Part One of the Huansha Series: Lost Heart Shura
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It feels like there are more words than before, please come on author↖(^ω^)↗
The heroine certainly has space, so why doesn't she enter the space when she is besieged by zombies? Wait until the zombies can no longer smell human scent and leave, then run away! Then there is no need to die?
现在开始期待少恭文了，呵呵，可怜的少恭叔叔
First of all, Xinkeng Sahua ('ω') Next, I will comment carefully ('∀') First of all, I have to say that the author's name is good. Although there are not many modern surnames, even if the author uses it, the name will not appear deliberately artificial. It seems that natural society is really valuable for modern youth campuses. This shows that the author has good intentions for the novel. Secondly, the setting of the autistic female protagonist and the sunny male protagonist is a balance between the two, which is very in line with the concepts of modern society and corresponds to the title of the article. It is similar to thanking God for allowing me to meet the most beautiful you in the most beautiful years. It is very literary when you think about it. Then look at the character. The article mentions that the two pairs of brothers and sisters are obviously not just here to make soy sauce. Of course, they want to bloom a little spark of life and play a god assist club. The so-called novel is based on a dramatic conflict. I believe that the author's imagination will live up to the readers. Laugh in brackets here⊙▽⊙ Personally, I think that although the author is writing for the first time, the language is smooth and the plot is beautiful and engaging. It is a great article, but the complaints should still be routine: first, although the heroine is autistic, I don't think it is necessary to eat food because of autism. There's not a single grain left. The male protagonist shouldn't be surprised that a woman can eat so much. However, the male protagonist completely ignored this fact. It's so unconcerned. ('ω') Second, why on earth did the female protagonist pass by the playground with a dozen homework items? Maybe she wanted to throw the homework into the basket. . Ahem, wrong, this is just my imagination. Please don't worry about it. Hahahaha. In fact, this is a good normal way to open it. The so-called good start is more than half of the success. I sincerely wish the author a happy start! ! The ('ω') third of Shema. I haven't read BG articles for many years and have focused on BL articles. When I read this article, I didn't feel any strange. It even felt like watching a fireworks short in the dormitory in the middle of the night. Although this is not a complaint, I obviously haven't realized that this is a full-length novel. I'm really sorry. Next. . . It seems that there is no social attraction. It is indeed a youth campus. Here you can look at the sky at a 45-degree angle. All in all, this is a good article that vividly depicts youthful confusion. The pure and unadulterated love of a young man who understands is the last sentence of the praise here. If you pass by the comment area and see it, you might as well take a look. Even if you want to complain, it doesn't matter at all. The comment area is also known as the place where the spark of life blooms. Please feel free to do so. Above ('ω')
Once the updates are interrupted, then there are pitfalls. I have been through too much and my writing is very good. Come on, don't be fooled.
Yeah yeah! Not to mention the sofa, there is even a bench to sit on. Xiaoxue, what's your rhythm? Are you going to torture someone to death without repaying your life?
话说，姜羽遥是谁？？能唤醒眼泪……别告诉我是榆罔之妻或是彤鱼氏……
芈月传只看了花絮，还是不喜欢芈月，我成反派控了
Boss, you are still here! ! ! Where have you been wandering these days? ! They don't want us anymore! ! !
(/ω＼)今天先刷到这里
不，只是觉得他们不这么多话的话早跑完一半了，还用担心赶不到去上课？
Dengdengdengdengdengdeng
2333The author has seen any Mary Sue who said she was not Sue?
Not bad, keep up the good work
Update soon! Sir, I like it very much. Is Shaohao the child born to Hua Qiangu?
I really like the ancient romance genre, and the novel is very well written!
This female Baoyu is even more lustful than the male Baoyu. If this emperor is not blind, he probably only plays for fun. How could he fall in love with such a OOXX woman?
Sister Lin might hate scientific examinations, but she shouldn't. Her father came from a scientific examination background...
目测慕容雪和阮菀有百合戏。。。。。。腹黑x呆萌233333333333333333
I read the author and it's my first time writing. You don't have to worry too much at the beginning. As you write slowly, many people will read it before you know it. As long as you don't give up, you'll be fine.
小攻他弟太好玩了2333333
好激动好激动好激动☆*:.｡.o(≧▽≦)o.｡.:*☆快把会面放出来,求二更！
This god unfolds... So Mu Qing is with Mu Sheng? Or will the second young master be with Li and the eldest young master?
另一个主角是谁呢，到现在也没能猜到
It's so fast, I feel like it's almost finished in a short time… I've already added a new book to my collection, and I'm looking forward to reading it. I'll see you again for the next one (づ ●─● )づ
The novel is written easily and rigorously, and every plot is very delicate. The wine master is super cute and hard-working, very close to him, and the wine master is especially cute~! Although you wrote Yisi and Xia Yuhou as BE, are you considering a rebirth~?
