Looking For

The story of a girl looking for something Maybe it's blue, maybe it's red Maybe it was a person, maybe it wasn't Maybe that exists, or maybe it doesn't She didn't know, she was just searching blindly ——Until she met that young man The boy who will be remembered as a brave man through the ages ———————————————————————— Please give me some advice for my debut novel. Please forgive me if the writing style is completely at elementary school level. May have Mary Sue tendencies