At the southern end of the capital, there is a lush Luozi Yinglin. Bright red flowers bloom all year round, and the small petals fall like snow. It is very sad and beautiful, but because it is located in a wild and secluded place, few people go there despite its beauty.
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I'm a Hyokutei, but I still cheer for the author
Yuqing no longer believes in love. After being injured, she became extreme and felt that she must hold on to the bread.
I'm starting to get a bit confused. I suggest that you don't write the protagonist in a very extreme way, for example, very handsome, very beautiful, very smart. That would be too vulgar and fake. It's better to be more realistic. Even if you really want to write it like that, just mention it in one or two sentences, and readers will know it. You don't have to spend a lot of space to describe these things. Every time you read a novel and see how rich, handsome, and smart the protagonist is, it feels fake.
Oh oh Dad X, you finally went to be a hero to save the beauty =U=
- - I just want to say let Wuchen eat Overlord... If you let Overlord attack, it will be really confusing... ORZ
Come on, I'm an Internet King fan
Not bad, keep up the hard work
Come on, my dear... I miss such a long time ago... Yudian is such a cute and tsundere Queen Bingshan Shou, is there any...
I'm a Hyokutei, but I still cheer for the author
Yuqing no longer believes in love. After being injured, she became extreme and felt that she must hold on to the bread.
I'm starting to get a bit confused. I suggest that you don't write the protagonist in a very extreme way, for example, very handsome, very beautiful, very smart. That would be too vulgar and fake. It's better to be more realistic. Even if you really want to write it like that, just mention it in one or two sentences, and readers will know it. You don't have to spend a lot of space to describe these things. Every time you read a novel and see how rich, handsome, and smart the protagonist is, it feels fake.
Oh oh Dad X, you finally went to be a hero to save the beauty =U=
- - I just want to say let Wuchen eat Overlord... If you let Overlord attack, it will be really confusing... ORZ
Come on, I'm an Internet King fan
Not bad, keep up the hard work
Come on, my dear... I miss such a long time ago... Yudian is such a cute and tsundere Queen Bingshan Shou, is there any...
Author, please work hard!!!
Is there any extra? Awesome! Great support
Hehe, can you join the new team tomorrow?