The other shore is like flowers and Manjushuahua;
Where is Diao Guying's home?
Dancing in the rivers and lakes, overturning in the morning and evening,
Immediately I sighed, "Don't miss the lotus flower,"
The mind is not yet settled, the body is suspended,
Unexpectedly, it's spring again.
There is no place to complain about Hua Fa.
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In fact, I am the person you know, covering my face... My vest is still Yao Niang, and I recently changed my name to Yao Gong... [Yuanmu]
Ahem...
Since, ahem, we meet acquaintances, even though we have already accepted it, let's spread some flowers.
Let me talk about some of my opinions on Yaya's writing. Oops, I saw the venomous tongue of the shenma diving girl earlier and thought it was a bit too much. Yaya's writing style is actually good, but I really don't want to see your first chapter. It's boring, right? Because of your first chapter, I haven't read your writing properly... [Shame on my face]
I think your problem is similar to mine. When I first started writing [hey, it was just two months ago, wasn't it?] People said that the writing was not bad, but the plot was off-kilter, or the character descriptions were a bit messy, or the writing style was unstable. These are all problems that newcomers have. Just keep writing and it will be fine. At least now I receive less bricks [actually, that is because there are fewer readers].
Yaya's attitude is very modest and very good, and she even added comments about being a diver. In fact, what I want to say is that you don't need to take those to heart. The writing is really good. As for the rest, if I write hundreds of thousands of words, it will be fine anyway. Come on.
Actually, I want to read an article about the tragic Arisawa-san.
In fact, I am the person you know, covering my face... My vest is still Yao Niang, and I recently changed my name to Yao Gong... [Yuanmu] Ahem... Since, ahem, we meet acquaintances, even though we have already accepted it, let's spread some flowers. Let me talk about some of my opinions on Yaya's writing. Oops, I saw the venomous tongue of the shenma diving girl earlier and thought it was a bit too much. Yaya's writing style is actually good, but I really don't want to see your first chapter. It's boring, right? Because of your first chapter, I haven't read your writing properly... [Shame on my face] I think your problem is similar to mine. When I first started writing [hey, it was just two months ago, wasn't it?] People said that the writing was not bad, but the plot was off-kilter, or the character descriptions were a bit messy, or the writing style was unstable. These are all problems that newcomers have. Just keep writing and it will be fine. At least now I receive less bricks [actually, that is because there are fewer readers]. Yaya's attitude is very modest and very good, and she even added comments about being a diver. In fact, what I want to say is that you don't need to take those to heart. The writing is really good. As for the rest, if I write hundreds of thousands of words, it will be fine anyway. Come on.
Actually, I want to read an article about the tragic Arisawa-san.