Damn, it's so interesting. This is the only Diamond A fanfic I've ever read.
Wo lai le
The pictures are well done~
The emotional scenes are okay, but I think the characters of the supporting characters are not distinct enough and difficult to remember, and there are too many supporting characters...
I think the protagonist's character should be portrayed more carefully, and maybe some psychological activities can be added, so that the emotional scenes won't be abrupt (I didn't say it's abrupt now, it's just a description, don't think it's "no money here")
It's pretty fast. It's actually the third volume.
I hated the ending of 513. Although I thought it was inevitable that Little J would leave rationally, I still couldn't accept it emotionally. I almost didn't sleep for several days after reading it. It seemed a bit exaggerated, but it was really depressing, so I started looking for fan fiction everywhere. Ha, I finally found another one for me. It felt pretty good.
Damn, it's so interesting. This is the only Diamond A fanfic I've ever read.
Wo lai le
The pictures are well done~ The emotional scenes are okay, but I think the characters of the supporting characters are not distinct enough and difficult to remember, and there are too many supporting characters... I think the protagonist's character should be portrayed more carefully, and maybe some psychological activities can be added, so that the emotional scenes won't be abrupt (I didn't say it's abrupt now, it's just a description, don't think it's "no money here")
It's pretty fast. It's actually the third volume.
I hated the ending of 513. Although I thought it was inevitable that Little J would leave rationally, I still couldn't accept it emotionally. I almost didn't sleep for several days after reading it. It seemed a bit exaggerated, but it was really depressing, so I started looking for fan fiction everywhere. Ha, I finally found another one for me. It felt pretty good.