I tried hard to blink back the tears in my eyes, but the tears flowed down even more violently. Standing in the dimly lit corner, I could clearly see him kissing An Wen intimately. One was my husband and the other was my college friend. I realized
I was playing the role of the tragic heroine in the novel who suffered double betrayal. It seemed that I should run over and ask them why they were doing this, but my feet seemed to be fixed on the ground and I couldn't take a step. I could only look at them and let the tears fall like rain...
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Thanks for the invitation.
I have been liking Feng Lian for four years since 2012.
In the world of station CPs, there are always these situations: the first one, this pair of CPs hit my pain point, and looking at them apart, they both agree very well with each other; the second one, because they are both my destiny, so I am very happy to see my destiny together; the third one, one of them is my destiny Fate, I don't like the other one, but since it is an official match, I still have to support it; the fourth one, I like both of them very much, but the CP is particularly eye-catching; the fifth one, I don't like either of them, but this CP is really cute, and I slowly fell in love with the character because I like the CP.
And my mentality towards Feng Lian happens to belong to the fifth type.
Feng Lian's co-stars, to put it in a simple and crude two-dimensional way, are the flirtation between the naturally stupid lady and the arrogant and handsome boy. Spread across the entire series, it is easy to see that they dislike each other and are constantly fighting each other, but they are also the ones who understand each other best. If they are brought together, the key point is Note the events after the disappearance of Wei Zhuang in the fourth part. The strangulation, poisoning, princess hug, bandaging, and questioning are all textbook tsundere. Even though Chi Lian is still the same Chi Lian who always talks about "Master Wei Zhuang", the ambiguity factor between the two people has reached a level that cannot be ignored. These two people are so similar. They have both experienced the transformation of life and nirvana. They both have a love where the moon shines on the ditch. The fire is red and the water is blue, and the tip of the needle is facing the wheat awn. These two people are so different. Chi Lian is too paranoid and slow, while Bai Feng is too cold and arrogant. They seem to be close but are the most distant. This is exactly what "Jian Jia" describes as "the road is long and difficult".
I think this is the first time I have ever seen this kind of carefree and carefree relationship, except for Mr. And Mrs. Smith, and I am so fascinated by it. In the end, because I fell in love with their way of getting along, I began to discover the shining points of each of Feng Lian, and gradually developed a resonance. Chi Lian is no longer just the big-breasted bad woman, and Bai Feng is no longer the pretentious bad man. Their images in my mind have become three-dimensional, lovable, and pitiable.
After that, I became so hungry that I started looking for fan food.
I have to say this point of view here: fan creation is OOC. For fanart without plot, as long as the painting style is good, it is easy to be accepted and liked. But fan fiction is different. Even if the interference of the writing style is put aside, the text can also reveal the author's three views and most of his views on CP. Reading fan fiction itself is to intersect with the author's thinking. When you think of one place, you naturally regard the article as a treasure; you have different opinions. No matter how excellent the text is, it will still make you heartbroken when you read it.
After laying the groundwork for so long, you must be smart enough to understand that I cannot evaluate this article from a truly objective perspective - although we are on the same team, there are significant differences in our views on CP and understanding of the characters. Many details may look good to others, but to me they are extremely OOC.
Chi Lian wielding pink fists, Chi Lian crying, Bai Feng keen on killing by touching his head, Bai Feng who would tell the fact that he was in a state of confusion, Bai Feng who said the affectionate sayings of the domineering president such as "Shut up, woman" and "No one can take you away from me"... Outside the screen, I looked at Feng Lian who got Qiong Yao's script, and I couldn't calm down for a long time.
There is also Wei Zhuang, who raises his shark teeth and laughs like a middle school boy, Shao Yu, who has thick eyebrows and a voice like a rough man painted in Hong Zhong's style, Tian Ming, who talks about literary principles... If it were written by a primary school student, I would probably go to the Lei Wen Tucao Station to hang people.
The reason why I kept reading was not only because I wanted to know the ending, but also because the writing was really beautiful. "Jianjia" is a rare fanfic that combines an aesthetic style, a compact rhythm, smooth martial arts, and a wonderful battle of wits. It grasps the essence of the exquisite atmosphere of the original work, and highlights its own elegant temperament on this basis. The added settings about Nanjiang and Hangu are very interesting and imaginative.
What is even more valuable is that although the article is intended to be romantic, it does not fall into the circle of small love and small love. The views on politics are accurate and unique. I especially like these two sentences: "People's minds are determined that no one wants to suffer another war. A gentleman's revenge is already too late in ten years, let alone twelve years." The writing is full of desolation and transparency. It is true that times create heroes, and Yu Xi can do nothing.
The postscript says that you want to write a story about a princess who is trapped in darkness and unable to control the situation. Actually you did, and did a great job. Describing the entire background of the era of collapse, fission, and conflict of interests in a large space can further highlight the meager strength of the characters. Then this painful and contradictory princess came to life.
Finally, let me talk a few more purely technical things. The biggest flaw of "Jianjia" is its lack of narrative ability.
First of all, in the same chapter, the transition between different scenes and different time points was not paid attention to, and the connection was very random and substandard.
