Ten years of life and death.
If you don't think about it, you will never forget it.
Thousands of miles of lonely tomb, no place to speak of desolation...
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Reader comments
Overall, it's a good read. I finished it in one day. It was a great experience [Spreading Flowers], but it ended too quickly. I feel like there's still a lot that I haven't written yet.
(Not writing guidance! Not writing guidance! Not writing guidance! Just a little personal expectation) I feel that the protagonist's past is a little less. I only know that he is an orphan and that he was miserable in his previous company, but I feel that more stories about his past can be written.
Also, I feel that the protagonist is actually very traumatized inside (both of them are), but Xia's pain of being abandoned made me heartbroken, and the process of finally having a family was a bit rushed [crying]
And how to become the top one! There is no process, and it lacks a little bit of excitement [poor]. I just wrote a side story to become a top-notch person, and the main text has always been a small part. How can I put it, more process would be great (of course, it is definitely not a writing guide! It's just my small expectation)
The most important thing is the process of falling in love! ! ! Why just a little bit! What about the little couple's stickers? Woo woo woo so little [crying]
But it's huge and awesome! The writing is really beautiful! The article is also fluent, the plot is very good, and the rhythm is good ~ I love you ~ I hope more people can read Dada's articles, and I also hope that Dada's next books will reach a higher level! [Spread flowers][sprinkle flowers][sprinkle flowers]
Overall, it's a good read. I finished it in one day. It was a great experience [Spreading Flowers], but it ended too quickly. I feel like there's still a lot that I haven't written yet. (Not writing guidance! Not writing guidance! Not writing guidance! Just a little personal expectation) I feel that the protagonist's past is a little less. I only know that he is an orphan and that he was miserable in his previous company, but I feel that more stories about his past can be written. Also, I feel that the protagonist is actually very traumatized inside (both of them are), but Xia's pain of being abandoned made me heartbroken, and the process of finally having a family was a bit rushed [crying] And how to become the top one! There is no process, and it lacks a little bit of excitement [poor]. I just wrote a side story to become a top-notch person, and the main text has always been a small part. How can I put it, more process would be great (of course, it is definitely not a writing guide! It's just my small expectation) The most important thing is the process of falling in love! ! ! Why just a little bit! What about the little couple's stickers? Woo woo woo so little [crying] But it's huge and awesome! The writing is really beautiful! The article is also fluent, the plot is very good, and the rhythm is good ~ I love you ~ I hope more people can read Dada's articles, and I also hope that Dada's next books will reach a higher level! [Spread flowers][sprinkle flowers][sprinkle flowers]