad will make the reader ordinary. If you write about someone who is not sad at all, it will make the reader feel pretentious. To put it simply, it is easy to write about justice, to be like a saint, to write about kindness, to be pretentious, to write about sadness, to be pretentious, and to write about open-mindedness, it is easy to be pretentious. But the shaping of Nam Hung succeeds in this situation. And there is no trace of carving at all, as if it is natural. @About the relationship between Chen He and Li Yan And what's particularly embarrassing is that Li Yan looked down on Chen He at first. Wow, you are so lucky. You have such a good senior brother and master, you have an innate fire spirit as a playmate, and you grew up in the Black Abyss Valley where all the gods are transformed into Mahayana. I don't envy you, nor am I jealous, I just despise you. When Li Yan knew that "Chen He also liked his senior brother, and Chen He also made his senior brother like him and stay together", he realized, ah, it turns out that the other me is also me. That is to say, Li Yan doesn't care about everything Chen He has. He doesn't care about Chen He's less hardship or more happiness. He doesn't care about the gold, silver, treasures, heavenly materials and earthly treasures that Chen He may have. He has plenty. He believes that even in this situation he can achieve everything. But he must admit that Chen He loves his senior brother. Because that's who he is. That is, it turns out that the other me is also me, and it turns out that I can also be like this. It turns out that this is me too. Only Ye Feng can write such a healthy relationship so well. Because the love is the same, even though the path is different. That is, he could admit that it was me who was happy, loved, self-respecting, and accompanied by my senior brother. It's not the other person I envy, it's not the mirror image that doesn't exist, it's not the other side that I can't reach. And that's me. That is, he actually chose to become Chen He (of course, he has always been this way, this is just Li Yan's phantom, but for him who thinks he is Li Yan, he will not accept it so simply) The two intertexts between Chen He ver Li Yan and Li Yan ver are quite interesting. It turns out that I am not destined to live alone for hundreds of years, it turns out that I am not destined to draw faceless people, and it turns out that I am not destined to stand by the stream where he once lived and wait for someone who will never come back. It turns out that I can also be happy (this kind of happiness is closely related to senior brother, but it is not just about getting senior brother). But from the senior brother, he knows, it turns out that this is me too. : The other me is also me, that kind of me is also me, and the me now may not be the me in the future, and I may not be the me now. Why is it not because he is willing to become Chen He because he has received the love of his senior brother? Because he can no longer deny that at this moment, he is like that moment. [Li Yan quickly returned his grip, and there was an indescribable hidden fire in his deep eyes. Like a thirsty person who finally sees an oasis, or like a person who is too poor to eat and suddenly finds an ancestral jade in a dilapidated home. That's right, that's right! ! ! Very good at describing... It's hard to tell that the article is twelve years old! ! Also, the first time Li Yan and his senior brother did it was [spirits and souls blended together in the clouds and rain in Wushan, and he suddenly forgot everything. Li Yan even had a vague illusion that Shi Feng had never left. After they met in the Chifeng Desert, they became senior brothers, and to this day... When you wake up from a dream, you know it is just a dream after all. Except for Shi Feng, he still had nothing. Silently looking at the person who was in trance, he vaguely traced the outline with his hand, as if the eyebrows, eyes, and corners of his lips became alive under his fingers. I'm afraid it's just a dream. But [——This is reality, not an illusion of inner demons. I didn't mean that Li Yan had no self-esteem, but Chen He had a kind of self-confidence. He felt that his own value did not have to be achieved by crushing others. To put it simply, he is the kind of person who is more reasonable. Because he has been around since he was a child, adults are trying to reason with him, making him believe that there is a certain amount of truth in the world. And Li Yan has always seen sanctimonious people. From his relatives when he was a child, to Yuanlou when he grew up, and then to the Fusion Sect, he has never lived with anyone in the Black Abyss Valley. That is, although the Adelists would say that the past does not necessarily determine the future, it still has some influence. Of course, they are all very self-consistent people, and everything has become their skeleton. But what is the composition of bones? How about the color. Although they are all calcified, they are still different. @ Jade ball The protagonist left the Black Abyss Valley in the first few pictures and came back only once in 275 pictures. All the memories of this green jade ball didn't come back until my senior brother ascended. But for Chen He, it has always been that the present time with his senior brother is the most important. It is best if he has the memories of the past, and it doesn't matter if he doesn't. Moreover, this touching scene is also