You can gain power and power in the world!
You can become a legendary hero, an extraordinary king, and you can become anyone you want to be smoothly!
As long as you sign the contract, you will no longer love anyone! ! !
Night Yellow Spring:
Ghostly, cold and decisive. The second prince of the Xingyue Dynasty died mysteriously. Returning to the Yang world after more than two hundred years...
I don't even have a body anymore, so how can I love you...
Helan:
Shura's wife, an innocent but evil woman. I have been waiting in the underworld for two hundred years and experienced thirteen ghost husbands.
Falling in love with Ye Huangquan ended up in ashes...
Luo Fei:
Innocence, sunshine, the young master of the ancient city of Luodai. Experienced war, death, love...
Fall in love at first sight with Xiaohuangquan
Qingming Huangquan:
The only remaining little princess in the Xingyue Dynasty. After the fall of the dynasty, she was chosen as the queen by Wang Lieyuan, the old man of the Liushi tribe.
Two evils: Ksitigarbha and Shura, the King of Yin plays chess
Wrong view: King Shura's last envoy in the human world
Lan Daohui: The first general of the Liushi Tribe, the elder brother of Xie Jian
Reader comments
I really don't like this Zhao Jingtuo, he seems to have no brain. Author's reply:
I don't like him either, but there are always a few unpleasant people in a book, just like there are always unsatisfactory things in life~
He is not the protagonist anyway, and his ending is very bad~
Haha
Rare and rare
There is a sofa where you can sit on when you get back.
Very good
Indifferent, because I'm tired, but also because I'm numb... I'm just too lazy to say it
The reason for being indifferent is because of the slight pain...
Isn't this another trap? Today is the 15th.
Embarrassing... Please hurry up and deal with Rigaoji Temple. It looks so annoying = =
1859... But it seems that 59 is not an attack material, so it is not against CP~
They are much better than what I wrote... Nei Niu TUT
Thank you Pudding, I will try to write better!
I came here to make up for the points~~~^^
When you see the author recommending it, come and take a look.
Here are some suggestions: Of course, this is just everyone's opinion.
First of all, I feel that the language of the article is too long-winded. It is obvious that one sentence can clearly explain the place, but I bother to write several sentences or even a short paragraph. People who read the article will feel tired and cumbersome. It seems to complicate a simple problem.
There are too many descriptions before the time travel. Originally, everyone's focus in writing time travel stories was on the after time travel. Just mention a little about what happened before, and don't go into too much detail. Otherwise, it will be like writing down a running account, explaining everything without the central idea, which will make people lose interest in reading the article.
There are also some parts that are obviously meant to be funny, which makes people feel very deliberate and unnatural. The dialogue between the characters in the article is not clear enough, that is, the paragraphs are not clearly divided enough, and the structure seems to be loose.
What I said may be a bit harsh, I hope the author doesn't mind.
Finally, I send a little flower to the author. After all, this is my first time writing an article.
Encourage encourage.
In this chapter, girl Minzhi is really worthy of her name. [Crossed out] Although I just looked it up again because I couldn't type her name [Crossed out]
What a witty and calm kid~~ But the short paragraph at the end is so weird that he witnessed his best friend being raped... It's really a piece of cake.
Please continue to work hard and update~
Extra story...
= =
What's wrong...
Why is there no more hair...
When will I write it...
Looking forward to it~
Ahhh...................... I forgot about the previous one. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I like
Black author replied:
Actually, I also like black ones~
Xingzhi Palace
Come on, update~
Update quickly! Update quickly!
So well written! Hu Sha is very good at writing inner descriptions of characters!
I really don't like this Zhao Jingtuo, he seems to have no brain. Author's reply: I don't like him either, but there are always a few unpleasant people in a book, just like there are always unsatisfactory things in life~ He is not the protagonist anyway, and his ending is very bad~
Haha Rare and rare There is a sofa where you can sit on when you get back. Very good Indifferent, because I'm tired, but also because I'm numb... I'm just too lazy to say it The reason for being indifferent is because of the slight pain...
Isn't this another trap? Today is the 15th.
Embarrassing... Please hurry up and deal with Rigaoji Temple. It looks so annoying = = 1859... But it seems that 59 is not an attack material, so it is not against CP~
They are much better than what I wrote... Nei Niu TUT
Thank you Pudding, I will try to write better!
I came here to make up for the points~~~^^
When you see the author recommending it, come and take a look. Here are some suggestions: Of course, this is just everyone's opinion. First of all, I feel that the language of the article is too long-winded. It is obvious that one sentence can clearly explain the place, but I bother to write several sentences or even a short paragraph. People who read the article will feel tired and cumbersome. It seems to complicate a simple problem. There are too many descriptions before the time travel. Originally, everyone's focus in writing time travel stories was on the after time travel. Just mention a little about what happened before, and don't go into too much detail. Otherwise, it will be like writing down a running account, explaining everything without the central idea, which will make people lose interest in reading the article. There are also some parts that are obviously meant to be funny, which makes people feel very deliberate and unnatural. The dialogue between the characters in the article is not clear enough, that is, the paragraphs are not clearly divided enough, and the structure seems to be loose. What I said may be a bit harsh, I hope the author doesn't mind. Finally, I send a little flower to the author. After all, this is my first time writing an article. Encourage encourage.
In this chapter, girl Minzhi is really worthy of her name. [Crossed out] Although I just looked it up again because I couldn't type her name [Crossed out] What a witty and calm kid~~ But the short paragraph at the end is so weird that he witnessed his best friend being raped... It's really a piece of cake. Please continue to work hard and update~
Extra story... = = What's wrong... Why is there no more hair... When will I write it... Looking forward to it~
Ahhh...................... I forgot about the previous one. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I like Black author replied: Actually, I also like black ones~
Xingzhi Palace Come on, update~
Update quickly! Update quickly!
So well written! Hu Sha is very good at writing inner descriptions of characters!
Iceberg, bravely hit the iceberg