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Very good article Move firmly towards a happy future with a touch of sadness

偶好可怜啊，呜呜作者回复： 到底是谁可怜的说。。。

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原来废材纲才是最终Boss吗。妈妈，这世界太可怕了，我要回火星（～￣▽￣～）

此评论等待管理员复审中，暂被系统自动屏蔽，审核通过后即可展示！

你把无限城的居名当成什么了！”曾经是无限城的居名的士度震怒的大吼 ‘居民’不是‘居名’ 抓虫虫…… 不知道为什么……一看到马克贝斯就觉得自己看见的是马克思……

Leng Er~The perfect male partner~%>_<%

【冬狮郎和小白又结伴出去了】?!打錯?

笑笑的文一如既往的好看呢

These days, more and more Titanic have successfully hit icebergs. I am envious.

写得很好，感觉很----嗯，温馨，是的，温馨。 现在很少有这种感觉的文了，很多都是在文中对男主，女主虐的一塌糊涂后，再给个看起来好的结局。晕。 现实生活中已经有太多的残酷，看文，也只是想在其中找到一些温暖，让自己不用感觉到太冷。

难道你不要这个坑了么。T^T

I have this kind of parents. . . I will really cry for a long time

When will Shen Yan come back? The author replied: Come back now. Even I hate authors like me.

看到作者说又来了，就忍不住问一句什么时候再来，呵呵

Actually, I really like the prince in your article.

Li Feng should fall in love with it. "I don't know what happened." Although it has a happy ending, I still feel a little uncomfortable! Author's reply: Li Feng is very pitiful, but he still thinks the boss is more suitable. It's not uncomfortable, it's not uncomfortable anymore~~

Not bad! Keep working hard to write better articles! But some parts are too concise. I see your tiredness, so it would be better if you write more carefully!

Not bad! Keep working hard to write better articles! But some parts are too concise. I see your tiredness, so it would be better if you write more carefully!

还可以吧，不算很差，写法是有点特别，但主要显示出了文笔的青涩，多努力哦作者回复： 大概是六年前写的东西，高二的小女生，当时觉得自己很大了，现在看看，的确青涩得很啊！！！呵呵，惭愧惭愧，我会继续努力的！！不过，中哥是不是忘了给我打分啊？？？