I have always loved reading, but no matter how good the stories are, there are always things I don't like. During my recent vacation, I suddenly had the idea of writing an article myself, hehe! Also become the God of female pigs. I am writing for my own entertainment, but there is no writing skills at all. (Friends who study Chinese have said: they are all bad sentences.) What is grammar? At a loss. Just make sure not to give up.
A pillow was thrown at Tang Chao by a beautiful woman (I thought I was afraid of losing weight, so let's go to Tang Chao). A modern person who never leaves the house (he lives in Jinjiang to read literature), can embroider (cross-stitch), can cook (he must maintain a healthy figure), oh! I can also draw (definitely not Chinese painting). People who are in close contact with computers for more than 12 hours a day say: I don't want to time travel. My dear computer, I don't want to leave you.
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Among all the travel stories, there are still a few that stand out, some for their strict logic and some for their gorgeous writing. This one stands out because of its relaxed and pretty writing style.
In fact, I have also thought about writing a time-travel novel, but I really don't know what skills the protagonist should know in reality so that he can face those sudden and completely unfamiliar things. So when I saw in the copy that it was just a college student with literary talents, I couldn't help but feel a little gloating in my heart, wondering how you would live there. With this gloating in my misfortune, I began to read this article.
"There is a hermit in Zhongnan Mountain. People say that he knows everything about heaven and geography, and he knows everything. He is known as ignorant..." Under the boundless black line, I can't stop sweating. Thanks to the author, I have a new understanding of the definition of the word ignorance, and I am embarrassed. After a certain embarrassment, I got goosebumps all over again because of the dialogue with my male favorite. . . What a bad taste. . .
Just make fun of it, set it seriously, with all kinds of colorful characters and twelve shadows. You didn't just focus on grabbing the emperor and princes, or opening a hot pot restaurant and proudly became a business wizard at that time. Putting aside those thundering falsehoods, it's rare to see a time-travel novel working hard towards the martial arts trend. I give it a thumbs up. Even if the structure is not mature enough, this freshness and immaturity prevents the article from being sticky and pretentious. The text complements the protagonist and leads the article. However, the description of martial arts needs to be more precise and realistic, which is better.
In terms of character feelings, I actually have more feelings for the original Wu Qing. The person being traversed is the only one who is not beautiful among the seven colors, but has multiple different identities. Although he is good at the art of disguise, he has to hide his youth behind the back of another woman; I have never been able to live generously in front of others with my own appearance, let alone love the one I love with such an identity. Who can be willing to do so? Perhaps, this is why I have to work hard. With so many identities, it is just a bargaining chip in the hands of a woman with low self-esteem. In addition, the people around him are either mocking or teasing him, or, like Wu Zi, they use innocence to hide the viciousness in their eyes that threatens to bite people. Whether they are violent and indifferent, or stupid and obedient, they should all be just masks, and even their masters take them seriously. Perhaps death is relief from such a fate. The same body, occupied by different people, is a different style.
The appearance of Prince Yu is also eclectic. The dignified prince is almost regarded as a gentleman when he first appears in front of readers. After that, he is frivolous, deliberately teasing, and sullen due to being ignored. Although he does not love him, he cannot allow him to no longer have his own tyranny. The image of the domineering prince is vivid on the paper, delicate and true.
And the heroine who came from time-travel has a bit of innocence that is not familiar with the world, and has the independent and free personality of a modern woman. It makes people very curious. When things are calm, when the sea is calm, when the years are gone, I don't know whether it is as beautiful and transparent as before, or whether the face has no fine lines, but the heart is scarred, and gradually moves away.
There are two sentences in the copy, "If you pursue something you shouldn't pursue, you will be hurt. If you give up something you should pursue, you will be sad." Haha, what a coincidence. The person I missed in this life also said that the saddest thing is persisting in something you shouldn't persist in and giving up something you shouldn't give up. It's the same story. However, in the process, you can only walk according to your instincts. Even if you stumble, you have a heart that does not regret to support you. Should, or should, in the process, there is no such thing as this, so there are countless tragedies. I don't know if this article will be written as a sadistic article. Looking at the copywriting, I feel a little worried for the heroine. Hopefully, the hardships will pass and everything will be fine.
