Death fanfic! ! !
This is my first time writing an article. I hope you guys can give me a lot of support. I'm very grateful (tears...)
That, please ignore the discrepancies with the comics! O_0v
Reader comments
I'm so shocked, this puppet...
The author seems to like Qiluosheng very much.
I was a little dizzy, but two palace masters suddenly ran out, both of them women.
Li Xunhuan, you are not an outsider, you will become an insider soon :)
Once again, I lament that Xiao Ziyan is a good actor! My little uncle always says that young people are not reserved. I think you are the least reserved! Be calm!
After rebirth, the trajectory of life will change. If the two concubines and aunts can't deal with it, how can they help the family change their destiny?
No update, unhappy QAQ
He said it very plainly. He would only use telecom mobile phone bills to recharge, and half of the handling fee would be deducted. I felt like I was at a loss, so I stopped recharging.
Damn it, what kind of divine expansion is this? Why is His Majesty the Emperor like this? Prince, please get rid of him quickly.
Author, you are almost done. After abusing your body, you will also abuse your mind. I will make you look like an aunt.
Not satisfied, not satisfied, we want to see the performance of the former Devil King after Xiaolong comes on the stage (
Ah, the title has returned to its previous style
In fact... Pu Lan's story is so complicated that I can start a second chapter by extracting it. Maybe I can find something if I write it from his perspective. Yeah~ I like to watch the villain protagonist's various incidents of physical abuse and psychological abuse... Ah. It's also good to write it in the first person... Blablabla
Sofa! A daddy appeared with chicken jelly~
Hehe, good news for readers ms, great author, come on~~
Cough! !
Before I make a long comment, let me make a digression - today at noon, when my BF's little female cat came home, she actually took a little male cat back... ORZ, this is kidnapping...
Someone who loves cats is trying to figure out how to turn this temporary cat into a permanent cat...
So back to the topic - I was just talking about some nonsense - I have been fascinated by apocalyptic literature recently, especially those with portable space, but there are not many that I like.
How to put it, it should be my own reason. I want to watch the end of the world, but it is too heavy and depressing, and I can't stand it; and the golden finger is too wide, and it looks fake - I like the portable space in the end of the world, because it is the last hope and reliance, so that the protagonist will not completely despair no matter how dangerous the situation is.
And human nature in the last days.
I know that moral decay is inevitable in the apocalypse, as well as the violence, bloodshed, and despair that will follow - the apocalypse is originally a gray-toned topic. I want to see human nature in the apocalypse, but I don't want it to be too heavy... So I am also a contradictory person...
It is also because of this contradiction - and I am definitely not asking for it - that there are many apocalyptic novels that are not very comfortable to read: the protagonist is too cold-blooded and cannot be read; the heroine is too holy, and still cannot be read...
Qiangwei is very good - although the first chapter gave me the impression of a bit of a virgin, but when I think about it, I can empathize with it. I am also a lazy person who is afraid of trouble. Disputes between relatives are the most troublesome and helpless. If you can't clean it up, it's better to break it up completely!
So we digress again?
I like Qiangwei. Although she was a little weak at first, an ordinary girl suddenly learned the news of the end of the world and was able to work hard for herself and her mother. I was really touched when I saw this.
Next is Beauty Han Beichen - he should be the male protagonist, right? Beautiful (handsome?!), Powerful, and a killer. He also discovered the secret of the heroine's space and posted it. No matter how you look at it, this is the standard configuration of a male protagonist - although I personally am a little bit surprised by the killer male protagonist... It's just for personal reasons...\\(^O^)/~
He is very smart and has outstanding observation skills. He can detect the flaw exposed when the heroine inadvertently takes out the helmet from the space when she is in a hurry (?). He can also bargain with his mother very smartly, reveal the space and gain temporary trust (?)...
In my personal evaluation, the male protagonist is barely an eighty percentile (because I personally don't like to see killers...)...
In this article, what I like most is your description of human nature.
I won't talk about the protagonist's calmness, intelligence, tenacity and amazing growth, only the supporting characters.
Anna's warning, the sacrifices of the Ye family's parents, Ye Han's growth, and the experiences of the Bai family brothers and sisters - all are written very vividly and lively; of course, Qiangwei's mother is also very powerful. Although she has no powers, she does not drag her daughter down, but works hard to do logistical work for her daughter and broadens her daughter's heart...
I hope that in the apocalyptic novel, everyone should have their due position, regardless of the protagonist or supporting role, instead of relying solely on others to survive.
——By the way, is the word count enough? Haha, is this your first long review? Can I get a chapter and an update in exchange? (So the last sentence is the key point of the whole text\\(^o^)/~)
Hey, it's so fun~ I didn't like InuYasha when I read the manga. I know howl. He is possessed by a roaring horse. He doesn't hate men who are half-hearted, and he doesn't hate men who like the new and dislike the old. InuYasha likes the new but never dislikes the old. . . . I miss Empress E and Nv Ying. My balls hurt.
Wanjie la
SoundwaveSoundwaveSoundwaveSoundwaveSoundwade
I'm looking forward to it more and more~~
Come on, big brother~~
Let's send flowers and wait for updates~~
Nickname 33, hahahahaha. My younger brother also has this nickname because he got it when he was playing CS, hahahahahaha.
I want to know if the hero believes it or not and gets furious.
