A peerless female corpse
The love story between Qian Yu and Xuan Ye
Qianyu, the sister of Queen Hesheli, is not the concubine in history.
Xuan Ye, an emperor through the ages, cannot withstand the reincarnation of fate
Where will the relationship between the two lives be consummated? Who is the end point?
Or is it just a dream......
Reader comments
There was no update yesterday, so I should update it today...
The rumors finally came to light →_→
Very well written! Support! Hurry up, hurry up
It turns out that Bai Ze and Xiaolong are a couple, so whoever attacks and who suffers!!!!!
Sure enough, it's updated daily, I'm so happy
The hungry heart cannot be satisfied! I want meat!
Waiting for your update! Tree tree!
= =. Why bother... Don't be entangled with them... Go out quickly to find other friendly brothers... Throw these away, throw them away... Can rotten food be made fresh again... Throw it away...
(I don't know how it happened, but it got swallowed). Continue: I'm so happy and excited after seeing so many new things. Baby Chenghu is about to be born. I'm so excited. I have another unkind request. Can you write about the young couple visiting the mausoleum? I have never seen such a loving scene written before.
87654321, Actually you can start from 10
I was just about to confess my love to Xiaochen when I found that Xiaochen had opened a new chapter.
To occupy the sofa or not to occupy it, that is the question! Author's reply:
Thank you for your message, Shore! This post has been missing for a long time, so I was so touched when I saw the comments! Excited! Thank you shore! Author's reply:
By the way, can you understand this story now? That's the case.
It feels like Chrollo is quite in line with my imagination. Come on~ the male protagonist must be Chrollo. I think the 9th girl and Qinglan should maintain the same relationship as before. That would be wonderful. If I become CP, I will be a little unable to accept it.
How can it be so easy to give birth to a child who comes out feet first?
Why did he kill Cheng Yaojia instantly but not Mu Nianci? Not to mention she was the protagonist in the original work... Now in this article she... Is not even a soy sauce character! But what about Yang Kang, if another woman comes to stimulate the woman he likes and make her understand his feelings... To be honest, this situation is quite disgusting... Although most romances are written like this... But isn't there a lyric called "A good man can't let the woman he loves get hurt a little bit"~ This behavior will not only hurt him, but also stab him with his own hands...
为毛这么久都没更了啊。。。【话说之前一直霸王啊。。。】
Finally back ^_^
Cancer or something... Is it in a poor drama or a stick drama...
Sprinkle flowers~Spread flowers~Thank you for your hard work
Sending little flowers! ! !
Perhaps because it is a short story, the author did not pay much attention to the copywriting. Apart from the cover, which is not in the normal position, there is not even a simple introduction. Fortunately, the title of the book is easy to understand, so you won't abandon the article as soon as you click on it. If the author decides to change it to a longer article, I don't need to tell you that making the copy more attractive will increase the flow of readers. Without some clues about the main plot in the copy, it would be difficult for me to find the key points while reading the article.
The article gave me the feeling that the pace of the article is quite fast, and I didn't feel tired even after reading it in one go. I admire people who have this kind of skill. When writing a story, they know how to stretch and contract freely, just like blending with cheese. From time to time, it stretches out a little, tempting the reader to read on little by little. When I reach the end of the story, I realize that it is already over, and there is still a little more to it.
The setting of the story is also good. They got married in high school and had no contact with each other for three years. Once they came back, they fell in love with each other and sparks flew out... It was very cute! As far as this setting is concerned, you can develop a long novel, and the first-person relaxed style is also very attractive. If possible, you can also try the physical route.
If this article is to be turned into a long article, I still don't recommend it, because in my opinion this article is relaxed and fast-paced, which is a good choice for people who read online articles, but this is precisely the advantage of short stories.
If it is to be written as a feature, you must first determine how you want to change it into a feature. Should you add content based on the story, or should you continue writing it like a sequel?
If it's the former, did it start three years ago or after the hero returned to the heroine? If it had been written from the beginning of their marriage three years ago, the article would have lost a certain amount of appeal, and readers might have had a bad first impression of the male protagonist. If such a setting as leaving the female protagonist for another woman appeared at the beginning, don't worry, author, because in the future there will be two men, two men, three men, etc., And some people will ask you to change the male protagonist. If you start writing after returning to the heroine, how can you supplement the plot so that it doesn't seem cumbersome and procrastinating?
And if it's the latter, I personally don't advocate it, because continuing to extend it on the basis of an already relatively satisfactory ending is like the story reaching its climax and suddenly falling again, making people lose interest in reading.
In summary, the author thinks twice. It's not that you can't change it into a long article. As long as you think about what I said above, it's relatively easy to change this article into a long article, and I predict that there will be many readers.