At the end of the article, I said, I can be cute. . . He is cold, calm, unconventional, does not understand the relationship between men and women, and has a strong desire to abduct in his heart.
Among all the travel stories, there are still a few that stand out, some for their strict logic and some for their gorgeous writing. This one stands out because of its relaxed and pretty writing style. In fact, I have also thought about writing a time-travel novel, but I really don't know what skills the protagonist should know in reality so that he can face those sudden and completely unfamiliar things. So when I saw in the copy that it was just a college student with literary talents, I couldn't help but feel a little gloating in my heart, wondering how you would live there. With this gloating in my misfortune, I began to read this article. "There is a hermit in Zhongnan Mountain. People say that he knows everything about heaven and geography, and he knows everything. He is known as ignorant..." Under the boundless black line, I can't stop sweating. Thanks to the author, I have a new understanding of the definition of the word ignorance, and I am embarrassed. After a certain embarrassment, I got goosebumps all over again because of the dialogue with my male favorite. . . What a bad taste. . . Just make fun of it, set it seriously, with all kinds of colorful characters and twelve shadows. You didn't just focus on grabbing the emperor and princes, or opening a hot pot restaurant and proudly became a business wizard at that time. Putting aside those thundering falsehoods, it's rare to see a time-travel novel working hard towards the martial arts trend. I give it a thumbs up. Even if the structure is not mature enough, this freshness and immaturity prevents the article from being sticky and pretentious. The text complements the protagonist and leads the article. However, the description of martial arts needs to be more precise and realistic, which is better. In terms of character feelings, I actually have more feelings for the original Wu Qing. The person being traversed is the only one who is not beautiful among the seven colors, but has multiple different identities. Although he is good at the art of disguise, he has to hide his youth behind the back of another woman; I have never been able to live generously in front of others with my own appearance, let alone love the one I love with such an identity. Who can be willing to do so? Perhaps, this is why I have to work hard. With so many identities, it is just a bargaining chip in the hands of a woman with low self-esteem. In addition, the people around him are either mocking or teasing him, or, like Wu Zi, they use innocence to hide the viciousness in their eyes that threatens to bite people. Whether they are violent and indifferent, or stupid and obedient, they should all be just masks, and even their masters take them seriously. Perhaps death is relief from such a fate. The same body, occupied by different people, is a different style. The appearance of Prince Yu is also eclectic. The dignified prince is almost regarded as a gentleman when he first appears in front of readers. After that, he is frivolous, deliberately teasing, and sullen due to being ignored. Although he does not love him, he cannot allow him to no longer have his own tyranny. The image of the domineering prince is vivid on the paper, delicate and true. And the heroine who came from time-travel has a bit of innocence that is not familiar with the world, and has the independent and free personality of a modern woman. It makes people very curious. When things are calm, when the sea is calm, when the years are gone, I don't know whether it is as beautiful and transparent as before, or whether the face has no fine lines, but the heart is scarred, and gradually moves away. There are two sentences in the copy, "If you pursue something you shouldn't pursue, you will be hurt. If you give up something you should pursue, you will be sad." Haha, what a coincidence. The person I missed in this life also said that the saddest thing is persisting in something you shouldn't persist in and giving up something you shouldn't give up. It's the same story. However, in the process, you can only walk according to your instincts. Even if you stumble, you have a heart that does not regret to support you. Should, or should, in the process, there is no such thing as this, so there are countless tragedies. I don't know if this article will be written as a sadistic article. Looking at the copywriting, I feel a little worried for the heroine. Hopefully, the hardships will pass and everything will be fine. At the end of the article, I said, I can be cute. . . He is cold, calm, unconventional, does not understand the relationship between men and women, and has a strong desire to abduct in his heart.