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The wrist artery should be called the radial artery in medical terms. Very well written

Please keep up the good work and update. I've been following this article for a long time.

Okay, I cried. As expected, parting is the saddest thing.

What's wrong with Liren... Okay, I admit that I went crazy and automatically jumped to the chapter updated yesterday after reading the first chapter... Come on, author! !

Hey, this author, I found that one of your serious problems is that your writing is very ordinary at the beginning, but it becomes more and more exciting as you go on. When I first read the first chapter, I felt so sleepy! Aha~! It was so boring, but after seeing so many of your comments, I forced myself to keep reading. The last few chapters were quite exciting! ! I suggest you revise your first few chapters! The beginning is so unappealing that it is difficult for readers to continue reading. Even if the subsequent chapters are wonderful, few people pay attention to it! "It turns out that happiness is so short-lived, and I flew to outer space on a rocket and can't come back." Especially this sentence is very exciting and I like it very much. It's so good! You are so talented! However, you also have some shortcomings, such as too much dialogue and little description, and the characters' dialogues are too trivial. Just like some readers said, it seems like an idol drama with an 8 o'clock stop! ! A little oily and a little greasy! Secondly, I think the novel you wrote lacks any foreshadowing. Just like the story you wrote about Yin Junshen falling in love with Yin Xuerai has no foreshadowing at all! So pale! Even if it's love at first sight, you still have to describe it carefully! It would be too soon for two people to get together like this! I think you may have never been in love, otherwise you wouldn't be so hasty! Then I suggest you read more romance novels, so that you can make up for your experiences! I feel that "Love is Just a Word" is very ordinary, even a bit boring, and the words it says are not like the dialogues in real life, it feels like a novel! If a person talks like the people in your novel every day, then I must be the first person to go crazy! Please be realistic and don't imagine too much. In that case, I might like it very much! In fact, I think the love in your novel is too unrealistic. Even if Yin Jun really likes Xue Ai, there should be some foreshadowing. Even if it is love at first sight, there should be some hints, so that readers will understand why it started. In this way, it will not be so strange. If not, it will be a bit anticlimactic!!!!! It feels like you were born just for composition. Only in formulaic compositions will you release your brilliance. In that world that only belongs to you, you are very dazzling, just like the lily you like, deeply occupying all the land and possessing everything to yourself. You are very domineering like that! He is worthy of the teacher's love and the admiration of his classmates. But you who write novels seem very ordinary, just like those people who don't like to watch Pao Mo dramas! So you have a lot to learn. Although I know this is your first time writing, do you know that we have high expectations for your articles. From the past to the present, your sensitivity to compositions and your high-scoring compositions every time have made me full of expectations for your novels, but I am still disappointed! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also, I also found that although the language in your novel is very romantic, it is very unrealistic and a bit too artistic, really! Moreover, the creation of the characters is a bit too idealistic. The characters are handsome and rich. If they are too perfect, it would seem very unrealistic! Another problem you have is that you don't distinguish between priorities! For example, Zong Zhengji is the protagonist, but he doesn't appear as much as Yi Xiaoxian, a supporting character! You are so good at deceiving readers! Also, in terms of character dialogue, I think you sometimes lose some of your domineering power! How domineering a man should be! Sometimes they look very masculine, sometimes they look very feminine! Some people think it's shameless to do something for just one thing! But after mentioning so many of your shortcomings, I still think it has potential! ! Finally, I hope you can write better! What's more, it should be auspicious! We should be weak! Come on! Let's work hard together! I hope you will also pay more attention to my works! Ibeliveyoucanfiy!

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