I don't know if it was a coincidence or fate, but an accident brought them to another dynasty...
Sixteen years later, when they meet again, they don't know what kind of future and fate they will face! All they know is that they are not alone with each other. No matter what, they will face it bravely together...
Please light some incense and make a cup of tea. Listen to Fuzi and tell you a story in my heart...
Listen to the morning bell ringing, my story is about to begin...
Reader comments
That... Who said you didn't write well, but your writing is better than mine~!
Well, considering that the number of words I have written is more than 50,000 more than yours... Let me pick out a few faults:
1. I just finished writing Puyang Xialie, and then switched to Leng Jue and Dongfang Yuzi. It would be better to have a blank line or a transitional paragraph, which is... A bit abrupt.
2. "Carefully take out a handkerchief"? ? ? Do you want to say "carefully take out a handkerchief from your arms"?
3. "A blurry figure is getting clearer and clearer", but it's still not smooth... "A blurry figure is getting closer and clearer" (although there are some problems...)
4. It's a bit unclear who Yuzi and Leng Jue are… It's better to mark them more clearly…
5. Let's catch a bug~ "It's like the ripples of lake water picked up by the rain", seemingly "splashing"…
Hmm... It's very well written, really good. I'll come and check it out~ Tutu, don't be lazy~!
PS: Why don't you tell me about the plot of the story in school? My curiosity is aroused...
That... Who said you didn't write well, but your writing is better than mine~! Well, considering that the number of words I have written is more than 50,000 more than yours... Let me pick out a few faults: 1. I just finished writing Puyang Xialie, and then switched to Leng Jue and Dongfang Yuzi. It would be better to have a blank line or a transitional paragraph, which is... A bit abrupt. 2. "Carefully take out a handkerchief"? ? ? Do you want to say "carefully take out a handkerchief from your arms"? 3. "A blurry figure is getting clearer and clearer", but it's still not smooth... "A blurry figure is getting closer and clearer" (although there are some problems...) 4. It's a bit unclear who Yuzi and Leng Jue are… It's better to mark them more clearly… 5. Let's catch a bug~ "It's like the ripples of lake water picked up by the rain", seemingly "splashing"… Hmm... It's very well written, really good. I'll come and check it out~ Tutu, don't be lazy~! PS: Why don't you tell me about the plot of the story in school? My curiosity is aroused...