written very, very well. The picture is of the past, and the viewer is the grown-up Chen He, with a feeling of loss. That's it What the readers (together with Chen He) see is the complete happiness that they once had without knowing it. At that time, the senior brother was by his side, and he could reach out and pick him up. At that time, his biggest worry was "There are two over there, and my senior brother can't beat them." At that time, he firmly believed that everything would be better "when I grow up." But now, he has really grown up and has the ability to "teach them a lesson for his senior brothers", but the person he wants to protect, show off, and show how powerful he is is no longer in this yard. "He is in the Black Abyss Valley where he has lived with his senior brother for more than ten years. However, Shi Feng will never return here again." Oh my God, my God! ! ! @ The green jade ball of past and present lives/ten thousand years mirage bead This mirage ball is quite powerful. It has many shortcomings but is also very good. It is much better than the beryl ball. The requirements for cultivation are very high and you can't go to the South China Sea, but there are indeed many benefits. However, this article is handled in such a way that all the golden fingers of the protagonist are pitted, just, very balanced. Li Yan also had a mirage bead, but Chen He had a ten thousand year mirage bead from the beginning because of the Brotherhood, and Li Yan didn't have such a person around him. Moreover, only Chen He had the green jade ball refined by his elders. So delicious. If Li Yan was like this in his previous life, he might open it first. But Chen He in this life [He was stunned for a long time, and then as if he remembered something, he moved the big box out from under the bed. He didn't come back to see memories. He "was in a daze for a long time, and then he went to look through the box as if he remembered something." He's not in a hurry. Because the present moment between him and his senior brother [even if his senior brother has ascended] is more important than those memories. This is not to look down on the past, this is the calmness that only those who live in the present can have. He knew that the past would not run away, so he was in no hurry to go back. He knows that his senior brother is here, so he is not afraid of forgetting. Moreover, the description of Beauty 1 is always magnificent. Chen Xiaohe has such a controlled appearance to the end and has such a sense of golden words. It is really awesome! ! ! [Too many to list one by one] Whether it's a sense of regret or that sense of beauty. Support the United States 1. I edited a lot of them and deleted them. I was really worried about being regarded as a dream girl. But in fact, the reason readers of this article like senior brother so much is because Chen He likes senior brother! @About a little bit of throwing settings Some people say that a good beginning is the end. You don't want the protagonist to appear in a state of "getting ready to go to the battlefield", but let him appear in a state of "reading a thousand sails and traveling in dust". But I also feel that if the ending is too strong, it will fall into an invincible flow. Or trivializing all the suffering the protagonist has suffered before. But this article is about the senior brother appearing in the middle of reading Qianfan, but it is still very interesting. @About Li Yan's memory Chen He made some reasonable inferences from some reactions before he got it In fact, I really think that when the time comes, I will start to discuss who has a stronger desire for each other? I believe everyone has their own opinions, and what I'm saying is just my understanding: I think the senior brother's desire for the junior brother is much stronger than the junior brother's desire for the senior brother. At first, the junior brother's desire was just to see other aspects of the senior brother. He cared more about the senior brother's expression for this than the specific pleasure and feelings. Later, it was out of Li Yan's subtle possessive desire. Li Yan couldn't get it in his life, but I can touch it easily. A very subtle kind of complacency and self-esteem. Although the senior brother has always been indifferent, he was actually the one who had the desire first, and it was also him many times after that. It's just that senior brother's moral bottom line is too high, so as long as Chen He wants it, he will have it, and Chen He won't mention it if he doesn't want it. The senior brother just looked at the erotic pictures with his junior brother indifferently (although I also suspect that this sentence was just made up by Chen He, but it really is not surprising), just like, Chapter 312: The senior brother calmly let people kill people. He would not kill someone to expose Chen He's identity. It's just that I accidentally didn't hold it down (the alchemist said that Madman Chi let his senior brother successfully deduce it)! But Chen He is the same, he has a limited appearance, but it's nice to be able to get what he wants. Only control one person's appearance. I can't stand you two 99 In fact, I really feel that the senior brother is much more in love in the early stage (superposition is only in the early stage, in the senior brother's perspective), or in the perspective of the senior brother before Chapter 160 (in Chapter 166, the senior brother clearly said to me, I know