Is it fate or curse?
Is it fate or injustice?
Where do all the causes and effects begin?
Intention:
Reader comments
The layout is quite awkward. Although there are some descriptive words and actions in the dialogue, putting all the dialogue together makes people uninterested in reading.
Then there is what the author said in parentheses, try not to include it, it will be a little troublesome to read.
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He muttered this dissatisfiedly...
With
…………I don't dare to look at it anymore…My Xiaoqi……5555…………
The abuse was so miserable... Even though I was mentally prepared... I can only hope that I won't end up with any irreparable disability...
Yuan Lang~~~ Come and save our Xiao Qi~~~~~~~! ! ! !
......... What the hell is this circus? Eames, what are you being shy about? QAQ? !
Ahhhhhh, after waiting for half a month, I finally updated the article, chicken jelly, a handful of flowers~~~~It looks so good, come on! ! !
Come on, although you are always busy, don't forget our longing! More articles are the best gift!
The layout is quite awkward. Although there are some descriptive words and actions in the dialogue, putting all the dialogue together makes people uninterested in reading. Then there is what the author said in parentheses, try not to include it, it will be a little troublesome to read. ----- He muttered this dissatisfiedly... With
…………I don't dare to look at it anymore…My Xiaoqi……5555………… The abuse was so miserable... Even though I was mentally prepared... I can only hope that I won't end up with any irreparable disability... Yuan Lang~~~ Come and save our Xiao Qi~~~~~~~! ! ! !
......... What the hell is this circus? Eames, what are you being shy about? QAQ? !
Ahhhhhh, after waiting for half a month, I finally updated the article, chicken jelly, a handful of flowers~~~~It looks so good, come on! ! !
Come on, although you are always busy, don't forget our longing! More articles are the best gift!