Finally, I have a small comment. I think the layout of the content summary is not very good, and I suggest that it be modified. That's all.
There was no update yesterday, so I should update it today... The rumors finally came to light →_→
Very well written! Support! Hurry up, hurry up
It turns out that Bai Ze and Xiaolong are a couple, so whoever attacks and who suffers!!!!!
Sure enough, it's updated daily, I'm so happy
The hungry heart cannot be satisfied! I want meat!
Waiting for your update! Tree tree!
= =. Why bother... Don't be entangled with them... Go out quickly to find other friendly brothers... Throw these away, throw them away... Can rotten food be made fresh again... Throw it away...
(I don't know how it happened, but it got swallowed). Continue: I'm so happy and excited after seeing so many new things. Baby Chenghu is about to be born. I'm so excited. I have another unkind request. Can you write about the young couple visiting the mausoleum? I have never seen such a loving scene written before.
87654321, Actually you can start from 10
I was just about to confess my love to Xiaochen when I found that Xiaochen had opened a new chapter. To occupy the sofa or not to occupy it, that is the question! Author's reply: Thank you for your message, Shore! This post has been missing for a long time, so I was so touched when I saw the comments! Excited! Thank you shore! Author's reply: By the way, can you understand this story now? That's the case.
It feels like Chrollo is quite in line with my imagination. Come on~ the male protagonist must be Chrollo. I think the 9th girl and Qinglan should maintain the same relationship as before. That would be wonderful. If I become CP, I will be a little unable to accept it.
How can it be so easy to give birth to a child who comes out feet first?
I'm so horny. . . . Another pitfall! ! ! !
Add flowers and points. Author's reply: Thank you! ! ~! ~
Why did he kill Cheng Yaojia instantly but not Mu Nianci? Not to mention she was the protagonist in the original work... Now in this article she... Is not even a soy sauce character! But what about Yang Kang, if another woman comes to stimulate the woman he likes and make her understand his feelings... To be honest, this situation is quite disgusting... Although most romances are written like this... But isn't there a lyric called "A good man can't let the woman he loves get hurt a little bit"~ This behavior will not only hurt him, but also stab him with his own hands...
为毛这么久都没更了啊。。。【话说之前一直霸王啊。。。】
Finally back ^_^
Cancer or something... Is it in a poor drama or a stick drama...
Sprinkle flowers~Spread flowers~Thank you for your hard work
Sending little flowers! ! !
Perhaps because it is a short story, the author did not pay much attention to the copywriting. Apart from the cover, which is not in the normal position, there is not even a simple introduction. Fortunately, the title of the book is easy to understand, so you won't abandon the article as soon as you click on it. If the author decides to change it to a longer article, I don't need to tell you that making the copy more attractive will increase the flow of readers. Without some clues about the main plot in the copy, it would be difficult for me to find the key points while reading the article. The article gave me the feeling that the pace of the article is quite fast, and I didn't feel tired even after reading it in one go. I admire people who have this kind of skill. When writing a story, they know how to stretch and contract freely, just like blending with cheese. From time to time, it stretches out a little, tempting the reader to read on little by little. When I reach the end of the story, I realize that it is already over, and there is still a little more to it. The setting of the story is also good. They got married in high school and had no contact with each other for three years. Once they came back, they fell in love with each other and sparks flew out... It was very cute! As far as this setting is concerned, you can develop a long novel, and the first-person relaxed style is also very attractive. If possible, you can also try the physical route. If this article is to be turned into a long article, I still don't recommend it, because in my opinion this article is relaxed and fast-paced, which is a good choice for people who read online articles, but this is precisely the advantage of short stories. If it is to be written as a feature, you must first determine how you want to change it into a feature. Should you add content based on the story, or should you continue writing it like a sequel? If it's the former, did it start three years ago or after the hero returned to the heroine? If it had been written from the beginning of their marriage three years ago, the article would have lost a certain amount of appeal, and readers might have had a bad first impression of the male protagonist. If such a setting as leaving the female protagonist for another woman appeared at the beginning, don't worry, author, because in the future there will be two men, two men, three men, etc., And some people will ask you to change the male protagonist. If you start writing after returning to the heroine, how can you supplement the plot so that it doesn't seem cumbersome and procrastinating? And if it's the latter, I personally don't advocate it, because continuing to extend it on the basis of an already relatively satisfactory ending is like the story reaching its climax and suddenly falling again, making people lose interest in reading. In summary, the author thinks twice. It's not that you can't change it into a long article. As long as you think about what I said above, it's relatively easy to change this article into a long article, and I predict that there will be many readers. Finally, I have a small comment. I think the layout of the content summary is not very good, and I suggest that it be modified. That's all.
Please write Captain! ! Or Cuicui is fine~