When Jun Qinglan was 18 years old, she met that special boy, and her heart, which had always been gentle, made waves because of him. Knowing that he had a dual personality, she tried her best to give him warmth, although her heart only moved for his coquettish and icy side. They are obviously the same person, but they are indeed two souls. She wishes they were two people... Their relationship was opposed by her parents because the death of her favorite brother was related to his family. But even so, she still argued hard and found out that her friend was indeed pregnant with his child. After all, she couldn't resist her fate, so she left that sad city.
After seven years of return, she has a husband and a son, and he is still a dazzling beauty in his arms. It turns out that the biggest rival of love is time... When she could face him calmly, he smiled coldly: "Jun Qinglan, it's time to pay back what you owe me."
His forcible intervention once again broke the strong fortress of her heart. She was forced to divorce and her children were robbed. His thunderous methods made her scared but she still couldn't keep her heart. When she fell again and was ready to risk everything, the truth hit her heart like a bolt from the blue. What she thought many years ago turned out to be a reality. They were really two people...
Reader comments
I am the sun
The author's description of details is fascinating, the beginning is very attractive to me, the transition is not abrupt, the article is well-conceived, the subject matter is original, the paragraphs are clear, and the main line is clear.
I have to say that the author has written the novel very carefully. When I saw no cp, I subconsciously wanted to click out. There are not many novels that can attract me in the first chapter.
The topic of the article is very clear. There is no sloppiness, no ink stains, and no hemming and hawing. After writing it for a long time, the reader still doesn't know what it is written.
Let me talk about the delicate writing style. The scene at the beginning of the book where my parents are sad. I can feel my parents' sadness outside of the book.
This book has a lot of potential. The order of the books is not messy. Compared with myself, it's so sad!
The big book made me feel ashamed. In fact, I didn't dare to comment casually. The soft girl was flustered and needed a big kiss.
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Now that the flattery is over, let me talk about the author's major shortcomings.
Is the update speed of this book too slow? Isn't it because you don't want to feed your dear readers?
The description is very delicate, but as a novel, the more emphasis should be on the development of the story line, allowing readers to get involved, but the author seems not to have noticed this.
Then there is the issue of typesetting. Your typesetting design really hurts the eyes of readers. I can feel the typesetting shock now. I should change the typesetting.
The plot progress is too slow. The angle could be sped up a little. I was anxious to death outside the book. The plot is the life of the novel. You seem to have grasped every inch of the plot, and the reader sheds sad tears without retreating or advancing.
In terms of appearance, I will just talk about my feelings. I did not see the appearance of the protagonist, and it was impossible to bring it in. The appearance description was almost 0. Although it is not easy to write too much appearance description in novels, it cannot be lacking at all. Readers need a handsome face.
White clothes cook wine and send a long review.
I am the sun The author's description of details is fascinating, the beginning is very attractive to me, the transition is not abrupt, the article is well-conceived, the subject matter is original, the paragraphs are clear, and the main line is clear. I have to say that the author has written the novel very carefully. When I saw no cp, I subconsciously wanted to click out. There are not many novels that can attract me in the first chapter. The topic of the article is very clear. There is no sloppiness, no ink stains, and no hemming and hawing. After writing it for a long time, the reader still doesn't know what it is written. Let me talk about the delicate writing style. The scene at the beginning of the book where my parents are sad. I can feel my parents' sadness outside of the book. This book has a lot of potential. The order of the books is not messy. Compared with myself, it's so sad! The big book made me feel ashamed. In fact, I didn't dare to comment casually. The soft girl was flustered and needed a big kiss. —— Now that the flattery is over, let me talk about the author's major shortcomings. Is the update speed of this book too slow? Isn't it because you don't want to feed your dear readers? The description is very delicate, but as a novel, the more emphasis should be on the development of the story line, allowing readers to get involved, but the author seems not to have noticed this. Then there is the issue of typesetting. Your typesetting design really hurts the eyes of readers. I can feel the typesetting shock now. I should change the typesetting. The plot progress is too slow. The angle could be sped up a little. I was anxious to death outside the book. The plot is the life of the novel. You seem to have grasped every inch of the plot, and the reader sheds sad tears without retreating or advancing. In terms of appearance, I will just talk about my feelings. I did not see the appearance of the protagonist, and it was impossible to bring it in. The appearance description was almost 0. Although it is not easy to write too much appearance description in novels, it cannot be lacking at all. Readers need a handsome face. White clothes cook wine and send a long review.