It feels like there are more words than before, please come on author↖(^ω^)↗
The heroine certainly has space, so why doesn't she enter the space when she is besieged by zombies? Wait until the zombies can no longer smell human scent and leave, then run away! Then there is no need to die?
现在开始期待少恭文了，呵呵，可怜的少恭叔叔
First of all, Xinkeng Sahua ('ω') Next, I will comment carefully ('∀') First of all, I have to say that the author's name is good. Although there are not many modern surnames, even if the author uses it, the name will not appear deliberately artificial. It seems that natural society is really valuable for modern youth campuses. This shows that the author has good intentions for the novel. Secondly, the setting of the autistic female protagonist and the sunny male protagonist is a balance between the two, which is very in line with the concepts of modern society and corresponds to the title of the article. It is similar to thanking God for allowing me to meet the most beautiful you in the most beautiful years. It is very literary when you think about it. Then look at the character. The article mentions that the two pairs of brothers and sisters are obviously not just here to make soy sauce. Of course, they want to bloom a little spark of life and play a god assist club. The so-called novel is based on a dramatic conflict. I believe that the author's imagination will live up to the readers. Laugh in brackets here⊙▽⊙ Personally, I think that although the author is writing for the first time, the language is smooth and the plot is beautiful and engaging. It is a great article, but the complaints should still be routine: first, although the heroine is autistic, I don't think it is necessary to eat food because of autism. There's not a single grain left. The male protagonist shouldn't be surprised that a woman can eat so much. However, the male protagonist completely ignored this fact. It's so unconcerned. ('ω') Second, why on earth did the female protagonist pass by the playground with a dozen homework items? Maybe she wanted to throw the homework into the basket. . Ahem, wrong, this is just my imagination. Please don't worry about it. Hahahaha. In fact, this is a good normal way to open it. The so-called good start is more than half of the success. I sincerely wish the author a happy start! ! The ('ω') third of Shema. I haven't read BG articles for many years and have focused on BL articles. When I read this article, I didn't feel any strange. It even felt like watching a fireworks short in the dormitory in the middle of the night. Although this is not a complaint, I obviously haven't realized that this is a full-length novel. I'm really sorry. Next. . . It seems that there is no social attraction. It is indeed a youth campus. Here you can look at the sky at a 45-degree angle. All in all, this is a good article that vividly depicts youthful confusion. The pure and unadulterated love of a young man who understands is the last sentence of the praise here. If you pass by the comment area and see it, you might as well take a look. Even if you want to complain, it doesn't matter at all. The comment area is also known as the place where the spark of life blooms. Please feel free to do so. Above ('ω')
Once the updates are interrupted, then there are pitfalls. I have been through too much and my writing is very good. Come on, don't be fooled.
Yeah yeah! Not to mention the sofa, there is even a bench to sit on. Xiaoxue, what's your rhythm? Are you going to torture someone to death without repaying your life?
话说，姜羽遥是谁？？能唤醒眼泪……别告诉我是榆罔之妻或是彤鱼氏……
芈月传只看了花絮，还是不喜欢芈月，我成反派控了
Boss, you are still here! ! ! Where have you been wandering these days? ! They don't want us anymore! ! !
(/ω＼)今天先刷到这里
不，只是觉得他们不这么多话的话早跑完一半了，还用担心赶不到去上课？
Dengdengdengdengdengdeng
2333The author has seen any Mary Sue who said she was not Sue?
Not bad, keep up the good work
Update soon! Sir, I like it very much. Is Shaohao the child born to Hua Qiangu?
I really like the ancient romance genre, and the novel is very well written!
This female Baoyu is even more lustful than the male Baoyu. If this emperor is not blind, he probably only plays for fun. How could he fall in love with such a OOXX woman? Sister Lin might hate scientific examinations, but she shouldn't. Her father came from a scientific examination background...
目测慕容雪和阮菀有百合戏。。。。。。腹黑x呆萌233333333333333333
I read the author and it's my first time writing. You don't have to worry too much at the beginning. As you write slowly, many people will read it before you know it. As long as you don't give up, you'll be fine.
小攻他弟太好玩了2333333
好激动好激动好激动☆*:.｡.o(≧▽≦)o.｡.:*☆快把会面放出来,求二更！
This god unfolds... So Mu Qing is with Mu Sheng? Or will the second young master be with Li and the eldest young master?
另一个主角是谁呢，到现在也没能猜到
It's so fast, I feel like it's almost finished in a short time… I've already added a new book to my collection, and I'm looking forward to reading it. I'll see you again for the next one (づ ●─● )づ
The novel is written easily and rigorously, and every plot is very delicate. The wine master is super cute and hard-working, very close to him, and the wine master is especially cute~! Although you wrote Yisi and Xia Yuhou as BE, are you considering a rebirth~?
亲爱的朝朝又回来了！么么哒~~~~这回又有什么新发现，朝朝的身世又有进展呢？期待着~~~~