Second, it cannot control multi-line narratives. This is also a problem with the switching of plot branches, with poor connectivity between them; sometimes even the development of one line seems fragmented and incoherent.
Thirdly, it's good to add magical settings, but if you can't explain it clearly, it's better not to draw enough. Regarding the original setting of the "Butterfly" series, it is novel and gorgeous enough, but the description is very abstract, making people confused, and it has no significance for the advancement of the plot.
Fourth, I don't know whether it's due to rushing work or some other reason, but this article is suspected of being unfinished. In the penultimate chapter, Chi Lian was still obsessed with finding Wei Zhuang. At the finale, he suddenly wrote a letter to express his feelings. A lot of plots were skipped in the middle, as if he was forcing candy on Feng Lian's party.
I personally think that the details need to be edited out before I can live up to this feast.
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Ahhhhh! It was so hard to destroy the ghost! ! ! ! ! !
What's that? Beautiful Sister Shiyu's writing is really good. I am your loyal fan and hope to keep up the good work. Don't be proud. Don't be impatient. You will be the best. I will always support you. You understand.
Good, good... I hope the author can continue writing, I will keep following the article
So loving. By the way, you and Taozi are really not the same person?
It's so well written~ Fan Tong's inner vomiting is particularly well written, very characteristic of Fan Tong~ Keep up the good work! : D
I've popularized a lot of history, come on!
Great! I was very excited when I first read these paragraphs.
The beginning of a beautiful story, the tragedy is counting down
If I had to choose, I would choose the second one
Move out the bench and wait for the surprise. I hope it's not a shock →_→
I updated Shenma in the early morning. Sure enough, there is someone who saved the manuscript. QAQ
It really hurts to swallow this glass shard.
Come regularly to spread flowers, loyal fans, o(∩_∩)o haha. Come on, it looks good
I must torture the male protagonist to death from now on
"Sirius throwing thunder out one after another without stopping" I imagined the scene in my mind and felt inexplicably happy 23333
In the end, I lived a wonderful life with my card.
There's actually another update! I hope it won't be cheated, I don't expect it to be updated every day, at least I hope it won't be too long QWQ
Reading two different prostitution flash articles together... This feeling is not ordinary.
I have the urge to hang myself on a crooked tree. I want to laugh when I see this sentence~~
How can the little Lingling be so domineering now QAQ... What should I do, Mr. Xu, which little Lingling do you like?
Oh~delicious soup dumplings~
I discovered that powerful people are so powerful that they become perverts.
I want the entire pond to know that your homepage has been taken over by me! ! ! !
In the end, I lived a wonderful life with my card.
Come on, Dad, waiting for your update
Every time I read the update, I feel like I'm still unsatisfied
——————————————Produced by Huzhu Pavilion—————————————— Thanks for the invitation. I have been liking Feng Lian for four years since 2012. In the world of station CPs, there are always these situations: the first one, this pair of CPs hit my pain point, and looking at them apart, they both agree very well with each other; the second one, because they are both my destiny, so I am very happy to see my destiny together; the third one, one of them is my destiny Fate, I don't like the other one, but since it is an official match, I still have to support it; the fourth one, I like both of them very much, but the CP is particularly eye-catching; the fifth one, I don't like either of them, but this CP is really cute, and I slowly fell in love with the character because I like the CP. And my mentality towards Feng Lian happens to belong to the fifth type. Feng Lian's co-stars, to put it in a simple and crude two-dimensional way, are the flirtation between the naturally stupid lady and the arrogant and handsome boy. Spread across the entire series, it is easy to see that they dislike each other and are constantly fighting each other, but they are also the ones who understand each other best. If they are brought together, the key point is Note the events after the disappearance of Wei Zhuang in the fourth part. The strangulation, poisoning, princess hug, bandaging, and questioning are all textbook tsundere. Even though Chi Lian is still the same Chi Lian who always talks about "Master Wei Zhuang", the ambiguity factor between the two people has reached a level that cannot be ignored. These two people are so similar. They have both experienced the transformation of life and nirvana. They both have a love where the moon shines on the ditch. The fire is red and the water is blue, and the tip of the needle is facing the wheat awn. These two people are so different. Chi Lian is too paranoid and slow, while Bai Feng is too cold and arrogant. They seem to be close but are the most distant. This is exactly what "Jian Jia" describes as "the road is long and difficult". I think this is the first time I have ever seen this kind of carefree and carefree relationship, except for Mr. And Mrs. Smith, and I am so fascinated by it. In the end, because I fell in love with their way of getting along, I began to discover the shining points of each of Feng Lian, and gradually developed a resonance. Chi Lian is no longer just the big-breasted bad woman, and Bai Feng is no longer the pretentious bad man. Their images in my mind have become three-dimensional, lovable, and pitiable. After that, I became so hungry that I started looking for fan food. I have to say this point of view here: fan creation is OOC. For fanart without plot, as long as the painting style is good, it is easy to be accepted and liked. But fan fiction is different. Even if the interference of the writing style is put aside, the text can also reveal the author's three views and most of his views on CP. Reading fan fiction itself is