that you liked me in the previous life, but in Chapter 160, I feel that the senior brother has completely guessed it), Chen He does not love each other as much as he does. But he still loves his junior brother. Just, as long as the junior brother also loves me, the rest is actually not that important. After looking back several times, I feel that the senior brother was worried too much at that time, worried that he would fall in love with his junior brother, and worried that his junior brother would not love him. After discovering that his junior brother likes me, he wonders if he doesn't love her that much, if he admits his mistake, if he will become cold and disgusted with her in the future, and then he will be completely helpless. But the junior brother expressed his liking, so... Well, they got together. (Junior brother asked for it and gave it to him) (crossed out) (heavy fog) For senior brother, as long as he doesn't hate himself, that's fine. As long as my junior brother can be with me and get close to me, it's fine, whether I do it or not, whatever happens is fine. He just hopes that his junior brother will like him and love him. There is no need to question how much I love him. The repo is that the senior brother said to his junior brother, "It's not because you are fragile and need protection, it's not because you are pitiful and deserve sympathy." Just because I like it, I am often afraid that you will suffer losses, worried that you will suffer, and suspect that you are not smart (either intellectually unsmart or worried about being deceived or confused) but will not take the initiative. At the same time, Chen He is the one who does things when he should do things, and intimidates when he should intimidate. Even if he kills people and sets fires, it will not affect his ability to strategize and act cute in front of his senior brothers... He just controls it very well. @God, the world is turned upside down, and they are slightly happy. Mainly, I believe that if you love to a certain extent, you will definitely hope that others will avoid detours, you will definitely hope that the other person can be happy, not to be hurt by anything, and hope that the other person will be like this... This further step is to shape - desire -. And there is another urge for complete destruction, this step back is destruction - desire -. But Ye Feng is able to write such love so lightly. Although I completely believed in Ye Feng's level from the beginning, I still choked up after reading this. At this time, I have to mention Li Yan again. I personally think that a touch of happiness is [You must first believe that even if you are not shaped or destroyed, you are worthy of being loved. You must first experience (even if only in your imagination) the acceptance that "I don't have to change anything, you are here." This certainly creates a desire for destruction (rather than be abandoned, I'd rather destroy everything first). It seemed like this was the case when Li Yan appeared, but being able to be cured by his senior brother was a kind of acceptance. Possession-desire-and shaping-desire-are like small heads and big heads. But I can hardly see it in the senior brother, but in fact the senior brother's emotional character is indeed very strong. A kind of hands-off, a kind of "even so, still." @Worldviewshaping Often fantasy works must be logically self-consistent if they add a lot of new things into a default framework, and they must be written in detail and detail, with a main plot, but the author has undoubtedly done it all. At the beginning of this article, it seems to be an ordinary world of immortal cultivation. Later, it has such a detailed world view, which I think is also very powerful. Often when writing some professional content, readers feel that the author looks very professional, and may even make readers feel more professional than writing by someone who has been in the industry for many years. Making other readers feel that the author is very, very professional... This is an ability. This is professionalism. Readers can't come over and ask you to do it yourself, and readers can't do it themselves. So it's more important to appear professional than to actually be professional. It is more important to be easy to understand. Even this article is like this. Although it is about cultivating immortality, it is completely different from reality, which means that a lot of details need to be filled in. The author tells a very profound story completely self-consistently, and the author writes very confidently. Everyone really thinks within that worldview. Each character is very three-dimensional. Even when the protagonist is not mentioned, they are developing their own stories normally. It is not like many entertainment works where everything remains the same if the protagonist does not appear, and everything changes within a few days after the protagonist appears. There are many characters that I think my understanding is not as good as everyone in the comment area, so I have deleted them. Thank you very much Ye Feng for bringing such a magnificent story to readers, I believe they will definitely be in that world99.
It was so uncomfortable after reading it, so depressing
When I persuaded Lin to get a dog, I actually hoped that she would have a bond in Spain, and a name and so on. I remembered a dog I once had. That dog was in Spain and was very obedient. But what is the other guy doing in Spain?
