I have traveled through time, handsome guy, gold bars, and thousands of favors. To sum up, all of them are not destined for me. It hurts, time travel novels kill people. The flowers of the motherland should be vigilant. It's not my fault. I caused trouble by traveling through time. Float away... There are no explicit descriptions in this article, so those who don't like it should be careful.
The heroine is a person with rough nerves + a strong desire to survive + a soft heart + a little obsessed with money but will not benefit herself at the expense of others. She has no special skills, and there are not a lot of outstanding men who fall in love with her inexplicably.
The male protagonist is the kind of person who lives in a very special environment. He is a genius in some aspects and an idiot in others. He is obviously very fragile but likes to pretend to be strong and appears in secret.
Please ask for another article - the writing should be good, less pornographic, full of content, it doesn't matter whether you wear it or not, and it doesn't matter whether it lasts or not. The most important thing is to finish it. Personally, I like Xi Juan, Ling Shufen, Gu Ling, Ji Qiu, Lei Qiong Yao. You are welcome to recommend yourself. If you have a long review, you can send it to my mailbox: lll1983122@163. Com (the first three characters are the English letter L)
(The first 13 chapters are written in one go. If you don't like this style of writing, just skip to Chapter 14. This article is mainly about the author complaining. There are not many storylines. The spoof content includes traditional time-travel plots, nine-year compulsory education + high school + university Chinese recitation and various film and television classics, etc.)
Reader comments
I knew Hanhan was dead, but how? ? Wow, Bing, something suspiciously like a fleshy object flashed past. I hate that damn thing so much. I want to cut his body into thousands of pieces and cut him into pieces~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Choosing the wind is the right thing. You see, choosing the wind means you have something. With the support of a country, such a Xiaoyao Prince can be worthy of the name Xiaoyao~~~~~~Xiaoyao King~~~~It's really good, so happy~~~~I'm so happy that Changshang can come out~~~Bingbing has probably come out too~~~~~
Hahaha, such cute lyrics:)
However, let me yell, which MV! ! Have you made a MV? Want to see it! ! Which is Xiaoxia's MV mentioned downstairs? !
(Biting the handkerchief, hoping for a reply~~~~~)
It's interesting that these two people have a special show
Bombing cannot be used. At the beginning of the novel, it refers specifically to novices. Because they are not very skilled in controlling the heat, it is recommended not to add too many characters, as it is difficult to control. The existing ones should not start the dialogue at the beginning, and try to explain the background, events, etc., So that the delivery is clear and evolving.
Since it is a cold snort, you should not use um, as the color of um does not match the cold snort. Second paragraph.
A back view seemed inappropriate.
Who is the person with the white background? Try to make it as clear as possible.
The aqua blue gauze skirt is still the same, but it seems better to change it to the aqua blue gauze skirt.
The fluttering petals refer to the cherry blossoms she changed, or whether there are real flowers in the house. If it is a skirt, a metaphor should be added.
It's like it's for a certain occasion, added later, like it's specially prepared for a certain occasion. It seems better.
The above is my personal opinion, it is not satisfactory, please share it more in the future.
Mysterious Loneliness Yours sincerely.
The language logic is not very good...
I read the previous "Women's Heart", which happened to be the GD novels and R Baowen that I fell in love with recently. Great progress.
I knew Hanhan was dead, but how? ? Wow, Bing, something suspiciously like a fleshy object flashed past. I hate that damn thing so much. I want to cut his body into thousands of pieces and cut him into pieces~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Choosing the wind is the right thing. You see, choosing the wind means you have something. With the support of a country, such a Xiaoyao Prince can be worthy of the name Xiaoyao~~~~~~Xiaoyao King~~~~It's really good, so happy~~~~I'm so happy that Changshang can come out~~~Bingbing has probably come out too~~~~~
Hahaha, such cute lyrics:) However, let me yell, which MV! ! Have you made a MV? Want to see it! ! Which is Xiaoxia's MV mentioned downstairs? ! (Biting the handkerchief, hoping for a reply~~~~~)
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It's interesting that these two people have a special show
Bombing cannot be used. At the beginning of the novel, it refers specifically to novices. Because they are not very skilled in controlling the heat, it is recommended not to add too many characters, as it is difficult to control. The existing ones should not start the dialogue at the beginning, and try to explain the background, events, etc., So that the delivery is clear and evolving. Since it is a cold snort, you should not use um, as the color of um does not match the cold snort. Second paragraph. A back view seemed inappropriate. Who is the person with the white background? Try to make it as clear as possible. The aqua blue gauze skirt is still the same, but it seems better to change it to the aqua blue gauze skirt. The fluttering petals refer to the cherry blossoms she changed, or whether there are real flowers in the house. If it is a skirt, a metaphor should be added. It's like it's for a certain occasion, added later, like it's specially prepared for a certain occasion. It seems better. The above is my personal opinion, it is not satisfactory, please share it more in the future. Mysterious Loneliness Yours sincerely.
The language logic is not very good...
I read the previous "Women's Heart", which happened to be the GD novels and R Baowen that I fell in love with recently. Great progress.