to intersect with the author's thinking. When you think of one place, you naturally regard the article as a treasure; you have different opinions. No matter how excellent the text is, it will still make you heartbroken when you read it. After laying the groundwork for so long, you must be smart enough to understand that I cannot evaluate this article from a truly objective perspective - although we are on the same team, there are significant differences in our views on CP and understanding of the characters. Many details may look good to others, but to me they are extremely OOC. Chi Lian wielding pink fists, Chi Lian crying, Bai Feng keen on killing by touching his head, Bai Feng who would tell the fact that he was in a state of confusion, Bai Feng who said the affectionate sayings of the domineering president such as "Shut up, woman" and "No one can take you away from me"... Outside the screen, I looked at Feng Lian who got Qiong Yao's script, and I couldn't calm down for a long time. There is also Wei Zhuang, who raises his shark teeth and laughs like a middle school boy, Shao Yu, who has thick eyebrows and a voice like a rough man painted in Hong Zhong's style, Tian Ming, who talks about literary principles... If it were written by a primary school student, I would probably go to the Lei Wen Tucao Station to hang people. The reason why I kept reading was not only because I wanted to know the ending, but also because the writing was really beautiful. "Jianjia" is a rare fanfic that combines an aesthetic style, a compact rhythm, smooth martial arts, and a wonderful battle of wits. It grasps the essence of the exquisite atmosphere of the original work, and highlights its own elegant temperament on this basis. The added settings about Nanjiang and Hangu are very interesting and imaginative. What is even more valuable is that although the article is intended to be romantic, it does not fall into the circle of small love and small love. The views on politics are accurate and unique. I especially like these two sentences: "People's minds are determined that no one wants to suffer another war. A gentleman's revenge is already too late in ten years, let alone twelve years." The writing is full of desolation and transparency. It is true that times create heroes, and Yu Xi can do nothing. The postscript says that you want to write a story about a princess who is trapped in darkness and unable to control the situation. Actually you did, and did a great job. Describing the entire background of the era of collapse, fission, and conflict of interests in a large space can further highlight the meager strength of the characters. Then this painful and contradictory princess came to life. Finally, let me talk a few more purely technical things. The biggest flaw of "Jianjia" is its lack of narrative ability. First of all, in the same chapter, the transition between different scenes and different time points was not paid attention to, and the connection was very random and substandard. Second, it cannot control multi-line narratives. This is also a problem with the switching of plot branches, with poor connectivity between them; sometimes even the development of one line seems fragmented and incoherent. Thirdly, it's good to add magical settings, but if you can't explain it clearly, it's better not to draw enough. Regarding the original setting of the "Butterfly" series, it is novel and gorgeous enough, but the description is very abstract, making people confused, and it has no significance for the advancement of the plot. Fourth, I don't know whether it's due to rushing work or some other reason, but this article is suspected of being unfinished. In the penultimate chapter, Chi Lian was still obsessed with finding Wei Zhuang. At the finale, he suddenly wrote a letter to express his feelings. A lot of plots were skipped in the middle, as if he was forcing candy on Feng Lian's party. I personally think that the details need to be edited out before I can live up to this feast. ——————————————Produced by Huzhu Pavilion——————————————
Ahhhhh! It was so hard to destroy the ghost! ! ! ! ! !
What's that? Beautiful Sister Shiyu's writing is really good. I am your loyal fan and hope to keep up the good work. Don't be proud. Don't be impatient. You will be the best. I will always support you. You understand.
Good, good... I hope the author can continue writing, I will keep following the article
So loving. By the way, you and Taozi are really not the same person?
It's so well written~ Fan Tong's inner vomiting is particularly well written, very characteristic of Fan Tong~ Keep up the good work! : D
I've popularized a lot of history, come on!
Great! I was very excited when I first read these paragraphs.
The beginning of a beautiful story, the tragedy is counting down
If I had to choose, I would choose the second one
Move out the bench and wait for the surprise. I hope it's not a shock →_→
I updated Shenma in the early morning. Sure enough, there is someone who saved the manuscript. QAQ
It really hurts to swallow this glass shard.
Come regularly to spread flowers, loyal fans, o(∩_∩)o haha. Come on, it looks good
I must torture the male protagonist to death from now on
"Sirius throwing thunder out one after another without stopping" I imagined the scene in my mind and felt inexplicably happy 23333
In the end, I lived a wonderful life with my card.
There's actually another update! I hope it won't be cheated, I don't expect it to be updated every day, at least I hope it won't be too long QWQ
Reading two different prostitution flash articles together... This feeling is not ordinary.
I have the urge to hang myself on a crooked tree. I want to laugh when I see this sentence~~
How can the little Lingling be so domineering now QAQ... What should I do, Mr. Xu, which little Lingling do you like?
Oh~delicious soup dumplings~
I discovered that powerful people are so powerful that they become perverts.
I want the entire pond to know that your homepage has been taken over by me! ! ! !
In the end, I lived a wonderful life with my card.
Come on, Dad, waiting for your update
Every time I read the update, I feel like I'm still unsatisfied