One day, I thought of Yi Shu's infatuation with Si, and I couldn't help but think about writing a few stories about the girls I like. I simplified the people and things around her, and looked at this experience, and put it in this modern world of luxury and luxury, what would be the ending like this?
The first one written is Yuanyang.
Intention:
Reader comments
My mother and brother will not be cleared later, right?
I watched it half a year ago and couldn't help but come back again. I like this article very much. The part about Chang Yangshan made me sink into it... Fortunately it is complete, otherwise it would be too sad~
This is simply plagiarism!! The last name has been changed, the character is a combination of Rong Jinxiu + Mingzhu, and even many plots are the same!!
It's so cool. This is the real cool article. It's so cool!
In fact, you can still come up with ideas and continue writing. The author should not cheat casually. It will damage your credibility.
Delivery man in red, please don't die... It's hard to imagine Shi En's precarious mental state when facing his death... Even ghosts are afraid of the content of imagination.
Very good, I like it very much.
The writing is well-written and well-received
I feel like there are a lot of settings that I didn't understand at the moment, but I will look at them when I have time. Go to sleep!
It is indeed a bit comfortable, but the plot is not compact enough in some places. It might be better to add some psychological descriptions. .
It feels weird, not very good
I wonder if the murderer would be scared when he dreams back at midnight?
55555555Who said writing in WORD will not be lost! ! ! ! Give me back 1,500 words! ! ! I carefully carved 1,500 words! ! ! My sweat! ! ! ! My hard work! ! ! ! Why am I memorizing it like this today~~~Even the OFFICE software can be closed due to abnormal errors! ! ! ! ! My writing~~~I cry and I wail~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bo Rong is Jia Lian, Li Xiaozheng is the weakened version of Sister Feng, Qianrong is "Xichun + Jia Zhen", Yi Rong is "Tan Chun + Yuanchun", Jia Rong is naturally Baoyu, Zeng Zhifang should be Xue Baochai, and Ju Wenyi is naturally Daiyu.
GOOD
It would be better if it could be expanded a bit
My mother and brother will not be cleared later, right?
I watched it half a year ago and couldn't help but come back again. I like this article very much. The part about Chang Yangshan made me sink into it... Fortunately it is complete, otherwise it would be too sad~
This is simply plagiarism!! The last name has been changed, the character is a combination of Rong Jinxiu + Mingzhu, and even many plots are the same!!
It's so cool. This is the real cool article. It's so cool!
In fact, you can still come up with ideas and continue writing. The author should not cheat casually. It will damage your credibility.
Delivery man in red, please don't die... It's hard to imagine Shi En's precarious mental state when facing his death... Even ghosts are afraid of the content of imagination.
Very good, I like it very much.
The writing is well-written and well-received
I feel like there are a lot of settings that I didn't understand at the moment, but I will look at them when I have time. Go to sleep!
It is indeed a bit comfortable, but the plot is not compact enough in some places. It might be better to add some psychological descriptions. .
It feels weird, not very good
I wonder if the murderer would be scared when he dreams back at midnight?
55555555Who said writing in WORD will not be lost! ! ! ! Give me back 1,500 words! ! ! I carefully carved 1,500 words! ! ! My sweat! ! ! ! My hard work! ! ! ! Why am I memorizing it like this today~~~Even the OFFICE software can be closed due to abnormal errors! ! ! ! ! My writing~~~I cry and I wail~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bo Rong is Jia Lian, Li Xiaozheng is the weakened version of Sister Feng, Qianrong is "Xichun + Jia Zhen", Yi Rong is "Tan Chun + Yuanchun", Jia Rong is naturally Baoyu, Zeng Zhifang should be Xue Baochai, and Ju Wenyi is naturally Daiyu.
GOOD It would be better if it could be expanded a bit