Baji QAQ I remember that Baji and Natasha had a very good relationship in the comics. I hope she can enlighten her.
I'm so shocked, this puppet...
The author seems to like Qiluosheng very much.
I was a little dizzy, but two palace masters suddenly ran out, both of them women. Li Xunhuan, you are not an outsider, you will become an insider soon :)
Once again, I lament that Xiao Ziyan is a good actor! My little uncle always says that young people are not reserved. I think you are the least reserved! Be calm!
After rebirth, the trajectory of life will change. If the two concubines and aunts can't deal with it, how can they help the family change their destiny?
No update, unhappy QAQ
He said it very plainly. He would only use telecom mobile phone bills to recharge, and half of the handling fee would be deducted. I felt like I was at a loss, so I stopped recharging.
Damn it, what kind of divine expansion is this? Why is His Majesty the Emperor like this? Prince, please get rid of him quickly. Author, you are almost done. After abusing your body, you will also abuse your mind. I will make you look like an aunt.
Not satisfied, not satisfied, we want to see the performance of the former Devil King after Xiaolong comes on the stage (
Ah, the title has returned to its previous style
In fact... Pu Lan's story is so complicated that I can start a second chapter by extracting it. Maybe I can find something if I write it from his perspective. Yeah~ I like to watch the villain protagonist's various incidents of physical abuse and psychological abuse... Ah. It's also good to write it in the first person... Blablabla
Sofa! A daddy appeared with chicken jelly~
Hehe, good news for readers ms, great author, come on~~
Cough! ! Before I make a long comment, let me make a digression - today at noon, when my BF's little female cat came home, she actually took a little male cat back... ORZ, this is kidnapping... Someone who loves cats is trying to figure out how to turn this temporary cat into a permanent cat... So back to the topic - I was just talking about some nonsense - I have been fascinated by apocalyptic literature recently, especially those with portable space, but there are not many that I like. How to put it, it should be my own reason. I want to watch the end of the world, but it is too heavy and depressing, and I can't stand it; and the golden finger is too wide, and it looks fake - I like the portable space in the end of the world, because it is the last hope and reliance, so that the protagonist will not completely despair no matter how dangerous the situation is. And human nature in the last days. I know that moral decay is inevitable in the apocalypse, as well as the violence, bloodshed, and despair that will follow - the apocalypse is originally a gray-toned topic. I want to see human nature in the apocalypse, but I don't want it to be too heavy... So I am also a contradictory person... It is also because of this contradiction - and I am definitely not asking for it - that there are many apocalyptic novels that are not very comfortable to read: the protagonist is too cold-blooded and cannot be read; the heroine is too holy, and still cannot be read... Qiangwei is very good - although the first chapter gave me the impression of a bit of a virgin, but when I think about it, I can empathize with it. I am also a lazy person who is afraid of trouble. Disputes between relatives are the most troublesome and helpless. If you can't clean it up, it's better to break it up completely! So we digress again? I like Qiangwei. Although she was a little weak at first, an ordinary girl suddenly learned the news of the end of the world and was able to work hard for herself and her mother. I was really touched when I saw this. Next is Beauty Han Beichen - he should be the male protagonist, right? Beautiful (handsome?!), Powerful, and a killer. He also discovered the secret of the heroine's space and posted it. No matter how you look at it, this is the standard configuration of a male protagonist - although I personally am a little bit surprised by the killer male protagonist... It's just for personal reasons...\\(^O^)/~ He is very smart and has outstanding observation skills. He can detect the flaw exposed when the heroine inadvertently takes out the helmet from the space when she is in a hurry (?). He can also bargain with his mother very smartly, reveal the space and gain temporary trust (?)... In my personal evaluation, the male protagonist is barely an eighty percentile (because I personally don't like to see killers...)... In this article, what I like most is your description of human nature. I won't talk about the protagonist's calmness, intelligence, tenacity and amazing growth, only the supporting characters. Anna's warning, the sacrifices of the Ye family's parents, Ye Han's growth, and the experiences of the Bai family brothers and sisters - all are written very vividly and lively; of course, Qiangwei's mother is also very powerful. Although she has no powers, she does not drag her daughter down, but works hard to do logistical work for her daughter and broadens her daughter's heart... I hope that in the apocalyptic novel, everyone should have their due position, regardless of the protagonist or supporting role, instead of relying solely on others to survive. ——By the way, is the word count enough? Haha, is this your first long review? Can I get a chapter and an update in exchange? (So the last sentence is the key point of the whole text\\(^o^)/~)
Hey, it's so fun~ I didn't like InuYasha when I read the manga. I know howl. He is possessed by a roaring horse. He doesn't hate men who are half-hearted, and he doesn't hate men who like the new and dislike the old. InuYasha likes the new but never dislikes the old. . . . I miss Empress E and Nv Ying. My balls hurt.
Wanjie la
SoundwaveSoundwaveSoundwaveSoundwaveSoundwade
I'm looking forward to it more and more~~ Come on, big brother~~ Let's send flowers and wait for updates~~
Nickname 33, hahahahaha. My younger brother also has this nickname because he got it when he was playing CS, hahahahahaha.
I want to know if the hero believes it or not and gets furious.
Baji QAQ I remember that Baji and Natasha had a very good relationship in the comics. I hope she can enlighten her.