Ordinary girl Murong Yunya has been troubled by strange dreams since she was a child
One day, I went to a fortune-telling shop with my friends, and unexpectedly traveled back in time to Niu Zulu Youjin, who was a guest at Si Age's house in the Qing Dynasty. After a draft, she entered the palace.
But a storm is unfolding around her...
And when she finally found the person in her heart, she was lost in time and space again
Reader comments
Ah~ Protest, why did you only update half of the hair? Ouch... Tears. I finally waited until you updated it~! I'm going to jump out of the window, please stop me! But signing is very tiring. I was almost exhausted just waiting in line for an autograph that time. I feel so sorry for Chen Xiang~ You have to work hard in your studies. I just got into grade one this year and I have more homework than the grade three in junior high school? Why is this? Resentment! Wish you a happy National Day
... Actually, this is your first time writing, right? ... Otherwise how could it be so... Mary Sue?
In fact, the idea of the article is good... But the plot develops too fast... The plot could be more detailed, but you just brushed it off.
Like in the previous chapters, the scene where the protagonist and his senior meet for the first time... Although it's a bit bloody... But there must be cute things in the bloody place, right? As long as you describe it well in detail, it will have a good effect! Isn't the article the purpose of NP? With such a detailed description, JQ can be extended, right?
Or... Even if it's not detailed... Are you planning to extend it?... Then I really have to admire you! ! !
There are still some other problems, but in general, this article gives me the feeling that you are rushing to write! ! It sounds a bit ugly... Are you busy reincarnating? ! ! ! A good article doesn't just have to have a plot, it also has to have connotation! ! Even if there is nothing, it must be written in detail... So that people can recall it... Even if it cannot be done, at least it must be understandable! ! Don't make it seem like it's endless! !
A typical example of this is: in the first chapter, the story goes from a baby to sixteen years old! !
…………………………………………Summary………………………………………………………………
In one word: Hurry!
In two words: soon!
Three words: super fast! !
Four words: rush to reincarnate! ! !
But new articles... Are all worthy of encouragement~especially new articles that are less popular! ! Here's looking forward to Nai's growth! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ah~ Protest, why did you only update half of the hair? Ouch... Tears. I finally waited until you updated it~! I'm going to jump out of the window, please stop me! But signing is very tiring. I was almost exhausted just waiting in line for an autograph that time. I feel so sorry for Chen Xiang~ You have to work hard in your studies. I just got into grade one this year and I have more homework than the grade three in junior high school? Why is this? Resentment! Wish you a happy National Day
... Actually, this is your first time writing, right? ... Otherwise how could it be so... Mary Sue? In fact, the idea of the article is good... But the plot develops too fast... The plot could be more detailed, but you just brushed it off. Like in the previous chapters, the scene where the protagonist and his senior meet for the first time... Although it's a bit bloody... But there must be cute things in the bloody place, right? As long as you describe it well in detail, it will have a good effect! Isn't the article the purpose of NP? With such a detailed description, JQ can be extended, right? Or... Even if it's not detailed... Are you planning to extend it?... Then I really have to admire you! ! ! There are still some other problems, but in general, this article gives me the feeling that you are rushing to write! ! It sounds a bit ugly... Are you busy reincarnating? ! ! ! A good article doesn't just have to have a plot, it also has to have connotation! ! Even if there is nothing, it must be written in detail... So that people can recall it... Even if it cannot be done, at least it must be understandable! ! Don't make it seem like it's endless! ! A typical example of this is: in the first chapter, the story goes from a baby to sixteen years old! ! …………………………………………Summary……………………………………………………………… In one word: Hurry! In two words: soon! Three words: super fast! ! Four words: rush to reincarnate! ! ! But new articles... Are all worthy of encouragement~especially new articles that are less popular! ! Here's looking forward to Nai's growth! ! ! ! ! ! !