It's been so long since I last read it that I almost forgot about it, but I still remember the shock that the setting of this book brought to this young me. I watched it again and was still extremely shocked. I only had one thought: How could there be such a normal and profound love? All the characters have very normal views, and the truth, goodness and beauty are vividly displayed. The author has never shied away from discussing profound issues, and many of his words have made people shout, "I'm so awesome." It's still not out of date even now. It is very romantic, with discussions on love and profound remarks on truth, goodness and beauty, which are self-contained and are what everyone is looking for. I always see a sentence saying that normal love is good, but abnormal love is really wonderful. Does the protagonist of this book have a deformed relationship? I feel that although there is a sense of forced love at the beginning, marriage first and love later, it is completely normal for them to fall in love with each other, they respect each other, their outlook is completely normal, and they are completely destined. After reading it, you will think that holy shit, both protagonists are very charming and transparent. I feel that this is difficult to write well, but the author obviously really understands it. What he writes is very weighty, logically consistent, and the characters are full of character. When I reopened this book, I actually read it all in one night. I was full of praise for their beautiful love. It was so awesome and romantic! ! I didn't expect this to be a 14-year-old book. What I ate when I was a kid was all fine bran. Very very beautiful! A very romantic book full of positive energy! This is how love should be! Love at its best! Worth revisiting and learning again and again! Alas, I feel that at my age, I can't describe love, truth, goodness and beauty in a very logical way, and I don't have a deep understanding of life. I'm very ashamed.
This set of settings is actually not popular. I feel like the author could become popular just by changing the book cover. I recently promoted it in the book recommendation section.
As expected of an old novel, the setting of the deed master and deed son really offends me.
I read it five or six years ago and read it three times. I really like the setting. It's a pity that I haven't seen the same type of writing since then. I really like this very novel and interlocking world view. It's a pity that there is only one extra story after all these years. I really want to see if Hong Mao and the others will meet again in the next life.
T TThis is not an update every other day at all
The author is amazing and the plot is so well written and interlocking.
The last few chapters felt a little rushed, and I felt like they could have been more detailed. Many scenes felt like they were rushed to the next scene without much description. But the faults do not hide the good points. It is a very good article. There are many foreshadowings that I didn't read carefully at the first glance. Wait for me to read it again!
After reading it again, I still really like this setting. I hope the author can use this setting to write a short article again one day, whether it is about this life or the next life.
Ahhhh, the flowers are finished! ! Cat ears and tail play, the heroine has a lot of fun hehe
25.1.5 Once completed
After watching Little Bee, I came to n brush
It's been ten years. I remember I was in high school when I first read it. I didn't expect to review this book again now. Hey, I still hope that in the end, Ling Xiao can be happy in this life Did I overcome all the difficulties through hard work and wasted efforts, or can I only renew our relationship in the next life? Thinking of this makes me feel so sad?
Love rises in the east and falls in the west, romance will last until death! This year is 2026. I regret that I missed this masterpiece for 11 years because I was afraid of being abused. Fortunately, I finally read it this year!
This is the most exciting book I have read this year, and it is also the most disgusting book for me. The combination of a particularly touching setting, very reasonable logic, and a very disgusting love system makes me love and hate it at the same time. I was both pleased and angry at the same time. I don't think this can be considered a scumbag article, it is a truly sour article. Halfway through, I just wanted to know why I came to read this article. I will never read anything related to BDSM again. It really made me feel extremely disgusted. Of course, the author's writing is very good. I think this setting surpasses abo and whistle. I also see that the author has opened up the permissions. I hope to see similar articles in the future.
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Watched it again, it's so beautiful and I love it so much. Goddess, I will follow you for the rest of my life.
The rice tastes so good, I watched it again [Make Me Well]
A hundred faints! ! I'm so confused! Your wife wrote so well! Just can you feed me some extras [poor] [poor]
Ding~Business fluid blessing update is stress-free!
It's so beautiful. I love the author and all the characters in this article.
The same soul, different memories, can they still be considered the same person? Although the two of us can be said to be together forever, I still feel a little uncomfortable [vomiting blood]
My favorite novel in the past? Ahhh, I bought a physical collection for my collection??? I really can't get enough of it [crying]
Here we go again, this is my favorite holographic online game article after all these years.